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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 09-May-03 06:53 PM
Dont you know my reality
It haunts me everyday
Live in my shoes
Ill show you the day
Im a bitch they say
Like I am a whore
I would like to believe the compliment
But hey
I asked you to come
I asked for your hand
All you did was push it away
Cant you see
All I have is me
Looking though the hour glass
I saw my very dreadful past
I wished it away
Just like they wish me away
Im a curse they say
Im a witch
But they dont know what the hell is me
They know my face
They know my trace
They seen the lace
And maybe they are right
All I am is me
I am a whore, a witch, a bitch
Why should I be anything else
They know my face
They make a trace
Cant you see
My reality is sadness
So I hide behind a mask
-Neha :)
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| khimu |
Posted
on 09-May-03 07:02 PM
Cool poem Neha
life is sux right!
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| Gurl_Interrupted |
Posted
on 09-May-03 09:48 PM
"My reality is sadness
So I hide behind a mask" Hm... :-)! Perhaps, it's how they want...perhaps they prefer the mask to reality...Hm... Nice one sis! Isn't smiLe, perfect smiLe :-) handy to cover up all that is hurting inside?...to cover up, everything that is falling apart, which ONLY YOU can see...to cover up the fallen dreams...interrupted Journey & Life? I love it! :-)
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| Rekha |
Posted
on 09-May-03 11:05 PM
He he Damn Nehao, good job................
Try to write happy poems otherwise you'll make miss dorje cry, he he he
Oh ya practice nepali with SID so u don;t have to be confused in chat
u know what I mean.............
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 10-May-03 07:02 AM
I'll work on the happy poems Rezma.
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| khimu |
Posted
on 10-May-03 08:56 AM
all the time Aama ko samjhana
I went ot the party, Mom, i remembered what you said
you told me not to drink, Mom, so i drank soda insted. I
really felt proud inside, Mom, the way you said i would. I
didn,t drink and drive, Mom, even though the others said
I should
I know i did right thing,Mom, i know you are always right
now the party is ending, Mom as everyone is driving out of
sight. As i get into my car, Mom, i know i got home in one
piece. Because of the way you raised me, so responsible and sweet.
I started to drive away, Mom, but as i pulled out into the
road, the other car didn,t see me,Mom, and i hit me like
a load. As i lay thee on the pavement, Mom, i hear the
policemen say, the other guy is drunk,Mom, and now i'm
the one who will pay.
I', lying there dying, Mom. I wish you'd get here soon.
how could happen to me, MOm? My life just burst
like a balloon. There is blood all around me, Mom, And
most of it is mine.I hear the medic say, Mom, i'll die in a
short time.
I just wanted to tell you, Mom, i swear i didn,t drink. It
was the otheres, Mom. The otheres didn,t think.
He was probably at the same party as I. The only
difference is, he drank and i wil die.
Why do people drink,Mom? It can ruin your whole life.
I'm feeling sharp pains now. Pins just like a knife. The
guy who hit is walking, Mom, and i don,t think it's fair
i'm lying here dying and all he can do is stare.
Tell my sister not to cry, Mom. Tell Daddy to be brave.
Andwhen i go to heaven, Mom put "Daddy's boy" on my
grave someone should have told him,
Mom not to drink and drive. If only they had told him,
Mom, i would still be alive.
My breath is getting shorter, Mom. I'm becoming very
scared. Please don,t cry for me, Mom. When i needed
you, you were always there.I have one last question,
Mom, before i say goodbye. I didn,t drink and drive, so
why i the one to die.
JINDAGI EK SAFAR DILL SUHANA HAI
YEHA KAL KYA HOGA YEH KISNE JANA HAI.
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| islandbabe |
Posted
on 10-May-03 09:13 AM
all i have to say is that when things are bad remember it could be worse.....:0)
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 10-May-03 09:48 AM
That's a really good poem khimu. Love it.
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 10-May-03 09:49 AM
One day I decided to walk in someone else's shoes
That day I had nothing to lose
I said HI to every stranger walking by
I skipped stones and looked up at the sky
Went to the beach and played in the sand
Went to the park and leaned on the stand
Walked so free it made me glee
Counted ants that fled the ground
Looked at the way the sun meets the clouds
Sat with a kid and colored the street
Played in the gym and sank a ship
Into the ocean I took a dip
Than the sun started to set
It was time for me to jet
Found my self back in my own shoes
By that time I knew I would lose
I wanted her back
Wanted her life
I am in the dark
Instead of the park
I look at the dead not the sky
I play with the gun not the gym
The kid is gone and so is she
They all left
They all but me
-Neha
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| Darjeeling |
Posted
on 10-May-03 01:58 PM
khimbu,your life sucks hola not everyones, so don't blame on life :( nachna audaenna aggan tedo :(
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| Darjeeling |
Posted
on 10-May-03 01:59 PM
khimu rahecha sorry typo :(
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| lonely |
Posted
on 10-May-03 02:32 PM
Neha urff hidden_angel
Good poems. Ke ho yesto??? Feeling really sad??? Poor you???
Khimbu, a nice one...I liked it...
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| khimu |
Posted
on 10-May-03 09:33 PM
Hey darjeeling i didn,t say everybody 's life , i just said life is sux.
you know just take a 2 step out from your black car look outside see those people lying on the street homeless looking food in the garbage.
Theres lot thing to say but i don,t want to waist my time hai !
Thats why i called life is sux.
Thanks lonely and Angle
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| ebony_firefly |
Posted
on 11-May-03 09:28 AM
touching pathos
blac_
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 13-May-03 06:48 PM
No one wants to be lonely
In the world with a million race
Sorrounded by friends
Isolated by everyone around
They see me
I think
But hey they dont
I fit in everywhere
I can blend
I can be so discreet
Invisible
I wondered once
How can that be
Ran away from all
Watched the moon set
I wondered than
Why?
Why is it me
Everyone has problems
They have their pain
Still I wondered why its me
Pass it on
Skip me please
It is stupid I think
I go back home
Its time for a party
Skimpy dress
They watch me
They see me
Wish they had me
So I let them
To know Im wanted
I cry afterwards
And wonder whats flaunted
I've sold myself to the devil
Promises of belonging
More than a desire
Alone Ill die
With them Ill live
I might
I am the puppet
They pull the strings
Dance! Dance!
My lovely maiden
-Neha
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| Arnico |
Posted
on 14-May-03 04:56 AM
Beautiful poems... but so sad...
