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| deep |
Posted
on 14-Apr-03 12:36 PM
"May I speak with Deep please", Taruni ko awaz.
Mutu ta suruma bhwakka gari halyo tyas pachhi chhit chhito bhwak-bhwak vhwak-bhwak&.ko taruni yo? I started to think, yo awaz Nepali maiyako jasto ta chhaina&who is it& Michelle? ..yeah may be&hijai matrai class ma number exchange garya&we are in the same group ni&Group B in Accounting 403 class. Michelle feri kasti bhane jun anga samjhyo tyasaile baulaha banaula jasto&Urbasi Surbasi Menaka Senaka ..ta thah chhaina&if Indra had seen Michelle he would dumped them all..
Nowadays, I don't know why but every time a taruni comes to my mind..tyai sanga bya garna man lagchha&but don't take the meaning of "bya" to a formal hai&please&"bya" bhanya aba&.tyai ta ho ni&do you know what I mean?
Byako kurole samjhe, Just a couple of years ago..Prateek.... Prateeke&kya ta maharajgunjko..pawaitra workshop nera ghar thyo ni&bau chahi bhumisudhar ko hakim thyo ni&tyasko dai ek taka TC ko dada rey&.TC huh? Ok, let me not float on that right now&TC &anyway&tyo Prateeke kathmandu University dhauda dhaudai met a girl rey. Atul, Prateekeko sathi, showed a girl to him and told him that Sushila..tyai keti kya ta&ta harip chhe&.her father is a sachib. Sachib? Oho! Sachib ko chhori napatyai ta bhayena&Shusila was a PK student. Prateeke used roam around PK the same way a bhakta moves around shiv mandir in Chausathhiswor mahadev in Pashupati.
Prateeke spent a lot of time and money on her&no&mujura ma jasto garera haina tara&emotional drain ko ta jhan kurai nagaram&gai gui nai ta ho chali halyo&suniyo prateeke's father was mad as hell when he knew what his kanchho nalayak was upto. Saaf gali garyo re bale & but prateeke was all into her&.after all sachib ko chhori ho&bale kasto kuro nabujhya&promotion sramotion pani ta milchha ni sachib samdhi bhe pachhi&.Malai sundari ghachhiki taruni swasni&ba lai promotion bhansar sansar tira&amalai chandrama jasti bwari&aru ke chahiho&kuro suro bujhnu chhaina ba ni&yattikai padkya chha&.prateeke le marboro ko dhwa New road ko (ranjana hall sangaiko) pan pasal bahira udaudai sochyo&.
Shuseela ko ghar ma ta prateeke never went&she used to ask him to drop her off few houses away and used to walk home farki farki prateeke lai muskaudai herdai&then she would vanish in a galli&"tyo galli ma kun chahi sachib basto re chha?" prateek thought. One day, he got into the galli slowly riding his bike& ghachhi ka gharharu tannai re chhan&he didn't know which one was Susila's but he thought "jun bhe ni hunchha&yattiko sasurali bhe pachhi ta&"
Ba went hysterical when he knew his khattam son Prateeke still hanging around with the same girl ignoring his repeated warnings. Asar ko aakas jasto garera Ba came down on Prateek that evening. Prateek finally revealed the secret "usko ba sachib chha". Thunder and rain stopped &Ba became a khahare&.then asked with a mild voice "ke sachib"? aba ke sachib ta&Prateeke also didn't know&.he gave his father a blank look&and said "khai.."&"ke ho thar?" Ba wanted to know the girl's last name&Prateeke did not know that either&he was not after her for her last name anyway&Ba ka aankha feri raata bhe&"ja niski" ba screamed at him&Prateeke stepped out of his father's room.
Bholipalta&Prateek was in a mission&to find out what Susila's last name is and usko ba ke sachib ho&.
Prateek went to maitidevi &tyai mandir agadiko pasalma churot kinera niskinalako thyo&he met Atul again&after a short hi hellow..Atul asked Prateek "how is going with Susila?" Romanchit Prateek smiled&.churot ko dhwa udayera&"la ali hatar chha hai" prateeke sat on his bike threw out his churos and as he was ready to put on the helmet&Atul asked with a low key smile&sachib ki chhori patyais hain ta&.kasaile sakya the na&."Bijayi prateeke garbaka bike ma basya Atule lai heryo ani danga bho&" holding the helmet in his left hand Prateeke aked Atul, "haina tyasko ba ke sachib huh?"
Atul pani uskai motorbike ma basi rathyo..he also put on the helmet and anuahr agadi ko seesa yasso kholera heryo Atul le lai and kicked the bike and "dhryaan" garera Atul spoke&tyasko ba&."Ghorletaar gam bikas samitiko sachib rey&uta kata purbako&la mu** moj gar" Atule left.
