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| oys_chill |
Posted
on 27-May-03 03:22 PM
Empty Spaces
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A weekend buzz--
lonliness begins to strum.
What's up for friday night?
Dull ceilings stare back.
A knock of develish temptation,
Conscience raves in predicament.
Nostalgic ride through dark alleys,
A sinking feeling--Nothing to lose.
Relapsing, rejuvenating
Lost in twirls of sweet smoke.
Synthesis of artificial hunger,
Sleep overrides it.
Another missed morning,
yawn in late afternoon
Quest of ways to kill time,
Sliding through memory lanes
Darkness creeps up,
Hesitant nap--whispers--a gust of nightmare.
Motionless at midnight,
Insomnia--revisited.
Sleep through another sunrise,
A special yearning stirs.
Urge to see the outside world.
A gruelling meditation--in hot water,
Cautious through secluded streets,
A cosy, chilly afternoon air.
Empty theater--reloaded with matrix
A fleeting illusion.
An evening reflection.
A long weekend--sleepless saga.
Begotten memories of bulletproof love,
Fragile stab of betrayal,
Blowing in the wind.
Incessant sprinkles of twilight,
A memorial childhood sprouts back.
Greenery and pearl drops,
A glimpse of paradise.
Iron clasp of dictation,
Chaotic vast spaces of freedom,
clumped without ventilation.
Throbbing of the racing heart,
Wasted days--forgotten goals.
Almighty!no more weekends, no more rain
no more pain, no more gain!
Sub-conscience dwells,
Freedom drifts,
passion floats--
In Empty Spaces.
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| psychodreamer |
Posted
on 27-May-03 05:47 PM
Good Stuff Oys.
oys , you like Metallica??
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| silent-observer |
Posted
on 27-May-03 10:00 PM
Oys, Oys, Oys!
pooh you.. seems like you had a not-so-entertaining weekend. Amazing! weekdays suddenly seem so much better eh?
*wink*
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| Gurl_Interrupted |
Posted
on 27-May-03 10:58 PM
Empty spaces! by Oys_chill Or metalica *wondering* Nice! "Chaotic vast spaces of freedom,
clumped without ventilation.
Throbbing of the racing heart,
Wasted days--forgotten goals."
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| Prempujari |
Posted
on 28-May-03 06:17 AM
Bro ko kina jyan badhya badhya jasto laagya bhanya ta esto push-up haando rahecha, kabita furne gari!!
Good one bro!!
Ani Congratulation pani hai, eh.. you know why!!
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| Hellbound |
Posted
on 28-May-03 08:19 AM
Oys,
well done broda. Oys, over the year, you've immensely developed your writing skills from memory lane to empty space, from poignant feelings to contentment finale, and from dark side of the moon to dazzling perplexity.
What was that congratulation about? May we all know what Oys has just accomplished?
Hell
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| bhenda2 |
Posted
on 28-May-03 08:54 AM
Oys sarai dukhi kabita raheecha...man ma chassakka bhayo....
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| oys_chill |
Posted
on 28-May-03 11:40 AM
Psychodreamer,
I have always been musically retarded.......never developed that needed passion to pursue music. It was only in high school, when I heard my friend strum that masterpiece "wish you were here" music gave me a new dimension to life. THen I realized, I had a lot to catch up, but then I got stuck in the seventies with dark side of the moon ;) .........so empty spaces is a metallica song too? :O didn't even know that!
The title was a result of the email from a friend who's starting his own multimedia company in ktm shortly, called the empty spaces (sounds very psychedelic eh? :P)
Silent observer is suddenly very loud these days *wink*
HellBound, your compliment has breathed a new life upon me :). accomplishment "This is to certify that Oys_Chill has successfully completed his thesis on Frustration, dish washing and chatting ;)"
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| DWI |
Posted
on 28-May-03 11:57 AM
Aafrin Aafrin, Oys.
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| psychodreamer |
Posted
on 28-May-03 12:29 PM
Oys i didnt mean that. I just felt that the wordings were as good as some metallica's good songs.
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| oys_chill |
Posted
on 28-May-03 12:47 PM
psychodreamer...ruler cha? naak ko size napnu paryo :P eheh
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| psychodreamer |
Posted
on 28-May-03 03:02 PM
:)
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| Silent-Observer |
Posted
on 28-May-03 07:55 PM
Appropriately silent in matters of oysters and poetry.
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| psychodreamer |
Posted
on 29-May-03 01:46 AM
silent in observing??
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| ou812 |
Posted
on 29-May-03 02:09 AM
Comfy bro,
Personally speaking "Poets and Pigs are appreciated after they are dead". However, your poem has a ring of a song from division bell, can't place it at the moment. Pls eskoos moi indifference to poetry. Tales of Handigaon was great though. Keep feeding the hungry.
Your's truely,
Poetically challanged.
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