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 14-May-03 06:48 AM
Looking out the window still
I see the stars above the hill
I make a wish
I make it twice
Look at the stars they twinkle bright
I am so bedazzled by the light
It is so big
It is so vast
I wish I were not a lice
I think I pester even the mice
I drink their blood
I am the slut
I wonder at the stars above
How big is it
How many live
Than I know
Than I think
This life on earth is just a bleak
Moment of time
Moment of shame
Millions out there to outnumber us
They come in peace
They come to help
They take your pain
They take you life
After all what is life without the pain
But than how come I cannot stain
I go for it over and over
Reach it for the high not sober
The stars have failed me once again
I made a wish
I made it twice
Looked so bright I thought it might
I have nothing to lose
Nothing to gain
So I look up again and make a wish
I look again I make it twice
-Neha
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 14-May-03 06:54 AM
Hey Neha:
So young, so intelligent and yet, so despairing of life; my heart goes out to you. Your poems are in your heart BUT your Will is in YOUR mind, Your Life is in YOUR HANDS.... LIVE IT!
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| khimu |
Posted
on 14-May-03 11:54 AM
Hey Neha this one for ya!
you are kindly by nature
soft spoken and down to earth
can easily be approched
and to relate to at the sometime
you can be naughty and sensitive
both at one time
caring also to those
whom you dearly love
understanding to everything
at least that's what i see
can give in easily
when they tickle you deep within
damn Neha
sometimes you can be annoying
when you do not seem to know
that i only to hear you
so that sorrow would not show
mere words can not explain
how you are to .......
but most of all your sweetness means
what you are to ......
peace of mind
Love khimu
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| rajunpl |
Posted
on 14-May-03 01:39 PM
But,
thought are like stream of grim
try to give a mild beam
where were thou ?in a wind
cometh,but far in the desert
where were thou?in a happiness
cometh,i am righ here..
where were thou ?in a pleasure
cometh,i am yours
and thou illusion and thy profound trick
cometh,beware,before the holy risk
-saturated survivour
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 14-May-03 01:58 PM
hey khimu,
thanks for the poem it's beautiful.
and rajunpal not bad at all. kool poems
and thanks agian khimu i like your poems.
neha
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| a_sajhaite |
Posted
on 14-May-03 02:49 PM
Thats a good one for Neha....Khimu bro ....by the way ...what do u say Neha?
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 14-May-03 06:14 PM
Love me
Hold me
Kiss me please
Touch my heart
And dont let me die
Cross me over and now lets start
Held me so close
Made me warm
Made me glow
I held you high
Up in the sky
Gave you my love
I had to hurt you
You had to leave
Love had to die
See it through my eye
My love
Your are the lie
I always loved
I always lied
I tied you up and made you die
Slowly you slipped
I watched you go
Looked at your eye
Dream was not there
Only my love
I fought to keep your lovely dreams
You were the star
It was your dream
Killed you slowly
With my love
Brought you slowly from above
Lies I told you I cannot say
You were my love
That I killed
You were my dream
How far I pushed you
I can not know
The harm I caused
I do not know
Forgive me dear
As I kill the love
Kiss the one
The one with lies
Watch it die
Watch it lie
-Neha
To lost love:)
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 14-May-03 06:18 PM
Love me
Hold me
Kiss me please
Touch my heart
And dont let me die
Cross me over and now lets start
Held me so close
Made me warm
Made me glow
I held you high
Up in the sky
Gave you my love
I had to hurt you
You had to leave
Love had to die
See it through my eye
My love
Your are the lie
I always loved
I always lied
I tied you up and made you die
Slowly you slipped
I watched you go
Looked at your eye
Dream was not there
Only my love
I fought to keep your lovely dreams
You were the star
It was your dream
Killed you slowly
With my love
Brought you slowly from above
Lies I told you I cannot say
You were my love
That I killed
You were my dream
How far I pushed you
I can not know
The harm I caused
I do not know
Forgive me dear
As I kill the love
Kiss the one
The one with lies
Watch it die
Watch it lie
-Neha
To some lost love :)
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| khimu |
Posted
on 14-May-03 06:18 PM
you welcome.
i am glad you like it
hey a-sajhaite
I wrote, that how i feel about her you know
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| a_sajhaite |
Posted
on 14-May-03 09:11 PM
Hi Neha.....
Nice way of expressing your thoughts ....but why is it for a lost love...u will find many who will care for you .....forget the love that is lost.....thats gone.....look at the way ahead .....
a_sajhaite
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| a_sajhaite |
Posted
on 14-May-03 09:50 PM
My friend is a wonder
Missing him would be a disaster
If missing him would blacken stars
Then there wont be any night show in the sky
If missing him would make it rain
There will be seas over flowing all over
If missing him would make it hot
Then there would be desert all-around
If missing him would make it cold
There would be frozen land though out
If missing him would make noise silence
There wont be any sound around the earth
If my fullness is measured with out his presence
Then I would not be full
He is a part of myself
My friend,
Walks with me
Works with me
Speaks with me
Cries with me
More than all these he reads my heart
Thus it is said that
A FRIEND IS A
FELLOW READY IN EVERY NEED AND DEED
I LOVE MY FRIEND VERY MUCH
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| a_sajhaite |
Posted
on 14-May-03 10:25 PM
It was late at night when we said goodbye,
I knew right then my heart would cry
We were both in tears and it hurt us so,
We loved so much but we had to let go
A love so true, it felt so sweet,
My whole life was lived for us to meet
Ill always love you i did from the start,
And so never shall your memory part
You will always be the first who touched me so deep,
And in my heart i will always keep
thoughts of us together just you and me,
Holding each other for eternity
You are the one who taught me how to love and babe
You will always be my first love
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| le chef du nuit |
Posted
on 15-May-03 02:22 PM
hold it
squeeze it
never let it go
strangle its lifeblood
better that it dies
in your arms
at least you can say you tried
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 15-May-03 03:17 PM
Rushes in like the winter storm
Stays in my veins like its a dorm
Races now to reach my brain
As I pump more in my vein
Fall to the ground and see the clown
Its me they laugh at as I frown
I try to run but am down
They hold me here it is brown
If I cry will it help
The world is crushing me in two
Or call the cops and make it delp
They hurt me beat me too
High so fine
High so great
How can it be bad they say
They haven't yet seen the day
The day I die
The day I cry
Ill be a bird
Up in the sky
Ill be so free
Without the zee
Nothing will run around in my vein
Itll be me and not the bee
But till than it hurts
Till than it burns
A hole in the sky
A avalanche for my heart
-Neha
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| forget-me-not |
Posted
on 15-May-03 03:29 PM
Neha, ke ko aasu kabi ho ki kya ho....you keep on writing these damn good poems... it touched my heart ......now I am crying together with you...if you are still crying....if not me alone....poor me....
are you kind of busy these days or busy with your new search for love or busy with the found one re kya last ma???
pashupatinath le timmro icchya pura gardeun... Jai sajha...