Ye&la kahako kuro kaha puge chha&.
"yeah, this is Deep, bhaneko ta tyo alachhina kina michelle hunthi&nam khai ke ho birse alachhinako &euta patrika ko gahaki banna bhandai thiyi ek mahina ko patrika nisulka rey....rakhde phone maile ta&"
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| isolated freak |
Posted
on 14-Apr-03 12:48 PM
hahahaahahahhaha
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| Aliciaa |
Posted
on 14-Apr-03 12:55 PM
cheu na tuppoko ko katha, real ho. still enjoyed reading it.hehe the last line???????????????????
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| deep |
Posted
on 14-Apr-03 01:05 PM
Aliciaa,
Dher tyasto chheu ra tuppo khojna patti nalagnu hai..jamana kharab chha...feri nakhojya cheez fela parla....ani chha ni sabai kuro chheu ra tuppo ma matrai pani ta hudaina ni....katti maal ko ta khas cheez bichtira hunchha ni.....
:)
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| PremPujari |
Posted
on 14-Apr-03 01:09 PM
aaaaaaaaaaaaaanch deep bro!!!
Laast hasaayo bro le. Deep chai master-story teller nai ho yaar.. ehh.. kata bata Michelle ko kura lyaaera, kura lai kathmandu puryaaera, feri michelle mai lyaaera sidhdyaidiyo.. hhahah... Enjoyed bro, enjoyed. Aru ni jaawosh!!!
(Yo michelle bhenne sappai jana yestai hunchan ki ke ho??/ ehh)
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| jira |
Posted
on 14-Apr-03 01:13 PM
Deep dai lai hanyo naramro sanga dyanng ki dyaang, mailey nilkanda lay gai dhapako samjhee saangawuchar ma.....hehehe...sanchii nilkanda ko ni tuppo ta khatra ni hai??
chewu ma haat lay samatera tuppo lay gai dhapawuney hahahahahahaha....tyo sachib lai ni dhapawunu parcha chhori milayena bhaney...dyaang ki dyaang..bhaag..S**A hya bata bhanera...
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| jira |
Posted
on 14-Apr-03 01:15 PM
deep dai lay bhanya dai lai bhayecha..thuikka
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| DHUMBASSE (DUMBASS) |
Posted
on 14-Apr-03 02:30 PM
hahahaha...la aba katha chahi ramro hune nai bho ni ..deep ko kura..
Ani tyo maiya khoi ta number exchange garya maiya, michelle..kya guff dine pheri..tyo sanga chahi number lina sath love, phone garna satha tragedy bha ho...ho jasto cha..tyai bhayera shushilako yaad aayoo..
pheri neelkanda le gai dhapaune re..neelknada ko jhyanga ma paseko football lina janda neelkanda bijheko ni..ajha tyo belama ta bhogate lai ball khelinthyo khali khutta..Pele bhai halincha ki bhanera..ajha tesmathi Gayaneshwarko Pele thiyo arko pheri..tyo jattiko matrai huna sakya bhe pani hunthyo ni teso ta....ani hariyo neelkandako jhyangma bhogate ko ball khojda khojdai neel kanda bijhera, Bijeheko kanda nikalana nasakera kheel palteko, ani rati rati sutnu agadi, Toriko telma bhijako sutlile salakundai aago sametle... tyo polne aago sametle kheel marnalai haneko khuttama.. Shiva! shiva! bhandai...aankha banda garera..ani hapta dina samma khwachyang khwachyang gardai school gayeko.......Tyo Neel kanda....samjhe ki shiva shiva bhana auncha...
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| oys_chill |
Posted
on 14-Apr-03 03:24 PM
Michelle ko kura garda......
aja ko lab yaad aayo........partner partner banera ek arkako "blood pressure" check garni re......malai k chaiyo .....mustering enough courage asked michelle "do u wanna work with me " she nodded with a smile.
sajha ko influence parera ho ki kya ho..malai ni achel, neprican neprican jasto acting garna maun lagcha........michelle le kasi pad mero pakhura ma......stethescope ni rakhi kaan ma ani sunna thali mero mutu ko dhadkaan.....
tara jatti gare ni chaal paaina..afu lai pressure le dukhera hairan...tara wasta garina...ek choti ta afno dhadkan afai le samet suni..tara michelle ta ghorri nai rahanche...daktarni sahebni nai jasti......she finally gave up.......
