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Nepe | Posted
on 01-Aug-03 05:55 PM
To you, Dilasha, for your grilling email.. |
noname | Posted
on 01-Aug-03 06:10 PM
Wah wah! Wah wah!! My best lines Aunsi ko aangan ma tara chhardaichhu malai dasne Jun taha taha napokha By the way, yo dah ma kaha lagera bisau binti biraha napokha, napokha ke parechha ni tyasto?! |
Nepe | Posted
on 03-Aug-03 02:32 PM
Thank you, Noname ji. Aba ta Wah wah paauna ra 'thank you' bhanna pani sochnu parne jasto chha. Cliché bhanidelan bhanne dar ! Anyway, that line is my favorite too. Makes me aghast every time I read. >ke parechha ni tyasto?! Well, let's leave some for Dilasha too. She might identify it. :) ********* I don't think my readers will have any difficulty to understand the lines. Nevertheless, I am giving the meaning of some words, just in case. baha = anguish gaha = tearful eye tahataha = a mimic word for the moonlight at an eerie night saha = affluence. Compare Anikal/sahakal daah = pang, ache |
Qallu | Posted
on 03-Aug-03 02:54 PM
Ramro cha Kabi ji. Cliché ta hoina Clique chain huna sakcha... heram aba. Dilasha le ke bhancha. Je hos, Dilasha ko email must have been very anguished that it inspired yasto outpouring. |
SITARA | Posted
on 03-Aug-03 03:12 PM
I am prepared to be hanged for cliche-ism: I do declare unabashedly, unashamedly and deliberately that I am one ardent fan of the Nepe Fanclub!!! If truth be damned, then, I am one damned dame!!! Nepe ji; aati ramro! |
Nepe | Posted
on 03-Aug-03 03:15 PM
Qallu ji, Thank you. Yes, I meant Clique. My bad. To be honest, this is a recycled ghazal. But it came handy for the moment. Sorry Dilasha, if you did not like that. |
vivid | Posted
on 03-Aug-03 03:27 PM
Nepe ji, Uta Gokul dai ko * to whom it may concern* padesi sarakauna alik kata kata apthyaro lagera Maunata mai purnata paune koshis gardai chu! :) |
Gunaraj | Posted
on 03-Aug-03 03:45 PM
hmm... dui tin din birai sajha ma pasda khisrikka parera pharkanu pareko chhaina |
storm | Posted
on 03-Aug-03 04:54 PM
WOWWWWWW |
Bhunte | Posted
on 03-Aug-03 06:54 PM
When it comes to Gajals, I am truely Nepe's fan....yo Gajal padhda ta kasko dil napaglera ta... Ani mero khet ma dhan ropain ko lagi khetalni ko kam chhaina ni hajur.. Bause ra Khetalni ko hilo chyapa chhyap sanga dohari gajal pani janechha ......ehehe |
Nepe | Posted
on 04-Aug-03 03:18 PM
Sitara, Salaam, hajur ko sadbhavana laai ! Vivid, Maunata hulaaki pani ho. Sandesh paayen hajur ko. Guna, It's been long since you shared your last sweet ghazal. Pratixarat chhu arko ghazal-putra ko janma-divas ko ! Storm, You came like a storm and went back like a storm. Thank you, hajur. Bhunte, Ropain ko kura chalyo, euta thap sher- although in a very different tone; a prayer in the tone of Jagajit Singh's 'Garaj baras pyasi dharti par..' Jhari, ghaam, pasinaa jatti deu, prabhu ! Mero khet-ma bas salaha napokha em/L , 3fd, kl;gf, hlQ b]p, k|e' d]/f] v]tdf a;\ ;nx gkf]v |
hangu lama | Posted
on 04-Aug-03 03:53 PM
nepe daju, what a beautiful Gazal....bravo! I have already made a tune for it. Do you mind if i record the gazal and post it here at sajha?? I think it has a good tune to it. |
vivid | Posted
on 04-Aug-03 04:15 PM
Nepe ji, Narisaunus hai, Jhari, ghaam, pasinaa aruko pokhiye saraha, Pravu Mero khetma saha, laha laha pokha! :) |
