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| ancient mariner |
Posted
on 16-Jun-03 02:21 PM
The galloping horses come to a rest
Smouldering houses crackle and burn
The day of reconing is here
The innocent gonna suffer no more
The healing hath begun
The wrath of the ages sanctified
Hope of a new ray of sun
The charred skin of the heart
The humility of the soul
The learning hath begun
For the dark age is gone.
The horses know of no direction
The eyes have been shut
Brighness scares the eyes
Yes, the feeling of being reigned no more
The world is there in reins
The dreams have begun to take shapes
The monotony of darkness no more
The longing of the darkness
Remains as a scar in the lightness of being
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 16-Jun-03 10:40 PM
wow beautiful. really really nice.
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| Master_Of_One_Liners |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 04:08 AM
I am gonna attempt to write a limerick just to elicit a response from the beautiful hidden_angel.
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| Master_Of_One_Liners |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 04:21 AM
This firecracker came with a bang
How do you handle that thang
She's feisty, she's witty
And also quite pretty
Come on, I wanna join her gang.
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| ancient mariner |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 06:40 AM
Shadowy creatures of the darkness
Emancipated from the dungeons
Hiding from the light
Breathing out fumes
Spitting out venom
The decay of humanity
Deep crevices of the inner mind
Turning deaf dumb and blind
Existence coming to a halt
A distant pounding of the heart
Dragging
The footsteps
Pounding
The footsteps
Shalt lead to salvation
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 09:01 PM
Yeah your poems do have something missing on other ones. Including mine. A sole all it's own.
-Neha
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| Master_Of_One_Liners |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 12:51 AM
My soul has no soles, it wanders barefoot.
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 11:04 PM
If I could I would clean the world for you babez. No blindness would be needed, the truth it self so pure. Hope of the day will never cese mariner. Keep writing. I like your work but you didn't have one here today. :( oh well maybe next time.
-It was the ancient evil...thirsty...
hum that' s all i remember ha ha itll next time
-Neha
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| le chef du nuit |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 11:56 PM
i am caught in the stands of the Kosmos
o lord, take me where you will
one step at a time
i grow
i change
i evolve
boundless freedom
where shall you seek it?
in abandon, in pleasure
in sweet mary jane?
i longed for a longing so sweet
it filled my heart
i longed for a pain so wrenching
it consumed my soul
and when i found it
it was all i imagined
and more than what i hoped
o lord, i am caught in the current of the Kosmos
and where it takes me
there i long to be
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| hidden_angel |
Posted
on 24-Jun-03 08:56 AM
ancient M.
Keep wiritng will ya. I'm waiting for more of your work.
-Neha
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