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| Gunaraj |
Posted
on 17-Aug-03 10:14 AM
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Gazhal ko title ra author hunna bhanne janda jandai, rarakhi basna sakiyena... Sabai tira bata charkiyeko yo man chhatachhulla bhayera pokhiyechha... swikar garnu hola....
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| Nepe |
Posted
on 17-Aug-03 11:30 AM
A rich and flawless ghazal !
My my ! This time Gunaji has brought a ghazal full of rich and novel simile, metaphors and symbols. And every couplet is a mirror of our time, our present, our crisis, quandary, our despair and hopelessness and then a hope. And they are extraordinary mirrors which not only show what happened but also reveal how it happened. The poet does not prescribe any solution, but by telling how it went wrong, he also told us how we can amend it. What a beautiful way of opening our eyes, waking us up !
Samajhdariko seem khetma sahapathko beeu ropethen
Vishwasko khaderi parda mutu dhaajaa phatisakechha
One of the richest metaphors, imagery, tone and grasp of contemporary time in a couplet I ever read.
Wah, Guna ji !
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| Gunaraj |
Posted
on 17-Aug-03 01:29 PM
Thanks, Nepeji..... should I take it your complement "Der Aaya, Durust Aaya"?
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| vivid |
Posted
on 17-Aug-03 01:56 PM
Guna ji,
Couldn't step back without admiring those skillfully cultured pearls of realities, thy luster very mesmerizing indeed.
Sabai tira bata charkiyeko yo man chhatachulla bhayera pokhiyeko bela hajur ko ghazal padna paunda asha ko jhino tusa palauna thalecha.
Sahansilata ko jaagma antmasamman ko garho lagayethen,
Katakchhya ko parra chhutda bharosako bhitto charki sakechha.
Regards!
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| Biswo |
Posted
on 17-Aug-03 05:46 PM
Gunaji,
Enjoyed your ghazal very much. And, missed your stories too. I hope you will come back with one some day in the near future.
Meanwhile, have a rest, as you need one badly now. Wishing you fast recuperation:
Biswo
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| Gunaraj |
Posted
on 17-Aug-03 08:32 PM
Thanks Vividji, please keep on posting your feedback. Tara yespali sarai birahako ghazal bhayo... nothing related to my own life.
Biswoji, ke garne, no time to take a rest. Got to work from Wednesday. "Barma gaye karma sang sangai.. Nepal gaye kapal sang sangai" Hos samhale dekhiko yo daudh dhup (not sure of any fruits) sayad mrityu saiya paryanta chaldai janechha..... I will try to come back with story series soon. (With your encouraging feedback from Nepal, uma has promised not to resist my story writing... hahahaha)
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| GurL_Interrupted |
Posted
on 17-Aug-03 08:33 PM
Wow Guna dai! Beglai prakar ko mithass cha hajurr ko yo gazal ma! Each line is "WHOA!"
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| Rusty |
Posted
on 17-Aug-03 08:41 PM
Guna Bro is back:) Welcome back.. I really enjoyed reading your ghazal. Yeah, when will you be back with your stories? HOw's new baby doing? Wanna hear more ghazals and stories:)
Rusted
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| Gunaraj |
Posted
on 19-Aug-03 08:32 AM
Thanks GI, Rusty!
New baby, old baby both are doing fine. Time permitting, I will come back with stories next month. Ghar mai bhayera pani jhandai 2 months sajha ma aaune phursad/energy thiyena.... eheheheh.
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| Dilasha |
Posted
on 19-Aug-03 09:35 AM
Chaar din ko daudhoop ma thakaai le grasta bhayeko thiyen, tara Guna dai ko yo ghazal aja padna paunda munai kasto haluko bhaera aayo, ajha tesmaathi pahilo choti nepali font download gareko, aja mahasoos bhayo ki maile esto talented kabi ra kathakaar ko koseliharu miss gareko rahechu. Therefore, I will try to go back to his past postings and read as many as possible. Very crisp and refreshing Guna ji. Thank you for sharing it and pls keep it up.
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| Dilasha |
Posted
on 19-Aug-03 10:40 AM
Guna dai ko previous stories padnu paryo bhanya ta, kehi pani bhettaina. Aba kahan khojne maile? :-(
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| Gunaraj |
Posted
on 19-Aug-03 11:52 AM
Dilashaji, Thanks for your interest to go back to my old stories. They are scattered around including Suskera and Paradesh. They might be in sajha archive (if you search by my old name ??!). You can view them in one place at:
http://geocities.com/parakhi2
Gunaraj
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