"what's up with yor beat" she inquired..
maile ni amrikan dhacha banara...."didn't you notice my heart skipped a beat " bhande lajja ta bhanera.....hanne goru ko ankha le jastai gari heri......
bichara ma! afno pressure ni afai napnu paryo.....u chai cell fone ma kura garna thali......tyasko bhustighre keta sanga :(
deep dai, thoroughly enjoyed it!
Oys
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| khimu |
Posted
on 14-Apr-03 07:08 PM
damn you deep!
i was getting interesting to read your kahani
last ma ayepachhi ta hwanga
last ma ali chakhlagdo parera chhadnu parne ni
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| deep |
Posted
on 14-Apr-03 08:17 PM
Khimu,
Yaar ma ta ek choti khangranga bhaye ni...."lasta ma ali chak lagdo parera chhadnu parne ni bhanda"....bhare ta "chakhlagdo" re chha...ali man thir bho....
Khimu lai ramro lagena? hatteri!
kam ma dhamadham lekhera post gardeko...ali ali galti ni bhe chha...feri tyo "Mane - tyai kya ta chhyaka - ko anuhar ma bifarko khat jasto jata tatai & ..& aayera kasto ....
Aru sathi ka sathai ra jiradai dhumbai (kalyanji anandaji satail ma lekhya ke...) lai ma feri lekhchhu ni...arko choti..
nindra lagyo ke....aau nindra devi aba... Michelle sisel khai kata tira nunu gari ra re chhe...bhagya chha bhandai ma doka ma dudh doyera na adne re chha....ke garnu...
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| rajunpl |
Posted
on 15-Apr-03 01:33 AM
suru suru ma testai huncha :) = frenzyness :)
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| Deep |
Posted
on 15-Apr-03 06:30 AM
Oys,
aba tyasto bed room eyes dherai lai dekhaudai hinna hunna hai....sappai sajha ma ho-halla bho ni aba bed room eyes ko....bed room eyes le ta tyahi bedroom ma aaune lai matrai ghayal garnu parne...kehi chhaina ..ajhai tyam chha....
PremPujari,
aba kathmandu lai ta kasari birsine...gori jati jammai tyahi makhan ka galli bhitra chalne cinema ka heroni jastai hun bhanne ghatak galat "impression" deko pani ta tya kathmandu le ho ni....natra ta hamlai ke tha...
Jiradai dhumba dai...tyo nilkadako jhyang ma cycle sikda ma pani naramro sanga latpatiyeko chhu....samjhiyo bhane ahile pani dukhla dukhla jasto hunchha tara dukhi chahi haldaina....tyo sano gauchar ko kura garda garda aba malai tyo padam bahadur khatri ko ghar agadi ko (tyai sano ganesh than sangaiko) bato bata larkharidai larkharidai..chhyassa gyaneswor ma niskera feri galli continue gardai dillibazar pugera daine modiyera...oralo orlera debre lagera tya sekuwa khana jan man lagyo putali sadak ma....
mu** man ko pani kehi bhar chhaina.....yehi man le garera ta ho ni maile dukh pako pani...ali ali fayida ni bha chha tyaso ta man le garera tara dherai choti dukh pani deko chha ke....
Rajunpl,
Khai kahile suru bhako ho tara anta chahi nahos jasto lagchha...aaja kam ma aamda ni pachadiko corvette ma michelle thiyi...churos tandai thi...tyo churos ko satta..baru..
bhaigo ...
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| czar |
Posted
on 15-Apr-03 06:56 PM
Fluid writing by Deep in the tradition of master storytellers. Much flavor added by comments from Jira, Dhumba and Oys. Bravo !
One wonders at the fount of your creativity that can take the mundane and convert it into memorable and intensely felt moments of childhood and youth.
All of your writing generate nostalgia in all passersby and make us ache for 'home.'
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| Deep |
Posted
on 16-Apr-03 05:48 AM
Czar,
Thanks. It's always a nice feeling to read few words of appreciation/criticism from a person whose writings I read with great interest.
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| Harris |
Posted
on 16-Apr-03 07:53 AM
Deep, nice twist. Enjoyed thoroughly.....
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| deep |
Posted
on 16-Apr-03 01:10 PM
Thanks, Harris.
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| MunnaMobile |
Posted
on 16-Apr-03 10:59 PM
Deep Bro..feri kahani mae twist..wonderful...I kinda liked the detour you made. It reminded me of R.K.Narayan's Malguddi Days. Keep it up.
Your Pungkha..MunnaMobile
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| Deep |
Posted
on 17-Apr-03 06:27 AM
MunnaMobile,
Dhannebad hai dhannebad....
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| sparsha |
Posted
on 17-Apr-03 11:16 AM
What's wrong with gau bikas samiti sachib? fake love does not deserve real heart. No?
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