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| jira |
Posted
on 16-Jun-03 01:24 PM
Chapala aupala haru ek surama, kalo ra seto ko misrit lahari
Phirangi thita haru ko desh ho bujhnu yo ta haina kantipuri nagari ||
Janha janchu dekchu jodi jamata, ekla ta bhikh maagda rahechan
Paangra sari jiban gudawundai bihana beluki bhagda rahechan ||
Lahalahawundo ghansa katcha gadi lay ghansi ta yassai marney bho
Gai chareko herna yaha saiyowun kosha hidnu parney bho ||
Hanga binga rukha ka saba sunya chhan, chhaina panchi ko bajana
Brichhya bina ka phalphool lataramma dekchhu yinkai khajana ||
Drishya chan anek aenk bijulibatti, uzyalo sabbai naasha bho
Khaneko kuwa herney ghansee lay makana harey yo pani malai aasha bho ||
Sudda uccharan nepali taba bhulyo jaba bajriyo kaana ma yo paschatya boli
Janchu bhanda bhandai chuttho jiban biti gayo kailey awuney ho tyo bholi ||
PS: hami ni ewuta chhanda hanam na yaso..
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| ruck |
Posted
on 16-Jun-03 03:06 PM
Oho Modern Bhanubhakta ji, ramro cha.. jawos jawos aru pani....
:-))
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| ??! |
Posted
on 16-Jun-03 03:31 PM
Jirajyu, lau maile pani ultha garidiyen tapainko rachana.. kat chhant gareko chitta bujhena bhane dadu ma pani tatayera chamchale aachman gari pitta chhadaunu hola.
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| noname |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 06:04 AM
Funny...
Reminds Bhairav Aryal too!
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| isolated freak |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 06:18 AM
ramro raicha bro.. katha kabita k ho j ma ni uttikai majale kalam chalne rahecha bro ko..
namaste
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| jira |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 07:03 AM
Guna Jyu,
mero ahobhagya bhannu paryo. :-)
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| marich |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 09:44 AM
hahaha.funny very funny. Who si this Jira. i Never thougth Jira could write this well when Marich is simply lekhdai, kordai, akash tira herdai, pheri lekhdai ,kordai, dallo paring and phyaling in the jhyang, ani rish le churmuridai reading, Jira written poems
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| TANSEN.COM |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 04:13 AM
JIRA ZI ,
TAPAI KO RACHANA PADANA PAUDA TA YESTO LAGYO KI ,
BHANU BHAKT NAI KAMPUTAR BHITA BHAYE JASTYO KYA.....
ATI SUNDAR 6 HAI BADHAI 6 TAPAI LAI .
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| NK |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 12:41 PM
Jira,
After living here for so many years, all the contrasts that were so apparent, are not so apparent anymore. Your poems/Haikus/two-liners/three-liners keeps me in touch what I have (almost) forgotten.This poem is case in point. This line especially made me pause and think and smile. I also exclaimed (man manai)" How true!" :)
"Janha janchu dekchu jodi jamata, ekla ta bhikh maagda rahechan"
I was disappointed to see it omitted in Gunaji's excellent rendition otherwise.
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| ??! |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 02:08 PM
NKji, sarai chitta dukhyo jasto chha.. yestai ho... eutako kura arko le tya-chhyan parda kheri.. lau ta correction pani gardiyun... sayad yo chain thik hunthyo hola,
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| Nepe |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 04:34 PM
Jira ji,
Excellent. After 'Aau priye..'
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| jira |
Posted
on 19-Jun-03 09:25 AM
Dhannebaad sabbailai...Bbhanubhakta ko recent photo ni awudai cha hai :-)
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| jira |
Posted
on 19-Jun-03 09:30 AM
Bhanubhakta in MPLS downtown
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| Poonte |
Posted
on 19-Jun-03 09:32 AM
:))))))))))))))))))))) Shabda bihin...
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| Satya |
Posted
on 19-Jun-03 10:26 AM
Aadhunik kavi nava Bhanubhakta?
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