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| Bal Matlab |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 05:00 PM
Tyo bihaan. Utriyo plane bata bhoko pet. Saarho thakeko thiye, tesaile dinner sinner goli maro bhaniyera sutya thiye. Kahile Boston airport ma land garosh jasto bha thiyo, bhok le. Pahilo choti Amrika ako, boston pani pahilai choti thiyo. Airport ma land gare pachi ke garni hola kunni, lina ta euta dai aunu parni. Tara na ako raicha bhane ke garni, lau tension nai huncha bhanera mun munai bhagwan lai, kehi apatti na hos bhani ra thiye. Kaha hunu kohi chiana raicha, lau fasaad po paryo ta aba. Tetro baggage thiyo, char barsa ko lagi lera ko saman haru. Huna pani kina na hos, kahile ghar gayincha ajhai ta thaha chaina. Doraudai gaye, pahile ta juice lina vending machine ma. Kahile use nagarya, pheri paisa khaidiyo bhane ke garni. teti bela 2 dollar bhaneko ta 160 thiyo ni dimaag ma..!! dhanna diyo juice telle, ani phone garna gaye. ghar ma bhet nabhako le cell ma try gare, thyakkai bhet bho ni. tesh pachi ek chin kura ma ai hale bhannu bho. Boston ma dui-tin din basni plan thiyo tesh pachi chahi college tira lagnu parne thiyo.. College ma housing na khulni bhako le, antai housing khoj bhanya thiyo. Ramrai bho ni ali ali boston ghumna paini bho bhanne sochya thiye.
.......... ohho sorry hai sajha sanga related afno history sunaunu lagya ta, afnai matra bhayo. Teti nai bela euta chinya manche le yo address dinu bhayo. yo kura chahi testai kehi lagbhag ek barsa agadi ko ho. Afu lai naam diyi hale ani, padhna suru gari hale. Dherai samma "Silent Reader" ko title ma base, ahile pani kamai lekhne garchu. Dherai chahi padhne garchu, katha "deep" dai ko sarhai nai ramro lagcha, ani ahile chali ra lahar, kabita ko pani ek dum swad lagdo cha. Teti bela sajha ma chire pani , teti dherai samay diyinna thiyo, kahile ta birsi pani halinthyo. Estai garda gardai, ahile ayera ek dum active user bha chu, posting dherai na gare pani, khub sarho padhincha.
Afno pan ko anubhav huncha bela bela ma, kahile kahi nyasrro lagi ra bela ma eso sajhaite ka humor haru padhyo, khusi lagcha. "Najar" ji le afno dhago ma lekhnu bha jastai. Sajhapur ra teska basinda haru ko harek chaad parwa ma lekhiyeka thread haru le afno desh ko yaad ra ramaila anubhav haru batulne kaam garcha. Malai ajhai pani yaad cha, tyo last thanksgiving ma padheko tyo kabita. Khai kalle lekhya ta yaad bhayena, tara "Dhanyabad dine" in the Nepali way bhaneko chai yaad cha. testai gari dashain ra tihar ma pani posting haru bha thiyo. Aba esto hunda kheri ali ali addiction ta kasari na hos. Afnai jasto lage pachi ta ayi rahu jasto lagi halcha ni. Je hos yehi nai ho mero sajhapur ma chireko katha, byatha ta kehi pani na lekhya ni.. padhne le pani yeso moj garos bhanera ni. Dherai le ta malai na chinlan, dherai dekha pareko chaina ni tesaile, tara maile chahi dherai lai chinchu. Atleast, nick name battai bhaye pani, sabai ta yaad chaina tara yaad bha haru chahi, noname, madmax, sitara, isolated freak, deep, simple gal, ashu, gal1, rusty, jira, bhunte, Dumbass dhumbasse, oys_chill, poonte, lonely, khimu, trikal, premcharo, Onegirl_123, bhedo, bond-007, Hahoo guru, NK. Yi ta bhaye dimaag bha naam haru, aru pani yaad ta cha tara lekhna na bhyayine bhayo, ahile ali toilet janu parni jasto bhayo. Agi dekhi basya computer agadi..
la ta ahile lai bida magdai, maathi ko lekhai ma kehi galti bhaye maaf pau hola. Afu testo ramro writer pariyena..khali euta try garya ho.
I will be glad to see other postings from people about there first sight first love wth sajha.Aru ko pani ta eso padhu na pailo choti ko bhet ghat..
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| ??! |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 05:09 PM
Bal Matlabji,
Lekhna nachhodnu hola.. bistarai ramro hune ho... arkalai gali garne ra chhudra bachan nabhane dekhi sajha ramailo bhai rakhne chha... lau ta aru ke bhanne... mero ta nick pani apthyaro chha... ke bhanera bolaune?... eheheh....
