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| phateko_kattu |
Posted
on 07-Aug-03 08:41 AM
After reading Sitara Ji ko" Vermillion" and Deep dai ko "what did I lose ? ra "chansai chaina",maile pani Nepanglish (nepali + english ) bhasha ma tewa puraune hetu ley yeuta story lekheko chu !!! ..Mero prerana ko shrott Sitara ji lai Guru Ama ra Deep ji lai Guru ba maneko chu !! vhabisshya ma thuprai katha lekhne shakti pawosh bhanera ashique dinu hola ."Hune Biruwa Ko chillo Paat " bhane jhai mero storywriting future yekdamai bright dekchu .hazoor haruley kasto dekhnu huncha kunni ?Affu ta Danger writer paryiyo ..kinaki mero story yeuta WARNING baata suru huncha .
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[All Names , Characters ,Incidents & Places in this story are fictious .resemblance to any person living,dead or featured or to any incident or place is purely coincidental ]:o)
Why God didn't listen to Deepa Kumari ?
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Deepa kumari is a young girl of 18 from himalayas .She has been employed to work as a domestic helper in a foreign country .Bidesh jasto kahilei nagayeko biraano thau ma kaam garna deepa kumari lai kahan mann thiyo ra ?Tara garibi ko kaaran ghar chodna uni baadhya thiyin !Uni yeuti saarhai nai parishrami ra gharko dukkha bujhne keti thiyin .Bidesh ma gayera bhai bahini lai padhaune thulo ichchya cha deepa kumari ko ...tesaile ta aja uni pardesh ma chin .
"Bidesh ayeko pani 1 hafta bhai sakyo ....gharma k-kasto bhai ra hola "...manmanai deepa kumari afno gau ghar samjhinchin .Suddenly she hears someone screaming .Who is that ? she runs towards the noise .Then she discovers that her mistress is crying with pain inside her room .she then tip toes slowly towards the corridor and listens more carefully .she find that her boss is there too .Is my boss beating her up ?he seemed so nice and now she is making her cry .whats happening ?deepa kumari chhatpatina laagin .Ghar ma buda-budi ko jhagada ley garda katai maile jaagir baata haath dhuna parne ta hoina ?yesh bela malai kaam baata nikaalidiyo bhane ma kun mukh liyera ghar jaaney ? kasari bhai-bahini lai padhaune ?
" Hey bhagwaan Pashupatinaath please help them solve thier problems".deepa kumari even begged lord pashupatinaath .
After they left the room ,deepa kumari slowly entered the room and saw that the battleground was scattered with tissues papers all over .Bed was a complete mess .She then cleaned it up .Although she wanted to know why Boss was beating her up ,she dare not asked her mistress as she might say that it was none of her business .
Chutti ko din Deepa Kumari visited her elders who were also working as domestic helper in the country .She explained about the incident to them .Then they asked her "How did your mistress cry ?"
"Uh Ah Ah Uh AH AH AH AH AH Uh AH AH ..Oh Oh Oh Oh Uh AH AH Oh ".Deepa Kumari tried to imitate her mistress .
Her elders burst with laughter .Later they explained her about the crys relatd to conjugal relationship .When she understood ,she said ."Hey bhagwaan I even begged pashupatinath to solve thier problems "
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| phateko_kattu |
Posted
on 07-Aug-03 11:16 AM
In jest ,lekhnai bhulechu :o)
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 07-Aug-03 02:36 PM
Phateko kattu ji:
You called me your "guru ama" and wrote this "In jest" story inspired by Deep ji and Sitara. Well what can I say...
Except,
Great for a virgin writer's virgin attempt at depicting a virgin's virginal experience with the nittygritties of conjugal bliss!
Well,
You forgot to add the warning:
Extra Extra Virgin; .... consume at your own risk armed with a sack of salt if not a box of tissues!
Keep it up... practise makes perfect... as they say! :)
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| khimu |
Posted
on 07-Aug-03 02:54 PM
"mula" phateko- kattu!
suruma ta interesting hudain gairaheko thiyo feri yo end ma k k k hola bhannya ta "naito muni ko kura po rahechha"
la la lekhdai gar ta pani ma jastai rahechhas .
