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   <font face="kantipur" size="+2"> a;fP+ 17-Jun-03 ??!
     Guna ji, Bhauju ta sarai bhagyamani, ha 17-Jun-03 vivid
       ehehe, vividji oohile dharan-dhankuta e 17-Jun-03 ??!
         Guna ji, PP ji aka Kalankisthan ji ko k 17-Jun-03 vivid
           Gunajee, Second para chahi gajab lagyo. 17-Jun-03 gorato
             Maile ni Gunajyu ko tarif garya the..gha 17-Jun-03 noname


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??! Posted on 17-Jun-03 11:26 AM


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vivid Posted on 17-Jun-03 11:32 AM

Guna ji,
Bhauju ta sarai bhagyamani, handi ma junelo furya jastai bhauju ko nam ma ghazal furya cha furya cha, ;) padi bhyaunai antiyena.
Aba ta chori haruko nam ma pani jane hola ni ek diu wata??
Kanchi chori ko nam ke rakhnu bho ni, sunam na hami pani?
Puna parkhai ma.
??! Posted on 17-Jun-03 11:43 AM

ehehe, vividji
oohile dharan-dhankuta express hundi gaunu parne gajals ahile gayera ke hola.. tai pani.. gajal ma kasaiko nam ta rakhnu paryo bhanera... rakheko ....

Sani chhori ko nam chain - "Asmita"
vivid Posted on 17-Jun-03 11:56 AM

Guna ji,
PP ji aka Kalankisthan ji ko kura bhane DHYAAMMMMMM.................

Kina kina malai tyestai sanka lagi raa thiyo ke, Akriti pachi Asmita nai hola bhanera.
Anyway, I used to read that nari awaj patrika ,'Asmita' during my college days ni hajur.

Dharan-Dhankuta express ma gudya bela yesto ghazal gayeko bhaye ke thaha ahile Guna ji chandi nach nachdai wa dhan nach nachdai garya hunthiyo ki baa...
Marincha ki bachincha, dhanai nachincha...palam gaundai ke ajha.
heh! heh!
gorato Posted on 17-Jun-03 12:58 PM

Gunajee,
Second para chahi gajab lagyo.....
lau ni malai ta supari po khanu mann paryo!
noname Posted on 17-Jun-03 04:14 PM

Maile ni Gunajyu ko tarif garya the..ghazal ma...when i checked this gazhal again, 'noname' was nowhere...got surprised, kasko Aankha lagyo bhanera...then realized that it's not the same Ghazal!

The last two lines (what is it called in Ghazal?) le ta manai chhoyo..