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 15-May-03 07:31 PM
I dont care a little dream
It flows about like a stream
Catch it if you think you can
Touch it if you think you dare
Its not big
Just a little dream
Floating about in my little mind
It tells me to believe in the humankind
What is there to believe in
Lovely little dolls of twine
Ill embrace it
They are mine
They may be little
Not too big
But to the one that embraces it
Its the world
A reason to live
Calls my name
Draws me near
For the first time its not in shame
Lovely little dream of mine
Why are you just a doll of twine
Ill embrace you
You will fall apart
Still your my dream and life
-Neha
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| forget-me-not |
Posted
on 15-May-03 08:03 PM
Neha,
khia malai ta state of confusiion ma purayeko jasto lagyo??
whatever may god help you in what you want to do...
suffer, revenge, love, hate or whatever you think is right for you....
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| dangggg |
Posted
on 15-May-03 09:58 PM
Guys,
Have you seen parijat around?
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 16-May-03 02:49 PM
who r u looking for danggg?
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 16-May-03 10:13 PM
Drip drip drippity due
Rain snow wind hail
Soak my body
Soak my sole
Wash me clean and Ill be free
Take a moment and let me see
Their world is not my world
My world is blue
Ill envy them for what they have
Hate them for it too
Strip leap touch me sleep
Cut me deep and let it drip
Warm it flows
Dark it glows
To the earth so clean and leap
I have seen their faces glow
As clean as the winter snow
From afar I hoped Id get near
After all they have the things that are dear
Sip zip gulp it down
In my veins it runs around
Makes me happy
Makes me sappy
Till it leaves and makes me cold
I want them too
Ill steal them due
But how long till they leave
Cold is world
Death is mine
Gargarl sparkle marvel the due
Its taken over the stew
Need it need it
Cant you see
Need the due to make me free
Make me happy and make me see
Three is the number
So let it be.
-Neha
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 18-May-03 07:00 AM
If you could live for ever
Would you
Would you live the life you are living
Would you change it
Is eternity enough for you to make up your mind
To let us know what is kind
Change your mind about your life
Change it into a striking knife
Cut it out
Rearrange it
Live it like you have an eternity to lose
Live not on the edge but in the fear
If you mess up
Its for ever
Haunting your mind
Killing your life
Some wishers come
Some wishers go
They all wish
To wish for a wish
Come close
Take a while and remember
You cannot live it
It lives you
-Neha
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| jellybeans |
Posted
on 18-May-03 09:20 AM
Damn.. sista!
so much talent with such a sweet personality!(perfect combination!) u are indeed a "hidden angel".. lo0o0ve ur poems!!*muaaaaaaahzz* sis.. keep posting!
****hugz&kissez****
---[J]elly[B]eans
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| honeybuzz |
Posted
on 18-May-03 08:35 PM
Hidden_angel if u don't mind are u really Neha? I mean your name
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 19-May-03 08:22 AM
Yes honey buzz. I am Neha. Hidden_angel=Neha.
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| honeybuzz |
Posted
on 19-May-03 10:47 AM
Really even my name is Neha too.
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| yOuNgBlOoDz |
Posted
on 19-May-03 10:54 AM
hey lukeko_pari
..... love them poems.. aba i ma try to write sum as well..
thank you fo the inspiration
yb
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| a_sajhaite |
Posted
on 19-May-03 02:21 PM
Hi neha........it seems u have a huge collection of poems ........thats really great ....please go on ....we luv your poems ......
HAve u made all these poems by yourself.....coz these r really touching ......just curious to know !
Have a great time
-a_sajhaite
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| Devil's advocate |
Posted
on 19-May-03 02:49 PM
Grant me the serenity to accept the things i cannot change
the courage to change things i cannot accept
and the wisdom to hide the the body of the ppl i had
to kill today bcoz they pissed me off
And also help me to be careful of the toes i step on today
as they may be connected to the ass that i may have to
kiss tommorow
Help me always give 100% at work
12% on monday
23% on tuesday
40% on wednesday
20% on thursday
5% on fridays
And help me to remember.....
when i am havin a really bad day,
and it seems that ppl are tryin to piss me off
that it takes 42 muscles to frown and
only 4 to extend my middle finger
and tell them to bite me.
P.S. Thamel tira plastic tipdai hinda bato ma bheteko. ra.yo kabita ma hami khate haru ko maan ko kura lekheko cha ra this goes out to all khates around the world.From maha khatey to all u khateys.
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 19-May-03 02:59 PM
It's kool HOney buzz that your name is neha too.
Thanks a_sajhaite i am working on more poems.
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 20-May-03 06:27 PM
Darkness comes
With the sunset
Over the horizon
Colors fade
Know the life
When the sun is shining
Know it when
Its dead and drowning
Saw my life
The rosy cheeks
Saw it die
Drained with leaks
Lived in happiness
Ignorance is bliss
Saw the hurt
That every one miss
Happy families
Watched them play
Saw it die
They fade away
Loved my life
I lived my own
Killed it die
Threw a stone
-Neha
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 27-May-03 03:43 PM
Lies of the world
Look, lets see.
We live to be
What we want to become,
Lies
We live for a dream never fulfilled.
We live to find
Love so true,
Lies
We live to be safe to read a book,
Faerie tales.
We live to tell
The story of the world,
Lies
We live to live our life divine.
We live for our
Life so great,
Lies
We live for we are afraid to die.
Some people live,
Some people die,
Some see the sunrise,
Others the sun set.
Laugher of children,
Cries of the cursed,
Thats our world.
Happy,
Sad,
Golden,
Trashed,
Our little happy town
Full of lies,
Full of cries.
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 28-May-03 02:34 PM
Pour a puddle of blood
Kill and shed a tear
Live for me
Kill for me
Die for me love
Stab me in my heart
Let me die sad
Rip out with one blow
Put me not together
But apart from all
Ill die alone
Silly little mind
Thought someone cared
Wanted to be wanted
Fell to the ground
Saw the devastating reality
At least do me one favor
Kill me alone
Away from the hate
Away from the love.
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 29-May-03 08:58 AM
Just a question is anyone still visiting the poem thing. If not I'm going to stop posting.
Neha:)
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| khimu |
Posted
on 29-May-03 09:20 AM
hey Neha don,t stop keep writing
Yeah! i do read your every peom i love it Neha
damn Neha your brain is full of f*cking interesting poem
wish i could read your mind
peace of mind
khimu
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 31-May-03 07:55 PM
To the graduates that will leave and I may or may not meet again. But where every ya'll go I'll be there for you when you need. Congrats and good luck ya'll. My luv to ya'll for ever.
