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| noname |
Posted
on 18-Mar-04 05:20 PM
Althogh the poem is expected to be published somewhere else, I couldn't resist myself from the temptation of posting here in sajha also ! Here it goes:
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| Gerox |
Posted
on 18-Mar-04 06:10 PM
Nice One!!! I wish I could write this kinda Poem.
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| aa-mat |
Posted
on 18-Mar-04 08:02 PM
.boosted and motivated my thinking of going back.
wonderful!!!
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| Nepe |
Posted
on 18-Mar-04 09:18 PM
A peerless, superlative piece of meaningful art. A masterpiece. I don't remember when did I see last time yati uchchha koti ko kavita.
You have put the whole of our contemporary history in a tiny time capsule without a single corrupted letter. Thousands years later, we will be reading our history in your poem in full.
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| M.P. |
Posted
on 18-Mar-04 11:23 PM
As one of my Nepali language teacher in high school would say, "kyaa mithaas, kyaa laya, kyaa dhun! Phillipines(sp?) ko pustakaari diun diun laagne. [Noname, tapaile ta kharaat kabitaa lekhnu bhayechhani]!*
I read the poem three times. I am going to read it loudly before I go to bed later this morning (after my roommates get up and go to class). :)
Bhawadiye,
"Tukuchaa aa ma talaai kabitaa banaaidinchhu" :)
M.P.
* My teacher's exact quote was: Thitaa, taile ta kharaant kabitaa dadkaaichhas ni!
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| Biswo |
Posted
on 18-Mar-04 11:42 PM
noname:
I am an occasional reader of Nepali poems. I can't assess the quality from literary pov, but I liked your poem. It has ability to produce memorable quotable quotes.
Sambhaabanaa haru unnati hoinan.
Banda Sambhabanaa haru chunauti hun.
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| noname |
Posted
on 19-Mar-04 04:14 AM
Thank you all for stopping by !
Madhupark and Garima downplayed all my early teen enthusiasm to write poems, and thanks to Sajha even after so many years I am still on board writing poems.
Gerox thanks!
aa-mat wish you a wonderful time back in Nepal.
Nepe, when I posted the poem, I never thought that I will get such encouraging words.
MP, my teacher would have said MULA KASKO CHORIS ;)
Biswo thanks for quoting those lines.
I could 'drag' Biswo to post something in poetry section, that is a feat on itself ! :)
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| Gokul |
Posted
on 19-Mar-04 04:38 AM
Nonameji,
Definitely a timeless piece.
However, what I find more interesting is that you have also explained a quantum paradox called "Schrodinger's cat" so well which talks about the collapse of wave function once we open the box of Sambhavanaharu. Why don't you show your poem to a Physics professor as well?
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 19-Mar-04 05:34 AM
Noname ji:
Beautifully expressed!
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| nsshrestha |
Posted
on 19-Mar-04 06:31 AM
Definitely very well written. Last poem I read this beautiful was Ishwor Ballav's "Uttargami Megh haru" that was in last century.
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| nsshrestha |
Posted
on 19-Mar-04 06:48 AM
One funny incident about Madhuparka/Garima. I was in Madhuparka's office and the editors were digging into the stack of poetry. "Tyo Kabita chhitto khojnus, PRADHANMANTRI ko call ayo".
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| noname |
Posted
on 19-Mar-04 04:44 PM
Gokul, regarding Schrodinger's cat, all I can say is I wish I never had met those SAMBHABANAS! It never occurred to me before that Schrodinger's cat is still making rounds!
Here is another paradox: If I do not accept that the poem is good enough, then I will be questioning the authority of so may poets and critiques (Which I cannot do, as my knowledge in poetry is limited!). If I do accept that the poem is good, then that will be an act of conceit (Which is also not good for a novice writer like me).
Sitara and Nshrestha, thank you very much!
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