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| oys_chill |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 05:22 PM
Baal Matlab jyu,
I don't think we write in sajha for the sake of ramro and naramro..its all bout sharing our experiences and like you said "tyo nyasro lagya bela, maun bahalaune ho" ..pheri $$ bhaye po baira teera ghumgham sadhai.......tyasaile sajhapur mai ramailo garna parcha :)
Thanx for sharing your experience. kasto saral mitho nepali ma lekhnu bhayecha......maun nai prafulla bho :) ..ma ni yeso nepali ma lekhne jamarko garum bhanya.........herum....
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| noname |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 05:30 PM
Kasto bhabuk manchhe...BAL MATALAB (barkha yam ko janma ta hoina katai?) ...nick herda ta bhayankar lagya thyo! :)
Saral ra mitho !
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| lonely |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 07:19 PM
Good writing Bal matlab. Keep it up..
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 17-Jun-03 07:27 PM
Bal Matlab ji:
Now, I am wondering why you have been a silent reader for so long. Please do keep writing.
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| Bal Matlab |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 06:31 AM
sabai lai yo Bal Matlab ko namaskar,
First of all ta, dherai dherai thanks. Tyo encouragement ko lagi, ra "tyehi afnopan ko lagi". Khusi lagyo, tanpai haru ko tippani padhera, ani sunna ki tanpai haru lai mero anubhav mun pareko ma.
??! - Ji Kasto type garna ni garho Nick. Je hos, tanpai lai "Ko ho(?) Ko ho(?) ammui(!) bhanera bolam la ni hunna.
oys_chill - Ji tehi jahile pani && bhaye po, eso gayinthyo aru entertainment garna, na bhaye ta yehi computer ho. Tanpai ko tyo mitho bachan ko lagi dhanyabad. Mero pani fasta try thiyo, tanpai lekhnu na, ramrai huncha.
noname - Ji, naam bata matrai manche lai kaha chinna sakincha, Mun testo bhayankar chaina. Je hos to saral prothsahan ko lagi muri muri dhanyabad
Lonely - Ji, Thank you, mero tarfa bata ma sakdo try garne chu.
Sitara - Ji, hazur has, lekhna koshish garne chu. thank you for the compliment.
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| Poonte |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 11:05 AM
KohoKohoAammui (??!) eheheheh LOLOLOLOL...hassayo!
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| OneGirl_123 |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 04:40 PM
Poonte ji, yay u remembered me! hehe :)
tanku ;)
:)
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| GurL_Interrupted |
Posted
on 18-Jun-03 09:45 PM
Ramro BaL Matlab :-)!
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| Deep |
Posted
on 19-Jun-03 07:53 AM
Bal matlab le ma jasto thar klass lekhakko "estory" lai bal dine gareko sunera ma ta babaal ni.
:)
Keep on floating your words here in sajha, bal matlab.
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| ugly duckling |
Posted
on 19-Jun-03 02:43 PM
Finally got a chance to scan through sajhapur after a long time. Thanks to my coworker who has been using the computer that I need to use to process my data, and I get to peep into this virtual world.
Balmatlab, thank you for sharing your few words with the fellow sajhaites. And it very generous of the readers to encourage your ability to write. But, I don't view from the same window as "lonely" and "Gurl_interrupted" and I am not able to tell you that is a "good writing". I have come across false uplifting in sajha a numerous times. Kasaile katha lekhyo ki "ramro chha", "excellent story" even though it has several glitches.
I don't mean to post this pointing at you, Balmatlab. This is my general overview of what I have seen in sajha. And I decided to bring it up in this discussion board.
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| OneGirl_123 |
Posted
on 19-Jun-03 04:20 PM
OOOPPPSSS! CORRECTION!!
I meant
BALMATLAB JI, yay u remembered me!
tanku! :)
where the hell did i get Poonte ji frm?? when Balmatlab wrote it! m i goin crazy?? hhmm maybe cuz Poonte's post was the last one before i posted.....phew! long day! hehe :)
:)
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| Deep |
Posted
on 20-Jun-03 06:43 AM
"I have come across false uplifting in sajha a numerous times."
Ugly duckling has a valid point. I agree.
But I wouldn't discourage fellow participants from expressing their views, though. I would love to see more people expressing themselves here. The presenter, however, should realize if the uplifting is false or reasonable.