Journey
To where the dreams may lead
Plant your own little seed
We will follow if you wish
Or just stay in the shadow and not miss
Where the next volyage will be
Sleep and dream if you please and see
Well be ther to guide you along
As silent as the night where we belong
Catch you when your out of sight
To the world it just might
Throw a bit of dirt your way
But we will be there as not to stray
Dream a little
Wish a little
Burn the caldel bright
Show the light in the dark
Cuz we all get lost in the park
Some wont make it through
But us we will
We are the master after all.
So dream a little
Wish a little
Stars are bright
So it just might
Come true for you and for us
The world will see
Someday
Journey.
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| khimu |
Posted
on 31-May-03 08:19 PM
Neha neha neha you are the one f*cking briliant girl
Will you miss when i'm gone?
or will you keep living your life
just like nothing ever occurred?
why can't i see today how you will feel tomorrow?
will you miss me?
will be just a bad memory of the past,
A freak like you who could't take it any longer?
or will you remember me with joy in the soul?
i'm sure gonna miss you girl.
in this life and all the others that will comw,
I sure can't hide my feelings for you,
Even though it hurts like nothing else.
who cares anyway, you
please show me what you feel for me;
do it before i disappear in this life.
i am almost gone now,
soon i.ll be gone forever
but then you might see what i felt.
but it will be to late,
since i won't be there anymore.
you were the dream of my life,but that wasn't realu true
it showed up to be something else;
you were not like all the others.
you were considered a freak
but this didn't matter to me.
i still loved you like nothing else in this world.
it was so strange that i couldn't forget you
perhaps i should try, but it won't work.
i've tried so many times;
but it doesn't matter, i can't forget you at all.
Believe me, i'm not lying to you.
peace of mind
khimu
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 01-Jun-03 12:53 PM
Will I be remembered
By you
Will you think of me in the bad times
Will you remember when we stole the chimes
Laughing like we had no end
Crying when ones life was bent
Clinging like the world would end
If you let go or me
Ill think of you when I breath
Ill remember you when I close my eyes
How will I be remembered by others
Will I be the quite one
Or the one with the little swan
Forgotten when the bell was rung
Remembered when they were strung
Will you try to block me out
Curse me and than roam about
All these thoughts make no sense
Ill remember
So will you
I worry though that youll be gone
Never to be seen by your eyes
Forgetting your warm embrace
How you made me feel
Always wanted
Always taunted
Ill curse you and wish you close
You wont know what you were
To me
You were the world to be
Remember me
I cannot die not without the remembrance
I cant be the dream
But remember me as a stream.
-Neha
"I wasn't any thing special. I never did anything that no one had done before. I never was the golden girl...but after all don't we all want the same thing. I might not be that one that achived the gold medel. But I wan't bad either, remember me always and maybe someday, I'll be back."
-Remember Me
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| samana1 |
Posted
on 01-Jun-03 04:07 PM
Here it goes
"The fact u cant deny"
how u see u know u believe
an effusiveness controlling the bond
u and ur dignity deep inside u
the abilty u possess to entice the sorroundings
a pouch u know when filled with desires douche
u may never know when it mouch
shhhh! u make urself quiet sometimes
pretending u r innocent but never u know
u r a big liar....uttering the inevitabilty
yea...judging urself rejoicing over triumph
U obsess being as only the one
a victim of the misfortune,
but see the world with the vision u behold
then u will realize u r the only one
empowerd with the facts
that u r blessed with FORTUNE
see u r engulfed with selfish passion
u know u better know
its the fact u cant deny
afterall u are so-called human being
hmm.. k bhannu, khai lekhdai gaye k lekhe k thaha nai bhayena...no offense!...
samana
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 01-Jun-03 04:48 PM
Hey samana,
nice poem and no offence taken. Poem is just a reflection of my feeling that i need to get out. I'm not saying i'm the only one with problems. Any one is welcome to the same world as me. I am happy to be alive and am better of than some. But still it is life and like all it is filled with problems. I don't deny that others don't have them. And nice poem once again.
Neha
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| samana1 |
Posted
on 01-Jun-03 04:56 PM
neha
hehehe! actually, this poem is for everyone....i m not trying to point out u...Its just what i think and ofcourse its the reflection of one's feelings ni..poem bhanya tyastai hoo...kya kashaile bujhchann kashaile bujhdainan.. "bujhnelai sirkhanda nabujhne lai khurpa ko bid" launa ukhan pani mero mukhmai aairakhya uhile mahendra mala ma padheko thiyee , tara it depends on how people perceive ni and they have their own views
samana
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 01-Jun-03 05:25 PM
kool, it's all good samana.
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| khimu |
Posted
on 01-Jun-03 05:47 PM
thats was cool ukhan samana
bhanna pani kya bhandiye ko bhannya
peace of mind
khimu
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| Samana! |
Posted
on 03-Jun-03 02:45 PM
khimu
ukhan ta aaucha tara k garnu kahile kahi adkinchu ukhan tukka ma...ani artha na byartha ko huna pughcha
thanks anyways!
samana
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 04-Jun-03 01:51 PM
I wanted it so bad
It made me very sad
When I saw it with others
While I have non and no one bothers
I could snatch it away
Burn up my entire day
Or wait for it alone
And hope that day comes soon
Laugh at me some more
Make a bruise and leave it sore
Ill still look for it
Any where the sun is lit
On my quest a sad day
But you are happy they say
Wont let them know
Hide myself and dont show
Or maybe its them that hide
Anyway from me into the side
Let me think as I frown
Choke on my blood and drown
No one cares
No one shares
Ill be here still
Looking for love
My own little turtledove.
-Neha
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| oys_chill |
Posted
on 04-Jun-03 02:01 PM
hidden angel!
i have a suggestion..instead of repeating on th same thread, why don't you start a new thread for each poem :) makes it more userfriendly!
Oys
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| caliguy1 |
Posted
on 04-Jun-03 02:06 PM
Hidden Angel
How about publishing a book.. :)
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 05-Jun-03 06:39 AM
Somethign to consider ain't it caliguy. :)
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| yoUnGbLooDZ |
Posted
on 05-Jun-03 11:43 AM
I hate to think of the day that gives me pain at night
But I still recall the Sun that used to rain at night.
Not only have but live all your dreams dear 'Friend'
Did Kekule not observe the snakes in chain at night?
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| yoUnGbLooDZ |
Posted
on 05-Jun-03 11:57 AM
its not a poem.. but sum words :=)
Beloved, your laughter is fluid and soft.