Nepe | Posted
on 04-Aug-03 04:51 PM
Vivid, Ke ko risaunu ni, teti ramro sher banaunu bhayo ! I really liked it. Kunai din purai ghazal lekhnu hunchha, if have not already, bhanne bishwas chha malaai. *********** Hangu Bhai, I have sent an email to you. |
vivid | Posted
on 04-Aug-03 04:55 PM
Nepe ji, Thanks! Can you just enlighten me what is the difference about Chok and haiku?? I just remembered Bikram Subba who was once a famous chok kabi. All I know is Chok is a very short version of poem. Waiting in earnest! |
Nepe | Posted
on 04-Aug-03 05:08 PM
Vivid, I ain't know nothing 'bout Chok. Sorry to disappoint you, but my reading is really really limited. :( |
Bhunte | Posted
on 04-Aug-03 05:11 PM
Nepe ji, we are awaiting Dilasa's reply to your beautifully crafted Gajal dedicated to her..... |
vivid | Posted
on 04-Aug-03 05:25 PM
Nepe ji, It was just to clear my confusions. Anyway, sahitya chetra ma hajur ko reading limited bhanne ho bhane hamro ta kokro mai bhannu parla jasto cha jhan, :(( |
Nepe | Posted
on 04-Aug-03 05:58 PM
Vivid, I am not lying. When Sajhaites discuss about the books they read, malaai ta laajai laagchha :( Bhunte ji, Tehi ta. Aba sochdai chhu, Qaashid ke aate aate, khat ekk aur likh rakhu mai janta hun woh kya likhenge jawab me qaashid= messenger |
vivid | Posted
on 04-Aug-03 06:16 PM
Nepe ji, So, autai dyang ko mula pare jastai chaun ni ta uso bhaye, ;-) Kitab ko nam ma course books bhanda para aru kehi padna ta ke najarpan garna pani muskeel afulai ta, :( Na rahar, na jangaar, na harsha, na bismat, Kewal akangkipanmai bitdo chha harek din ani sajh! Haus ta, Maunata ko avash lina tira lagnu paryo aba, :-) |
Nepe | Posted
on 04-Aug-03 09:07 PM
Finally, I got a mail. But, alas, it was a blank message ! Here is a small poem to that. Your Blank Message Not like a night With pre-positioned stars and moon Or with the sun borne sky Sometime at the noon It was rather like a dawning sky Fresh, clear, silent and quiet Or tranquil, relaxing, waiting For something- like a twilight A calm sea in the morning A gentle breeze can pass by any moment Or how about that garden Where bloomed only the scent It is a picture from an empty canvas Some reasons had to make it invisible Left to be touched by a dream's eye And to be hanged on a heart's isle It is a No with no 'No' It is a Yes with no 'Yes' It is an end without end It is a beginning without a preface It is a silence that has swallowed a thousand sounds! Beloved you ! I found a thousand words In your blank message All I had to do was To stop trying to apprehend and To be content with Just feeling them Thank you! |
Bhunte | Posted
on 05-Aug-03 12:08 AM
Nepe hajur, Badhai chha for the BLANK email....I would have also done same if I was her... If you read Nepali "dantya katha", in one story there is a Princess who cover her face with her shining dark long hair and rips the back of her 'Choli', which means the Princess is suggesting the Prince to come in using the back door after dark. In the same vein Dilasha's blank e-mail I interpret as her Dil (heart) is empty and there is enough space for you to accomodate only you. So fill up her Dil as much as u can writing full of sweet whispers... Best wishes Nepe hajur... |
Nepe | Posted
on 05-Aug-03 07:36 AM