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| tanas |
Posted
on 07-Aug-03 04:39 PM
Torn Underwear Ji,
Opps ! narisaunu hai, maile pani nepali english milayera lekhna la ni...
you claim this story to be your first attempt.. well then as sitara said "practise makes perfect"
:-) I hope you take my comments sportively....
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| phateko_kattu |
Posted
on 07-Aug-03 09:22 PM
OH Hooooo oooooo Sitara ji ,
Guru Ama Nepal ki !!! khai hazoor ko goda yeta lyeaunush ta ,yek choti dhogi dina paryo !!!"practise makes man perfect " bhanne kura ko laagi dherai dherai dhanyabaad cha !! Ani yeutai haraf ma 4-4 wota virgin sabda rakhera pura garne kala dekhera ma aascharya chakit chu !!malai pani sikai dina paryo natra Guru MOm bhanera raat din puja gareko k saar bho ra ?
[Great for a virgin writer's virgin attempt at depicting a virgin's virginal experience with the nittygritties of conjugal bliss]
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Tanas ji
Hazoor ko as.s tan garnu bhayeko cha ki kya ho .khaashai bhanne ho bhane hazoor ko naam Tanned-As.s huna parne hehe .ghaam ma tataayera tan bhayeko rato rato chaak kya :o) Hazoor ko comments lagi dhanyabaad .
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Khimu ,
"naito muni ko kuro " yehan nagarta .Guru Mom lai bhanera tero kaan nimothauna paryo ?:o) Ki Guru Ba lai complain garera tero chaakai chaak ma shishnu water ley jhowaaam jhowaam garera punish garna paryo? You Naughty Boy re kya ajhai .Ma jasto huna ta Story lekhna parcha bujhis khimu ,lekhya chas taile story ??? Tettikai afno level ma malai tanna nakhojta :o)
In Jest .................
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| komal the soft one |
Posted
on 08-Aug-03 06:08 AM
hahahahahahah
Tapai haru ko fighting dekhera pani maja lagchaa.....But i think tapai haru ko dosti ta dami hola hai?????????
kOmaL
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| komal the soft one |
Posted
on 08-Aug-03 06:09 AM
hahahahahahah
Tapai haru ko fighting dekhera pani maja lagchaa.....But i think tapai haru ko dosti ta dami hola hai?????????
kOmaL
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| phateko_kattu |
Posted
on 08-Aug-03 08:10 PM
q
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| phateko_kattu |
Posted
on 08-Aug-03 08:45 PM
Naaito muni ko kuro sunnai nahune 'hahahaha" gari haashi haalne .K bhako ajkal ka taruni harulai huh ?;0)
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| yOuNgBlOoDz |
Posted
on 08-Aug-03 09:57 PM
hahahhaha.. phateko kattu.. ur one hell of a character dude.. u make em all go "hahahah" .. keep up..
yb..
btw narisau ho broda.. tyo story ta naito muni ko kura jastai cha hehehe.. kya kana ke ke lekhya hola bhanya ta.. yeta na uta hath ma jutta jasto.. practice garyo bhane.. sitara di timro guru aama bha ko avasya nai gharbha feel garcha.. la keep up
yb
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| komal the soft one |
Posted
on 09-Aug-03 03:10 AM
Kina ra PHATEKO KATTU.........Hasna pani napaune ni k ho????????????????
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| phateko_kattu |
Posted
on 09-Aug-03 11:24 AM
kalilo Ragat ji
I take your words as compliments :0) Thank you so much !!!
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Komal ji ,
I just remembered Simplegirl ko dialogue to me in another thread called "BOOKWORM". She said to me " Your answer lies in your question ".just as that your answer also lies in your question ;O).Or to be precise ,sometimes you need to ask questions to yourself cause you get better answer .You did laughed at" Naito muni ko kura ",didnt you ?
If not then can you say " Biddhya Nasta ,ajako raat kaatna napaam maile naito muni ko kura padhera haseko hoina !!".Can you ?
In Jest ....................................
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