When I heard it, my love, I drank up all the laughter.
Keep laughing, keep laughing! May your blushes of modesty continue to bloom.
May dusk and dawn continue to meet where your hair slides across your nape.
Keep laughing, keep laughing! May your blushes of modesty continue to bloom.
May dusk and dawn continue to meet where your hair slides across your nape.
May your perfumed laughter continue to bloom.
When you dress in yellow sunshine, look, don't go into the garden!
All the bees will harass you; don't go out amidst the flowers!
Laugh again for me, softly;
give me another beautiful laugh.
Lying on the lawn like freshly fallen leaves,
you are seven shades of spring, all rolled up in one fashion:
the rain, the clouds, it's all from you.
Keep laughing, season to season;
keep laughing softly.
Beloved, your laughter is fluid and soft.
Hearing it, my love, I drank up all your laughter.
Come wander sometime with me through the blue sky.
If we meet a cloud, we'll be rained back to earth.
Your earring sways:
somewhere night falls, glittering;
somewhere the evening blooms.
I'll pass this black night in the refuge of your hair.
Some brilliant thought passes through your black, black eyes.
In exchange for one laugh of yours, take this earth of mine;
take my sky.
Beloved, your laughter is fluid and soft.
Hearing it, my love, I drank up all your laughter.
If snow fell in the valley, wrapping and enclosing everything,
if snow fell in the valley, and your laughter rang out,
the wind would blow and bring forth smoke:
warm, warm, bright smoke,
soft, soft, white smoke.
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 05-Jun-03 01:18 PM
Intentions
Once upon a midnight sky
there was a girl about to die.
Every time she went to write
she filled her book with lies that bite.
At night she slept with cover tight
so they would not come into the light.
Monsters that laughed and made her cry
tucked in behind the covers of sky.
Every time they laughed they broke her a bit
and she died in her own eyes that lit.
She slipped and fell to be that shadow in the light.
it never hurt and its life didnt bite.
Every time she tried to sooth herself
she only cut in deeper inside her little elf.
She said Say hi, say hi to me.
but, they just let her be.
At sports he was always the last
and she forced the tears out with a blast.
One night she went into her room
where finally there waited doom.
That night all alone she died.
She had her books to the side
Telling the world about how she lied.
Cry as she may, Cry as she might, they
still only laugh
Not I Not I.
-Neha
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| yoUnGbLooDZ |
Posted
on 05-Jun-03 05:26 PM
aba yi sabai poem ma copy garera.. euta book banauchu..
ani kuchin khanche hidden angel le
hehehehehe
YB
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| khimu |
Posted
on 05-Jun-03 05:39 PM
hey young
Neha didn,t speak Nepali.
by the way did you see her pic?I
i saw many gurls pic in sajha but "she is the one"
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 05-Jun-03 06:25 PM
If my being as torn apart
than I would say good bye and depart
There would be nothing left inside
yet I am pulled from every side
Ripped in half over and over
I want to jump off the stars while sober
To the ground to break my fall
end it all, the push, the pull, no more do I have to stall
The frustrations of being is too much to bare
like the reflections on the mirror that stare
No one can help or hider me now
no one can hold me back or bow
Too long, too far
waited
Freedom.
-Neha
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| khimu |
Posted
on 05-Jun-03 07:14 PM
I saw he first
in the words
she wrote
in the word
she spoke
so many smiles
with her poems
so part apart
but close enough
that she touched my heart
finally i saw her
but..................
Now i'm alone
I sit here waiting, wayching, listening, laughing,
FEELING...the splace of tears who, somehow,
found her way from outside to in;
SMILLING... thoughts of her lingers my mind..
what she says and how she does the thing she does.
WONDERING... where she is and what she is thinking,
TALKING...to myself and to whoever feels he should listen in;
DREAMING..of a time when life was young;
DANCING... in my heart, of course, happy as can be;
HOIPING.. to end my search.... right here.
peace of mind
khimu
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| Trikal |
Posted
on 05-Jun-03 11:03 PM
When one lacks discrimination
And his mind is undisciplined, the senses
Run hither and thither like wild horses.
But they obey the rein like trained horses
When one has discrimination and has made
The mind one-pointed. Those who lack
Discrimination, with little control
Over their thoughts and far from pure,
Reach not the pure state of immortality
But wander from death to death; but those
Who have discrimination, with a still mind
And a pure heart, reach journey's end,
Never again to fall into the jaws of death.
With a discriminating intellect
As charioteer and a trained mind as reins,
They attain the supreme goal of life
To be united with the Lord of Love.
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| eminem8 |
Posted
on 08-Jun-03 03:37 PM
Hats Off to you, Lady.
Read almost all of your peoms, out loud too...............
the last time i'd felt like that was probably when i read 'little stars' for the first time.......
(Hell, I even had 'Little Scooby' with me)
Lies,
We live for we are afraid to die
.......................................................
end it all, the push, the pull, no more do I have to stall
The frustrations of being is too much to bare
.................Just amazing strength in words, i dont know, maybe if we go back to WordsWorth, he could maybe have put it any better...........
Looking forward to reading more of your work soon..........
Till then,
Shady
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 08-Jun-03 06:19 PM
Hate of humanity was never more clear
Destruction of being was always here
One crash two crash three than four
Once by one men and women like confetti fall to the ground
Screams and chills
Like wild fire spread
Dust is blown not the hope
While all seems broken dreams and hopes
A light is shown but is blocked by ropes
Weeping and wailing they seem to say
Help me lord are you not hear today
Only dust and destruction clear
Frantic to leave but always a prayer
Help you
Help me
All will be together not afraid of the death thats clear and near
Collapse of the tall squashes the small
Like ants they run to find a place
No where is it quiet
The word has spread
It is here it is here
Crying and praying for people whose near
Death and departure is all here
Once the big is now the dust
The plague that fills the lungs.
-Neha
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| yOuNgBlOoDz |
Posted
on 08-Jun-03 06:49 PM
hey hidden angel.. where in colorado
yb
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| caliguy1 |
Posted
on 08-Jun-03 07:03 PM
hey Neha.. You are cute.. You got curly hair.. and I got too :)
lets make a deal here I will publish book on your poems .. You finance me in publishing.. income is mine.. famous and respect your ;)
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 08-Jun-03 07:19 PM
Young: i'm from boulder colorado
caliguy: lol like i have that much money right he he if i did i would publish something
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| KurLey |
Posted
on 09-Jun-03 12:00 PM
Half Moon at Midnight
I saw you leave
I felt it deep within
The coils thats growing
I leap and falter
A lame Tarzan looking for his Jane
I saw you leave
Chaos in ripples
Swimming the tsunami
I let the sharks eat me
just to feel you
Its been half the time
I am in the crescent of void
That void I look for in
Your scent
Your voices in my head
You can say, I am the
Half moon at midnight .
