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| noname |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 05:50 AM
It seems that lately SAJHA has been 'hijacked' by literary circle. So, not to be left far far behind, here is one PRAYAS!
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| isolated freak |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 06:17 AM
hmm bhupi sherchan bata inspired?
ramro cha.. malai ni kabita lekhna aaye hune..
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| vivid |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 08:07 AM
Noname ji,
Bhimsen Thapa ko dharohar nakh lai thadyayera,
Seta himalharu ko barko ma atesh matesh,
Shwayambhu sirani halera suteko cha,
Kathmandu, mitho sapana ko asha ma!!
My favourite verse.
The second one, had it been published somewhere? I feel like I've read it somewhere but don't know where.
Lau, Pikhuwa khola ko pani ko asar ho ki ke?, :)
Lekhdai garnu hola!
Katti aruko matrai, afnai jilla basi ko kabita pani padna paun na yesari!
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 02:29 PM
Noname ji:
Phucche le sarai maan ruwayo!
Aati ramro hajur.
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| oys_chill |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 02:47 PM
yeso kreepa garera, romanized font ma lekhnu bhayema hamle ni padna paune thiyem :S..
kyarne font install garne privilege chaina!
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| noname |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 03:46 PM
IF, thanks....yeh very true, inspired by Bhupi !
Vivid...ha ha...what a memory you have!! But you did not mention where you hail from, did you? The second verse was posted in Sajha...but in romanized and changed format.
Sitara...ke garnu hajur harule RAJNITI thread herdai naherne.....kabita lekhnu paryo :)
OYS.....bro..yar THAS THAS garera balla nepali ma lekhya chha...kata romanized garne..may be can i add jpeg? let me try hai..
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| Bal Matlab |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 04:05 PM
Noname ji,
Bhannu parda sarhai ramro lagyo. Afno pani theyyakai oys_chill kai byatha paryo. download garni privilege nabha. Dherai dherai dhanyabad, tyo maathi ko JPEG kabita ko lagi. Asha cha bhabisyama ma pheri estai mitha kabita padhna payine cha bhanera,
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| KaLanKiSthaN |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 06:41 PM
Oho!!
Kasto meetho lekhya!!
Aghi dekhi noname bro le ke-kkana lekhya hola bhanera ignore garya, ahile ta atti bho hernai paryo bhanera herdyaa ta, ma ta jhasangai!! jhandai miss garya!!
Noname bro, maanye bro lai... kasto meetho... tyo Mohor wala ta jhanai meetho!!
Me wann More!!
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| chipledhunga |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 07:36 PM
Nonameji, excellent poems! Tara ma ta jhukkeko ni. Ranga as in color bhaneko rahicha maile ta char khutte rango samjhera po thread kholyaa ta.
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| lonely |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 07:46 PM
aati ramro chha noname ji,
padera mero ni mar garungho bhayo.....
keep it up
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| noname |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 09:40 PM
Bal Matlab, Kalanki, Chipledhunga and Lonely...thanks for such kind and encouraging words.
Yeh...it's kathmandu ka rangharu (colors) not Kathmandu ka Rangaharu (that four legged poor creature which is in service of Katmanduites next only to the God almighty!).
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| vivid |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 05:26 AM
Noname ji,
Bhanesi asti ko thread ma heriyena mero reply. I hail from ta nabhanau hola tara Champe ho ghar. Jamma 2 patak pugya chu,:)
Actually when I first saw the title I also thought the same as Chiple ji ni. Lau Noname ji le katmandu ko charkhutte walking momo ko barema kehi lekhnu bhayecha bhanera herya ta Man ma ukus mukush bhayeka bhawana haru po pokhnu bha raicha.
Lekhdai garnu hola.
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| TANSEN.COM |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 06:38 AM
FUCCHE BRO TAPAILAI JORDAR TALI HAI , 1 DAM RAMRO 6
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| noname |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 03:03 PM
Vivid, so..you too were confused about Rang and Ranga... yeh i might have missed your reply at that time...yeh, i also have not been lucky to visit my village from long time. it's been long since I tasted Pikhwa ko pani last time..but the memories are always there ni, hoina?
Tansen.com...thanks!
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| Nepe |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 03:35 PM
Noname ji,
I was thinking the same thing as Vivid ji did. I have read that second poem somewhere. Thinking that it must have published with the real name of the Kabi, I was about to do some search to find it out. You said it was posted in Sajha. So I gave up.
And yes, very Bhupisque.
More please.
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| Kale_Ko_Chartikala |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 04:47 PM
NoName Bro:
Kabita ko class liyeko ta thaha thiyena - tara kyabat !
Niky jameko cha ni!!
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| ??! |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 05:02 PM
Jhandai chhutechha yesto ramro kabita.... Nonameji, aru pani thapdai janu hola... achel literature ko dain halindai chha kyare sajha ma....
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| noname |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 05:06 PM
KKC,
Class naliyeko belama sikeko kura ho yo...Yaso basi biyalo po ta...
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| noname |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 05:11 PM
Nepe, ??! thanks hai...
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| TANSEN.COM |
Posted
on 19-Jun-03 02:48 AM
FUCHHE DAI...
hoina basdabasdai hiddahiddai.. sutda sutdai .. kastyo kabita lekhna sakeko bhanya..? tapai lai kun maan le sammaan gare jaati hola ?
Aasu kabi.. mahakabi... kabisiromani ....? kun chai fit hola ?
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| NK |
Posted
on 19-Jun-03 06:40 AM
Beautifully crafted. The flow from one line to another glides like a new Mercedes on autobahn. Makes you cry (the last line of 'phucche') suddenly with his innocent utterence even though you are expecting not so happy ending.
Sometimes we know when we have lost our "mohor" and sometimes we are oblivious. And, life goes on.
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| jira |
Posted
on 19-Jun-03 10:00 AM
padhna ta niskana saath padhya thiye..tara comment chai ailey hai..sarrai gahiro cha..sataha bhanda dherrai bhitra
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| noname |
Posted
on 19-Jun-03 04:43 PM
Very powerful signatures here...thanks every body!
Tansen.com pani..ke bha..ma kabi nai hoina...kata tyasta furka jhundyauna bhayeko..!
NK...yeh..life goes on...who knows what one is fleeing from?
jira..gahiro re? i am not sure whether kathmandu is gahiro or fucche in there is gahiro!!
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| oys_chill |
Posted
on 19-Jun-03 04:54 PM
noname jyu,
padna ta asti nai padya ho..comment hannai birsechu.....
paile suru ta, jpeg nai post gardinu bhako ma muri muri dhanyabaad!
dunno about ktm ko poem, fucche chai khassa ko lagyo......mutu nai kudini hai? la aroo lekhda pani...tyasari nai post gari baksyos hai ta :)
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