Bhunte ji, Thank you for your interpretation. ************** Before it goes any further, I should make two disclaimers. First, I am not sure yet if it is Dilasha who sent me a blank message. Second, the poem was lifted from somewhere with the consent of the poet who happens to be my Jigari dost. I will welcome any comments, criticism and wah wah to the poem though, and I promise to pass them to the kabi ji himself. This should not lessen the fun. Because what's in name, No ? It's the story that matters. |
Nepe | Posted
on 06-Aug-03 04:01 PM
. |
Bhunte | Posted
on 06-Aug-03 04:24 PM
Nepe hajur, asaddhhe ramro chha hajur Dilasa, pls say something.... |
vivid | Posted
on 06-Aug-03 05:32 PM
Nepe ji, Hajur ko kabita padesi malai pani lekham lekham lagera try gareko matrai hai, Sunyatako akritee, Kelayera hernu, Maunatako bibechana, Ooth haruma padnu, Ghumto uthai nayanka, Andhyaroma chiyaunu, Mero bhav pokhiyechan, Kanika jhain tipnu, Pari banma dadelo go, Sable dekhne bho, Mero manko dadelo, Kasle dekhne ho? Astaundo tyo ghamko lali, Bidai mangdai gayo, Bholi puna aunchu bhani, Kasam khandai gayo! Dalisha ji, where art thou??? |
Dilasha | Posted
on 06-Aug-03 07:03 PM
My oh my I am just speechless!! Hmmm......what can I say except that I am again mesmerized by the simple yet beautiful words of Nepe ji who never ceases to enthrall us with his poetic gift and of course a bit dumfounded to know that my email was the source of inspiration(?) What was so grilling about it that beckoned you to dedicate such a special ghazal to me I wonder but without further feelings of bewilderment, let me tell you Nepe ji, that you ARE the essence of Sajhas existence and it is only through your ghazals that it continues to shine. Some people write when they are up some do when theyre down and out but you seem to BREATHE those very words that touch us so deeply that they transcend us to a different level of awareness. Such is the charisma, the true essence of the poet in you, which I pray never dies-our very own quintessential Ghalib that you are! ***** Nepe ji, (pardon my grammatical errors but I couldn't think of better words to express my gratitude) Adaa karti hoon shukriya is naadir tohfe ke liye Rakhoongi apne paas tanhaain mein saath paane ke liye woh alfaaz hain ya phulon ki khushboo? jaise koi dastaan inmein chupi hui ho jaise koi dar-e-yaar kahin khuli hui ho aap shayar hain ya saahir? Jo bhi ho khuda ki qasam aap Be nazir ho! |
Dilasha | Posted
on 06-Aug-03 07:13 PM
Btw, the last nepali ghazal (with the yellow background) is a classic! I even tried to sing it with my own tune. You must collaborate with a musician and I bet it'll make a memorable song. Wot say you nepe ji? |
hangu lama | Posted
on 06-Aug-03 09:37 PM
Nepe dai, I have sent you the link to your song that i recorded. Let me know what you think, so that we can feature the song here. I had fun working with the song. hangulama |
KaLaNkiStHan | Posted
on 06-Aug-03 10:30 PM