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 09-Jun-03 12:04 PM
Today she came and woke me up
With angry words she filled my ears
Left me crying on my bed
She said to me I need no friends
No person at all
She is afraid people will talk
She would rather that they would stalk
She says to me she brought me here
She can easily take me back
With suspension she looks at me
Eyes like crows to burn me up
I held strong until she left
Held my ground in every way
But then after I broke
Too much for me my sole to take
I have been pushed too far for my sake
I dont know what to do or think
My eyes are dry and over worked
I want to rest go back to earth
When you mix two worlds this is what you get
One that hates and one that hurts
I have had my share now
I want peace and not the bow
Dont bother me or touch me dear
For I am afraid now of threats near
Attack dogs tied to my fence
Looking like I make no sense
I came alone
Ill leave alone
I was bound I always was
I can see the cliff
It calls my name
Jump it says
It calls my name
-Neha
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| GurL_Interrupted |
Posted
on 09-Jun-03 12:12 PM
Nice!! Guys!! Keep on pouring out ur poetic SouL. KooL!! :-)!
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| yOuNgBlOoDz |
Posted
on 09-Jun-03 12:13 PM
malai chadera yeta aayeko GI
yb
hehehe
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| Arnico |
Posted
on 09-Jun-03 12:26 PM
Neha, don't jump.... please!!!
There is more to the top of a cliff... sit down and enjoy the view...
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| kiddo |
Posted
on 09-Jun-03 12:54 PM
Poem chai padhnai bhya haina, tara hidden_angel ko photo chai mannai parchha.
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| KurLey |
Posted
on 09-Jun-03 01:00 PM
Dignity
Dignity that saves who have
In solitude a knife to carve
Your hold in things far and near
That oozes you from everywhere
Lames strength in a mere cane
You have your reasons
And Ideals
You do not here come alone,
You come with blessed love (my dear),
You die not alone either, but
With dignity that keeps you tethered
At (their) expense, there can be no fence
Its the humanity you should leap
Take no heed in this little stump
You neither are some chewed up Gum.
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| Rekha |
Posted
on 10-Jun-03 10:49 AM
Neha u ain't jumping are you? Hopefully not, if you are then can I have all your art work and picture of FRODO. If you want to jump then I can drive you to FlagStaff by our house. he he he. You know I love you gurl
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 10-Jun-03 01:37 PM
Ive been asleep for so many hours
Isnt it about time for those showers
It is so cold but I feel the flowers
they cry and I being shy
Dont move or feel their pain
they say they found a bottle
They seemed a little startled
Rushing around in my empty room
They zoom in and out into my gloom
For once I got their attention
Bags rustling, and sirens bursting
It is not that I am rusting
I am the queen for this hour
Flowers floating in my showers
It is getting so cold, as I get more old
From this world brave
I save myself
I remember that you buried me in my grave.
-Neha
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 10-Jun-03 05:26 PM
This is a short one but it's not too bad.
In the house of sorrows and pain
Where life was just a stain
There was a girl wating for you
She looked up at the ashes blue
The misery was before her lain
She counted away the hours and knew
No one is comming to save her.
-Neha
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| Trikal |
Posted
on 10-Jun-03 10:15 PM
No "I,"
No "mine."
He knows there is nothing.
All his inner desires have melted away.
Whatever he does,
He does nothing.
His mind has stopped working!
It has simply melted away...
And with it,
Dreams and delusions and dullness.
And for what he has become,
There is no name.
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 11-Jun-03 08:15 PM
The sun went down
When I sat at town
Looked so sad
It made me mad
Reminds me of things inside
Stored and stacked up high
Am I ready to give it up and blow
Or wait till its too much to flow
Tell me an Angel will come
For me as they have for others
I cant be my own Angel
I can only be one for others
But everyone just lets me down
I look at them and their frown
Ill smile and lie
Not letting them die
I alone will die I think sometimes
Give me an Angel ring a chime
Ill die alone suffocated
Or am I baited
Give me to the fish
Ill except them in bliss
Chew me up inside
Ill make myself happy with lies
Curse they day the sun went down
In my life it never came back
Hid from me as it always does
I will not live for this or the sun.
-Neha
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 11-Jun-03 08:25 PM
Sorry
That is what I need to say
Forget seeing another day
Loved at least a moment when I lay
Sorry
Ill leave without you
Live is all I can tell you
Maybe someday Ill find you
Sorry
I cant stay no more
Its just that they have opened the door
Let me now fly and sore
Sorry
I couldnt see it all
World was too big not to bother
I stood alone holding the ball
Sorry
I didnt let you know
Tied me up like a bow
Couldnt keep it together or sew
Sorry
For I didnt tell you
How much a bundle can hail you
Itll make you believe you can handle it
Sorry
I never saw you eyes lit
When I came close and told you to sit
Ill never be able to greet
Time will run
It always does
Dont be alarmed
Its just a moment of truth.
In my life of lies.
-Neha
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 12-Jun-03 08:11 PM
There was a light
A little out of sight
Came and I though I might
Touch it and let it guide
Myself from this world
Show me the way
What is real and what is fake
I cant trust it not a sole
Break me a little
Break me the news
Tell me what I am forgetting to see
Tell me there is a way out of this
Curse the day
I started to stray
Away from this world they say
Is so grand I didnt see the strand
Of hope there was none
Must have been used up all gone
My turn will come
Someday I will be better than some
If that day ever comes
Ill cry and not be drowned
Choke with a hope
Of happiness
Barely touched
Of all the damage it caused
Ill have it
That day is lit.
-Neha
"Lifeless to know the defenation for what life is"
-Gorrillaz
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 15-Jun-03 07:09 AM
Have you ever felt so lost
That you cant find the way out
Even on the glistening sun
Not a cloud up in the skys horizon
Screaming and hoping
Help will come looking
Just sitting there like a little baby
Helpless to help yourself or shy
When the world turns its back
And no help will come in the sack
Feeling like screaming
Wishing and dreaming
I cursed him than out of sight
Under the suns dim light
Hes helpless and no one can help him
Monster whose outside is nice when dim
Look harder hes a broken man
He can help himself he can
Bothersome sentimental
A little bit gentle
Hes a monster that destroys
Even scares little boys
Ill love him till the end
After all there is only one of him to mend
He goes for the liquid
Over and over
Give him the venom so not to be sober
Ill hate him a while or till its gone
Give me a knife and it's done.