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| najar |
Posted
on 20-Jun-03 06:50 AM
BalMatlab ji,
Saral, bhaavuk ra maarmik. Like nonameji mentioned, i too, did not think you would be senti kinda personality based on your cybername. A book cannot be judged from its cover bhanthhe, ho rahechha!
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| Bal Matlab |
Posted
on 20-Jun-03 08:45 AM
Yo Bal Matlab le pheri lekhdai cha,
Thank you all for your kind and encouraging replies. I surely do agree with Ugly duckling, and what he has expressed. As I stated above in my writing, that it was my first time ever posting something in sajha, i meant an article of somekind. And as oys_chill ji said,
"I don't think we write in sajha for the sake of ramro and naramro..its all bout sharing our experiences " and that is very true with my case. And it's obvious that not all will like it. tara bhanchan ni "gadhe pur dil lagi, to pari kya chiz he". Some might take the errors and khoto lekhai as humor, where other might think it as a bad writing. I am not saying this for my case, or my case only. I know there are several flaws in my writing, and it is just practices that will improve it. And I just want to say that I have no hard feelings for Ugly Duckling, i surely take it as an encouragement and as an advice.
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| Poonte |
Posted
on 20-Jun-03 09:48 AM
Ke ho, GIRL123? Lop paryo jasto chha ni ;) ehehehhe
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| Bal Matlab |
Posted
on 20-Jun-03 10:06 AM
Dhat kasto dimag, Aru lekchu bhaneko ta birsi hale tyo arko posting ma...
Ohh ho Poonte jyu testo hansi dine, bhayena ni ma lai ta joker nai banai dinu bhayo.
Onegirl_123 - Ji keho malai testo Bal dine bhaneko, kya ke samjhine hami le tanku:) aru lai. Yo ho nisthuri jamana le malai pani chodena.
Girl_Interrupted - ji Thanks .. I appreciate it
Deep - Jyu, kya bhandine ke, thar class re. Sure sure, mero words lai swimming khelna na aye pani, LIfe jacket kinya chu. They will be floating hehheehe...
Najar - Ji, thanks with all due respect. Very right (left haina ni pheri) on the book thing....
Thut poonte ji le pheri hasayo.... "Lop paryo jasto chha ni" HAHAHA
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| OneGirl_123 |
Posted
on 20-Jun-03 04:05 PM
Poonte no lop sop for me kya! ;) hehe
Balmatlb......tanku ta bhanihaleni! first time wrong person paryo, 2nd time, i got the right person! :)
:)
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| GurL_Interrupted |
Posted
on 21-Jun-03 12:35 AM
Hi ugly duckling,
You wrote, "I don't view from the same window as "lonely" and "Gurl_interrupted" and I am not able to tell you that is a "good writing". " I agree to what you have to say. Different individuals, different perspectives.
I wrote "ramro balmatlab :-)" because I enjyoed reading what he had to say. So, I wrote ramro! I felt he had conveyed his experience well...I understood easily what he had to say, w/o having to look into the dictionary. I felt a presence of life in that piece while reading. And there were times, I exactly felt what he was tryign to say!
My point is I wasn't kissing anyone's ass! I wrote what I felt! Perhaps, I am a bad critic or a bad reader! But u got to remember, "beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder." And this piece was beautiful in my eyes!
*Pardon me, if anything was offending.
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| GurL_Interrupted |
Posted
on 21-Jun-03 12:52 AM
Ke garne, Addicted to appreciating simple things in Life! :-)!
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| Neural |
Posted
on 21-Jun-03 12:55 AM
GI,
Please, carry on this tendency. U wud be at the top one day. :)))) gud luck.
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| Bal Matlab |
Posted
on 21-Jun-03 09:59 AM
OneGirl_123- ji I take your tanku:) and very very tanku:) for the tanku:), yeah i saw that you got it right in the second time..hehe
Girl_Interrupted - Ji thanks a lot, for those words. It really made my day...
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| GurL_Interrupted |
Posted
on 22-Jun-03 12:22 PM
Hi NeuraL,
Thank you for the encouragement and luck. Hajurr ko luck sabbai lagos malai :-)! Same to u as well.
:-) Bal Matlab!
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| forget-me-not |
Posted
on 23-Jun-03 02:45 PM
bal matlab Ji it was really good.
Keep it up....
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| dream_girl |
Posted
on 23-Jun-03 04:22 PM
good one bal matlab Jiu,
lekhdai janu la.....
will be waiting for that...
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| Bal Matlab |
Posted
on 24-Jun-03 10:58 AM
forget-me-not ji - I am glad you liked it.
dream_girl - jiu khusi lagyo tanpai lai mun paryo. Pheri lekhne prayas garamla. Mero tarfa bata sakdo prayas hunecha
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