"Ek pal kati laamo huncha Tirkha boki paani kurda" hmmmm....! Nepe hazur!! Where is your right leg? Khuttai dhokna mann laagyo...! Chela sela banauna milcha bhane dakshina uthauna kaam garna jaanu paryo.... dishwashing... yesssssssss.! SUPERB (your kabita)!! I tried to hum it on my tune like dilasha did, and it works great in rupak taal... aru pani jaawosh. Okay, the only thing I know the most is that I want to KNOW. what are these kinds of gazals called, where the end part of the second line is identical..? I like these kind of stuffs the most... hazur.... do you have anything like this in your collection, where they have identicle piece through out the song...? cha bhane chaapum na tyasto piece haru. Don't worry about what it is called though. kinda like; Jindagi tune lahu le ke diya, kuch bhi nahi Tere daaman main mere waaste kyaa kuch bhi nahi Dil bhi ik jid pe ada hain kisi bachchae ki tarah ya to sab kuch hi ishe chaahiye ya kuch bhi nahi mere haathon ki chaaho to talaasi le le mere haathon main lakeeron ke siba kuch bhi nahi curious...;) |
Nepe | Posted
on 07-Aug-03 02:55 PM
Dilasha, Bahot der kardi huzur aate aate.. Thank you for showing up. That's all I had longed for. I don't know however can I reply to your generous compliments to the poet in me. I promise I will not let him die. He won't. His fate is sealed by Ghalib, hazaaroN KHwahishaiN 'eisee ke har KHwahish pe dam nikle bohot nikle mere armaaN lekin phir bhee kam nikle And thank you for that encouraging advice. I hope my songs get discovered ! ******************* Vivid, Sunyatako akritee...., maunata ko bibechana.. hmmm I did it in 'Your Blank Message', didn't I ? ***************** Hangu Bhai, You got my mail today, didn't you ? ***************** Kalanki, Aba ma bharkhar Bhunte ko ropaain sakera aaudaichhu, yo hilo godama ke ko dhogai bho ra ? Ae phuchche ki aa'n khoi ek lota pani le le ya'n bahira, haat-goda dhunu paryo. Sharaa'ta hamra kalanki babu pani aa'ran. Jhyaure-ghazal sikchhu bhanchhan. Khai tyo lisno muni'a khopaa'ta mero kaapi ko mutho ni nikalde. Musa le dhulo pitho po paadi sake ki ! Phuchche ki aama bhitrai baat: Hana kuni ke jati Sajhaa'n chhapya chhu bhantheu ta timra khai kat'yauda shilak ta. Ahile tesai le kaam chalaaye hunna ? Lau jaso bhanchhes budhi. La kalanki babu, euta ghazal bhattyauchhu sajha baatai nikalera, la sunam. |
Dilasha | Posted
on 07-Aug-03 05:34 PM
"Dair aaye par doorust aaye" ni nepe ji! pls keep on adding more to the khazana so that we all can be enriched. btw, here's a dedication to you-written by none other than GULZAR. qadam usii mo.D par jame hai.n nazar sameTe hue kha.Daa huu.N junuu.N ye majabuur kar rahaa hai palaT ke dekhuu.N Khudii ye kahatii hai mo.D mu.D jaa agarche ehasaas kah rahaa hai khule dariiche ke piichhe do aa.Nkhe.n jhaa.Nkatii hai.n abhii mere intazaar me.n vo bhii jaagatii hai kahii.n to us ke goshaa-e-dil me.n dard hogaa use ye zid hai ki mai.n pukaaruu.N mujhe taqaazaa hai vo bulaa le qadam usii mo.D par jame hai.n nazar samete hue kha.Daa huu.N |
Bhunte | Posted
on 07-Aug-03 06:24 PM
Nepe hajur, Feri pani hajur ko tarif nagari basna sakina naya gajal ko lagi....ma ta tyo mriga nayeni dekhera bhutukkai bhaye ni ammma ma....hajur calculus ko partial derivative ko hisab pani garna janne ekdam sipalu keto jasto lagyo... ani Ooha ta hajur ko tapasya dekhi prasanna bhayera prakat hunda ta malai tyo Sindur film ko Chankhe-Nakkali ko geet ko yad ayo malai--- "Anye baba aye, lauchhu maya pirat.... titi titi titi ti titi titi ti" .... ehehehe |
KaLaNkIsThAn | Posted
on 07-Aug-03 07:58 PM