-Neha
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 16-Jun-03 02:07 PM
Here goes another attempt at a happier poem at some ppls request.
Come with me and let me see
How it can be so lost in me
Reflect a light off of this place
Pray to me and let me bless
My little sweet little child
Ill never let you be defiled
Of you innocence so sweet
Its your own little beat
The sun will set in my horizons
But it will come to yours and be rising
What I wished I had is yours to keep
Accept it and let it seep
Tainted world of the people brave
Ill be there and always save
You are the innocent I'll keep
Away from all this leek
Take my hand
Ill teach you to stand
Not fall to the dirt like me
You are not me they will see
Your the child destined to show
To this world what it is to glow
Ill cherish every moment
Take back not a day I spent
Your a glory they wont reach
Ill be your barrier they cant breach
Be what I wish I was my love
Come with me but dont fall in my path
Dirty and not fit to be spat
On by you my lovely light
You make me happy
You make me bright.
-Neha
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 05:52 PM
Curse the day
I was born in the world
And they bid me stay
In this excuse for a life
Id rather run through a knife
Fools you make fun of me
Someday Ill make you pay
Its coming soon cant you see
Bleed me now
Ill bleed you later when your down
Prick me a little
Let it drip
My hear is not brittle
Wont break so easy
Only now its been so busy
Come and hit me u little bitch
Give me your best shot
If it cuts Ill just mend it and stitch
Explosion of the horizon
Will only sometime be rising
When you see it glowing
Its you that made it
Its red and watch out its blowing
Was I expected to stay in my shell
I wont do that no more Ill ring like a bell
Im so sick of the people making fun of me
Making me feel like a worthless junk
Buzz around me again be the stinging bee
Ill let you stay around
After all I am already bound
-Neha
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 06:10 PM
Flower and a little kiss
All I wanted was a bliss
Never got to live it all
Never got to see the mall
I cried all night
Wished I was bright
Like the blessed that watch the movie
Not alone but happy and lively
I had no one I could trust
Only ones around were there with lust
Bleed me a river
Choose me a fur
I was after all just a blur
Colors that swirls and hurls
Bid me go
Let me show
Im not just a little shadow
Im also someone not low
I always wished for what was not around
Never satisfied as long as I was bound
I lived a lie
Thats what everyone saw was shy
Image made to keep me quiet
Stuck with glue not tired
I fell to the ground one day
They told me to stay
I kept it all my pain inside
I kept a smile and I lied.
-Neha
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| PRoud |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 11:27 AM
As I climb
The higher I go
But what are my goals?
Afraid that I would never know.
So I kept climbin'
With nothing to worry about
All I had was
Just a single doubt!!
What ppl Will I meet?
AS I longe to the top of the realms,
Good ppl perhaps not to be feared
And of course the dark-hearted ones cannot be ignored.
But still I am glad that I am marching up.
I know no limits of my journey,
I guess the sky is the limit.
But I wonder if such thing exists!
Still higher and Higher I go,
I seek the pleasure in Going on
There's no stopping or turning back,
I will keep climibing my life-long.
.......this is the journey of life!!
Poetic-Proud
(Note: Encouraged by NEha to write this one. I am having my lunch at the meantime)
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| melanie |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 10:11 PM
Neha!! I finally got a name on here :) I haven't been on the internet for a while but I finally came on today and read all of the poems I hadn't read yet. (There was a great deal I hadn't seen hehe) Anyway, your poetry is so sad and depressing (most of the time) but it's very very good. I really admire your writing skills. Even in class, reading your poems and even essays...you have a great talent and I'm glad you're using it!!!! I'll try to keep posting regularly so you can look forward to it...heehee
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 10:29 PM
Melanie you got it, ha ha. Kool. What u up to this summer ne way. Kool keep posting.
-Neha
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 20-Jun-03 01:23 PM
Accidents of life
Marriages and wives
Family friends all mistakes
To take and drown in a lake
If you cant make it work
Dont hang around and bark
Ask for their life
Make them your wife
Take them and than
Take the wrong lane
Break the hearts of all
We are not a doll
Play by your rule
While she sits and watches your kids drool
Kill her sprit
Forget her lyrics
Song long forgotten
When it was you that bought them
Traces of her faces
Lingering around the bases
Both felt the same
So were you both lame
At the time when you said
Ill take your hand and than laid
We will watch
And see what you catch
One mistake for you
Dancing on your freaking cue
-Neha
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| khimu |
Posted
on 20-Jun-03 03:09 PM
this one was funny Neha
i mean you know but i like it kool kool
Naha
only the lonely (know how i feel)
Dream baby deam (how long must i dream)
pretty paper
pretty Neha
pretty her poem
peace of mind
khimu
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| Proudnepali |
Posted
on 21-Jun-03 01:20 PM
Friday evening and here I am.....
With my pen and paper as I write this piece
Friday was never this disheartening
I dunnna what is this??
Is this tragedy as they say or
Is it Confusion as I gaze
ITs friday and I am here
With tears all over my face.
I would like to call this a counfusion
But theis heart says itz tragedy
BUt what good is it in there
When You already know there's no remedy
Still itz the crazy heart that doesn't understand
Maybe because it was the heart that got involved first
But yet sometimes ya have to listen to the head
Coz there's no good in getting more hurt
It would have been so nice if forgetting things were so easy
Unlucky me the memoires are there to remain
I wonder how long it would take to heal this wound
I juzz wana make sure it will heal beofre I end.
Love hurts they say............
Wisely said
Poetic Proud
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 23-Jun-03 04:55 PM
Longing of the past
Perfection of mind
Twist and turn
Whirl of wind
Rolla coaster of a life
Bumps of a knife
Laugh with me now
Or someday it wont come
Tomorrow is a promising song
Let the sun rise to the peak of horizon
Tomorrow is a hope
A dream that might not come
Promises that wont stop
Life of a living dead
Life of the lively love
Perfection
Never reached
Only close to being breached
But some have it seized
Lucky little ones
Youll be one of them
Going deaf, dumb, and lame
Forget the perfection
Seize the little ones
Happiness of a moment
Bought with a cent
Smile all the time
Reach and ring that chime
World will watch
They will learn
If you want to live
Lie.
-Neha
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| Bhunte |
Posted
on 23-Jun-03 05:04 PM
ke ho yo...poem virus? ehehe
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| caliguy1 |
Posted
on 23-Jun-03 08:02 PM
Neha.
I will be egar to hear your poems in the convention.
