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| samana! |
Posted
on 16-Jun-03 07:46 AM
Its YOU! only YOU!
U cant see or u see what u feel
ineffable feelings of affection
can't u hear it my dear ,
the hubbub my heart is playing,
a Torsion however it may seem,
Its so-called life like heme.
an endearment put forth
by ur beloved one and thats me
Dont u say where its gone
Its embeded within you,
Oh! dear, it takes time to seek for it,
its not a trifle mind it!
Cuddle me dear, set me free
would love to be lost and mesmerized,
just keep loving me,the way u loved me
samana!
p.s just wanted to start a new thread...
thanks
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| Neural |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 04:32 AM
Samana,
it's a wonderful one.......nice pc. ...BTW it's written by u & only u ? gr8
:)))
Come live with me!!
Come live with me, and be my love,
And we will some new pleasures prove
Of golden sands, and crystal brooks,
With silken lines, and silver hooks.
Thanks.
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| Samana! |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 08:22 AM
Neural
Thanks for ur compliments. hehe!yea... its my poem..any doubt! hehe....
hmm... ur poem does make sense, hence inspires emotions... umm.. really a nice one as a beautiful token...
hey sajaites!
I dont understand... this forum is viewed 86 times, but no comments at all except for Neural...heheh..
Any token of love will be highly appreciated.........Please feel free to post here.........
thanks
samana!
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| Rusty |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 08:37 AM
Samana, very nice..
Love surrounds in chorus
Avalanche of kisses gushed into my delusion
Hell, just another reverie:-)
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| noname |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 04:02 PM
Samana - Way to go..!
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| lonely |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 07:59 PM
samana its great...keep it up...
wondering if u were looking for love??
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| hyaterica |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 08:20 PM
nice one samna!
lonely, u just cracked me up!
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| Samana! |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 08:34 PM
rusty ji
thanks for ur compliments. Why dont you try to post one?
lonely ji
searching for love? umm..dont want to get into.. Love is not confined within couples..its vast..and can be anyone. Thanks for ur appreciation.
hyatterika ji lai pani muri muri dhanyabad...
samana!
ps. Please feel free to post how you really feel about love!
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| Samana! |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 08:42 PM
When I see you!!
When I see the world,
I see with the eyes of endearment
All is the Propensity, I find within you
Credit goes to you my dear,
The natural impulse of emotion,
Interlaces with your crystal clear affection
Which I would always cherish
Kudos to you dear
You taught me have passionate for devotion
All I have is the intense desire
Lustful embraces, I m waiting to bestow,
Would love to be mesmerized
Infused by your sweet breathing
That encompasses the feeling of sensation
The momentary stirring of air
In my each breath, I feel you
Calm and unruffled breeze of your love
Makes me feel better each day,
Fragrances of your love all around me
Oh! Dear, please sense it!!!!!!!
I would breathe my last rather than being apart
thanks!
samana
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| Neural |
Posted
on 19-Jun-03 02:39 AM
Samana, ur poems r so touching..... okay, one more from my side.
There is a lady!!!!
There is a lady lovable and kind,
Was never a face so delighted my mind;
I did but see her passing by,
And yet I'll love her till I die.
Her shrug, action, and her smiles,
Her humor, her voice my heart charms,
Charms my heart, I know not why,
And yet I'll love her till I die.
Cupid is winged and he doth range,
Her country, so, my love doth change:
But change she earth, or change she sky,
Yet, I will love her till I die.
:)) thx
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| Hellbound |
Posted
on 19-Jun-03 05:28 AM
Samana,
Nice! Here's one. let's run the marathon now.
Escape me?
Never-
Beloved!
While I am I, and you are you,
So long as the world contains us both,
Me the loving and you the loth,
While the one eludes, must the other pursue.
My life is a fault at last, I fear-
It seems too much like a fate, indeed!
Though I do my best I shall scarce succeed-
But what if I fail of my purpose here?
It is but to keep the nerves at strain,
To dry one's eyes and laugh at a fall,
And baffled, get up to begin again,-
So the chase takes up one's life, that's all.
While, look but once from your farthest bound,
At me so deep in the dust and dark,
No sooner the old hope drops to ground
Than a new one, straight to the selfsame mark,
I shape me-
Ever
Removed!
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 19-Jun-03 06:07 AM
Samana:
Where have you been hiding? Such eloquence in your words! Nice! :)
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 19-Jun-03 06:12 AM
Hellbound ji:
....and as each chase re-shapes you,
you evolve into an irreversible phenomena!
Dare you risk the point of no returns,
Dare I?
;)
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| somya |
Posted
on 19-Jun-03 10:31 PM
great . each poem compliments the chain samana started.
well looking forward to more of the endearing love of each.
good luk
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| le chef du nuit |
Posted
on 20-Jun-03 04:04 AM
grubby little hands reach out
touching
feeling
grasping
lust, justified as love
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| Samana! |
Posted
on 21-Jun-03 05:17 AM
neural ji
nice one! keep it up!
hellbound ji
umm...marathon !!! yea...lets carry on hai..
sitara didi
ma katai pani lukeko thina...tara ali aat aayeko thiyena sajha ma post garna...indeed was a silent reader..
thanks for ur compliments hoi ta
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| Samana! |
Posted
on 07-Jul-03 06:56 PM
Dont u deny when it comes to you
A streamlined shimmering gleams of fortune
A way out there u sees, ah! isnt it blurry??
Its just that its the beatitude escalating..
Surpassing the bereavement, its now over, feel it!
Weaving you, far across the distance stand your love,
Blithe who is ready to take over....
And kiss you.... will be blessed forever!!
You exuded in droplets,
All ur wearisome pilgrimage,
At last, you found her..........ur love!!
Now has become ur paramour,
See! How far the destiny's in your favor,
A trodden track, U comes across,
The craggy road, you elapsed
Dont you let ur reliance bid good bye!!
The love is wht you are gifted with, press it hard!
dont trample her flowers crush.....,
akin to the reality, shes come your way
dont let her desire swash away
Shes the reality, Whos enamored you with true love,
Passionately embrace her, shes yearning for&.
She wants to be driven away with lust of your love!!
samana
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| KaLaNkIsThAn |
Posted
on 07-Jul-03 06:59 PM
Samana,
Nice, Very Very Nice!
Can I get your autograph on the Phone?
hehe.,,,,
ahem....!!
(There is the light, where the darkness is re kyaa purano geet, hamle school ma taruni pattyaune bela ko hehe!)
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| Samana! |
Posted
on 07-Jul-03 07:09 PM
Kalankisthan jyu
thanks! tara ma tyasto kaha ko thulo kabiyetri ho ta tapai lai photograph dine khalko!! ..yeso time pass garne euta upaya matra ho kabita lekhera....
anyway! thanks again haii...
please feel free to post whatever comes to ur mind!!...........let it go.........
samana
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| KaLaNkIsThAn |
Posted
on 07-Jul-03 07:13 PM
Thulo kabiyetri hoina?
Kati pound ko? Height chai kati ni hehe..
Feri autograph maagya, photograph aauna laagya jasto cha..!!
Meri bassai aba ke magum ni.............. HELP!!!
(Keep on writing ni ho.... tyahi lekhna ta sajha ma aa, hoina ta? Let it flow let it flow let it flow... hehe)
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