Jhyaure Gazal Nepe jyu!! aaaaaaaaanch!!! "Tarkiyera bhagna khojhyo, jhanai chiplinchu sulululululu timro aankha ma" Tell me about those karke aankha haru ko bhakha, hazurrr!!! Ti aankha haru le nai malai baulaa banaune bho!! Gazal sochnu paryo pachi aafulai Jworo aaucha. Tution lina jaam bhane yo budheshkaal ma ke padhaai bho... Baru euta 'geet' ma pani chaapi dinchu... written by "Kaali Prasaad Rijal" Timra laagi jyaan dinchu, timi mero MANN KO RAJA Sangai jiune Sangai marne, hamro chokho chokho naata YO TA SAAB BHANNE KURA NA HO. Kaslai fursad huncha yahan kohi aruko baare sochne Aaafno khushi metaayera Kohi Aruko PEEER bokne Timilai dinchu fulai fula ma ta LINCHU KAADAI KAADA YO TA SAAB BHANNE KURA NA HO. Suru ma ta baacha baandhi aakash ko TARA JHARCHAN Jaba milcha mahal ani JHUPRO lai maya marchan Hamro Milan NISHWARTHA cha Jooni Jooni ko yo saatha YO TA SAAB BHANNE KURA NA HO. Phuchche ki aamai lai darshan hai hazurr.. ;) Dilasha, nice one ;) |
kaluram | Posted
on 07-Aug-03 09:14 PM
hey guys and gals listen musik and sleep like this !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ![]() |
Nepe | Posted
on 08-Aug-03 11:25 AM
Kalanki, Yo ta sab bhanne kura ho ! Really moved me. Very disturbing ! ************** Bhunte ji, Calculus ? Ascol ma ek semester padhiya thyo, kahile polera khaisakiyo ! ************** Kaluram ji, Funny and informative ! Hehehe..But, are you sure you wanted to post these pics in this thread ? ************* Dilasha, p;] ox lhb x} ls d}+ k'sf?+ d'´] tsfhf x} jf] a'nf n] sbd p;L df]8 k/ hd] x}+ gh/ ;d]6] x'P v8f x'+ ================================= k5\ofO{ /xg] ltdLnfO{ ;bf, 5' 5fof ´} d sf] eGg ;S5 < d]/f] l9kLdf h'g d"v{tf 5, Tof] dfof x}g sf] eGg ;S5 < |
Harris | Posted
on 08-Aug-03 12:05 PM
Ee Hajoor, Hamilai ta ramita chha... ramailo bha'chha.. asal asal sher-shayari, geet-ghazal padhna paiya chha.... hajoor haruko chain paryo ki kaso? "Pirati ko lamo dori kase jasto chha......" Good luck hajoor haru lai.. |
yoUnGbLooDZ | Posted
on 08-Aug-03 12:13 PM
udas cha yo maan timi tadha bhai diyeko le birano cha yo maan timi maan ko najik nabhayeko le socheko thiye timi aaunchau mero najik yo mero mayale tara bujhna sakenau mero yo mayalai timi nishturi le yb -- damn i ain't that baad.. (just made it mahself ahhahahaha) |
yoUnGbLooDZ | Posted
on 08-Aug-03 12:21 PM
timro aankha ma herera afno tasbir kojhdai chu ma timro aankha ma herera afno tasbir kojdai chu ma timro maya ma dubera afno jindagi kojdai chu ma paune le ta kojhera bhagwan pani pai sakyo paune le ta kojhera bhagwan pani pai sakyo tara timro aankha ma mero lagi maya kojda kojdai jindagi dubna lai skayo adab adab yb |
yoUnGbLooDZ | Posted
on 08-Aug-03 12:28 PM
chahanchu ma timro sath na chutos kahile pani chahanchu ma timro maya kahile na ruthos ma parti timro maya nai ta ho mero jiban ko sahara timro sahara nai ho mero jindagi ko bachne adhara.. nachutos kahile timro tyo sath yesari nai rahos hamro maya ra jiban sath sath adab adab yb ---- yesko topic chahi .. -HAMRO SATH- rakhe kasto hola |
yoUnGbLooDZ | Posted
on 09-Aug-03 10:28 AM
jado mahina ko nadi jastai sunsan ta cha yo jindagi tara na samjhinu ki aaundaina yo mero jindagi ma barkha ko jasto tyo bari timile chadi gayeu ta ke bho ra sayed hola yo sansar ma arko kunai timi bhanda sundar pari |
nepzkilla | Posted
on 10-Aug-03 07:30 AM
www.nephop.com if u want to listen to musik. jus.. go here... nephop.com peace out.. |