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| khimu |
Posted
on 25-Jun-03 07:50 PM
:~*~:To those I Love and Those who Love me:~*~:
When i am gone, release me let me go
I have so many thing to see and do,
you mustn't tie yourself to me with tears.
I gave you my love. You can only guess
How much you gave me in happiness.
I thank you for the love each of you have shown,
But now it's time I traveled alone.
THIS IS ONE JOURNEY I MUST GO ALONE
FOR EACH OF US WILL GO THROUGH ON OUR OWN
So grieve a while for me, if grieve you must
Then let your grief be comforted by trust
It's only for a while that we must part
So bless the memories within your heart.
I won't be far away, for life goes on
So if you need me, call and i will come.
Though you can see or hear me, I'll be near
And if you listen with your heart, you'll hear
All of my love around you soft and clear.
FOR IN YOUR HEART, MY HAND YOU ALL HOLD
HOLD IT TIGHT AND NEVAH LET GO
And then, when you must come this way alone,
I'll greet you with a smile and say
"Welcome Home"
peace of mind
khimu
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 27-Jun-03 11:03 AM
You little shitz,
If you don't like them keep it to yourself. Or post your own thing insted of dissing other ppls work. Poem is not written for you it's for the authors self. It reflects them so to say it's shit is like saying I don't like you you little fu*ker. Well best of luck with your people skills. You need a lot of work on it.
with luv
-Neha
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| czar |
Posted
on 27-Jun-03 12:23 PM
My neighbour's musical instrument of choice is his door
At first I thought it a major nuisance
And then I saw it was really part
Of a kind of percussion sonata
And the aggravation dissolved: now I observe
How skillfull this soloist is in his entrance and exit
from the 'Door' by Aharon Shabtai, as translated from Hebrew by Peter Cole.
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| rajunpl |
Posted
on 28-Jun-03 01:21 AM
sei..
But'what if you break the cake
i will deny for the god sake
i know you are clever
and sure it won't last for ever
look at you,your affection
don't ned nomor interrogation
and river will flow
eventhen it is so slow
look at you,your presence
killing me now in every sense
lust of the past has lost
am i the one now with no damn cost ?
hmm.. look at you, your eyes
like the color of th sky
how would i believe
consequently you will give me relief.
look at you,(PEOPLE AT RACE) towards you
I wouldn't share the cake to embrace
anyway,life will still go on and on
just waiting for the tomorrows dawn.
-saturated survivour
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 28-Jun-03 04:43 PM
Faced with a new world
Decisions of your own
Killing spree and dreaded deeds
Never to be exposed
Who is to blame
When the whole nation is in shame
Hide your face
You might be recognized
Living there a pain
Leaving is a stain
Never leaves your heart
Thats where our lives start
Little little dreams
Loud loathed screams
Can you hear the needy
Or are you too busy
It is not expected
For you to fix the problem
Just recognize it as it is
A stain in the nation
Mothers and fathers
Give kids a chance
They will come through
If given a glance
Hope is an aspect
Never to be forgotten
If it is than it cant be rotten
One moment of fame
Days of shame
They will pass
Even if we are the last
Never giving up the trace of hope for the nation.
-Neha
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 28-Jun-03 06:37 PM
does anyone know who this lotus is?
-Neha
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| khimu |
Posted
on 28-Jun-03 08:01 PM
He is a "dude" from this earth. I think he is "Well frogs" he don't like outside world he loves to play inside the Well (Enar) thats why he don't like poems. Yo jindagi bata thakit bhayera Rukh (tree) ko chhahari ma basera joke sunna maan lageko chha re uslai! Am i right Lotus?
YEh nadiya ka name bhi Tirsana hai
Apne aap pani se bhara huwa hai
phir bhi es ka name Tirsana hai
our yeh jindagi yai se hi hai
jo tum our main etni paas
hote hote
phir bhi........................?
peace of mind
khimu
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| lotus |
Posted
on 29-Jun-03 11:10 AM
okay fine then keep copy and paste other's work...how ridiculous that you plagiarize other's work..laaz sharam pacheko nakalii! patali, gundruki!
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 29-Jun-03 03:12 PM
yo lotus they are my work. copyrighted to me u got it. it's not stolen. I can't say the same for others work but I am sure they are not stolen either. By the way do I know you lotus? cuz your very annoying.
-with luv
-Neha
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| BMW |
Posted
on 29-Jun-03 05:06 PM
Lotus,
That was totally uncalled for!, neha , u got talent, lotus probably wants u.
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 30-Jun-03 08:18 PM
Hi all the ppl that read the poems. I just wanted to let ya'll know that I won't be posting no more.
-Neha
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| GurL_Interrupted |
Posted
on 30-Jun-03 09:59 PM
Hey Neha sis,
Where u going? U just don't walk away like that! Comeon! keep on flourishing ur creative side and continue to share them w/ us (least me :-)! )
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| khimu |
Posted
on 01-Jul-03 10:44 AM
I am gonna miss ya poem Neha sweety.
you and I
what bout your 10,000 words
oh baby, I'm gonna miss ya poem
tell me where did I go wrong
oh baby, I'm gonna miss ya
make you feel the way I feel
Please don't go my sweet lil
Girl what can i do make you come back soon
and make it just the way it used to be
you wrote the poem with love
I wanna read every word
Don't care what other says
"Hai Neha"
There are people, who don't understand what you wanna hear
Even on a raining day they'll tell you the sky is clear
So keep it sweety
always
peace of mind
khimu
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| Arnico |
Posted
on 01-Jul-03 03:01 PM
Neha, there are many of us who really appreciate you sharing with us a glimpse of your immense talent and we look forward to owning an autographed copy of Neha's Book of Poetry Volume 1.
Bhunte and Lotus: although everyone is free to post in sajha kurakani, there are certain codes of conduct that members of the community are expected to uphold. This includes staying away from making rude jokes in serious threads, as well as absolutely staying away from making false accusations.
It is sad to see Neha having to go through the draining effort of defending the authenticy of her poetry after she's shared so much of her heart with us through her poetry... especially since I was the person who initially talked her into sharing her poetry on kurakani. Neha, I am sorry for what you've had to go through.
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| Bhunte |
Posted
on 01-Jul-03 03:24 PM
Oh Maha kabi serious kabi Arnico,
where I accuse you guys? I am enjoying the thread. Are you drunk kabi to accuse me? What's your problem? you are too virulent man....yestari ta timro kabita bikdaina ni sathi...
peace
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| TANSEN.COM |
Posted
on 02-Jul-03 01:10 PM
ko feri yo amirican mahakabi jastyo huh ?
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| xxintriguexx |
Posted
on 05-Aug-03 11:24 AM
great poems
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