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| Bhunte |
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on 09-Sep-03 04:40 AM
Its a story of my subash...u must be wondering who is this subash might be right?!?! Its obvious for u to get curious. Ok let me tell u who the subash is.
MY SUBASH...
Sun was glazing in its highest point at midday as i was sitting on the porch at my home, i saw one guy coming all the way from village. He looked very exhausted n perspiring from whole day walking with big carriage. So i came down running to welcome that guy with a glass of water. He was putting down his doko down. And guess what he took out?!?! A real very handsome red chicken. He fluttered right there n try to run away. Sad thing was he was tied on his feet. So he could not be freed. So i asked why is this chicken tied down. Let him off !!! But the porter guy said oh it was a gift from ur grandmother to u. "Wow...really, cool" i said. Actually i was in nepal after many years and she wanted us to eat it which i didnt know. I really fell in love with that chicken. It was a handsome cock. I had never seen such a beautiful big chicken. I asked that guy...is it for me or for the family. And he said well its for family to enjoy eating. Oh no i could not even think of eating such a beautiful thing. I said oh. So i asked is it okey if i could keep it. "well i dont know, its upto u whether u keep it or eat it....i was told to bring here so i brought it..."
I was waiting so much desperatly for my baba to come home. As usual i was waiting for him till late. U know feeding water for that chicken....the chicken took out such a beautiful voice. So i named him Subash!!!
I was waiting desperately for baba to come n was thinking all viable solution to mollify him so that i could persuade him to make Subash mine. I was watching tv but i didn't know when n what time i fell asleep still waiting when my apa will come n i will talk about Subash...
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| Bhunte |
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on 09-Sep-03 04:40 AM
With the smooth soft moutain breeze caressing my skin make me aware its getting morning. I could feel light sunrays reflecting in my windows with glitter shinning in its own beautiful natural prism. As usual i was expecting to hear beautiful chirping voice of sparrows singing in my front yard...but today what i heard was so refreshing n so rejuvenating. CUUCKRIA CKAH....!!! pondering n lingering in my own thoughts...i came to realize that was subash...MY SUBASH!!! I just jerked from my bed n swifted like the spring wind to reach to my baba...
"BABA...BABA, did u hear that..listen!!! can u hear that??? will u wake up...guess who is singing on the roof!!!" i was shaking him so much....wish he would wake up. At last i was able to make him awake. And he said whats that noise. Oh its of chicken....how come we got chicken here. N i said well bajai send us as a gift. Will u go up n see....we got such a gargantaun pulchrituding handsome chicken.. can u hear him chanting in such a lovely voice baba!!! listen... " And i could hear subash trying his best to splurg off here n there fluttering his shiny scarlett wings to huff here n there.
"Arrrgh....ok ok ok...i m awake now" i could feel baba trying evade my lucid ecstasy. At last i could make him move. So i hold my baba's arm n pull him up the roof to see my subash. He was also astounded to see such a pompous chicken. I could read from his face that he also liked the chicken from his expression which i could read it. " oh baba...can i keep it, can i?!!... i fell in love with it. i even named him subash... Dont u find it so appropriate to him!!!..." n i was trying assuage him my best way to keep him.
"common ...we can't keep it...its for eating. Ur boju send us to enjoy eating not for pet" baba was forging me and i was still so adament and more in love..." pliz baba, i will take very good care of him...i will even juxtapose anything u tell me to do...just let me keep it pliz baba!!!" i was persisting him so much..." he will be a good entourage for me since tomy died n u won't be home all the time..., i want him as my pet...pliz pliz pliz let me keep it!!!..." he could see my eyes so bright n shining for how much i wanted that subash to mine...."
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| Bhunte |
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on 09-Sep-03 04:41 AM
"Only in one condition" baba said to me...."oh any condition will be fine with me...." breath began to climb the intense of euphoria. "u have to feed him in time n i dont want any dirtyness around...." i jumped in air to applause " oh baba....i love u so much....now i can call him my subash....How does it sound...MY SUBASH" i could feel him nodding with in my exuberant peurile behavior.
Oh god...i would just bask on green grass and would watch my subash for how beautiful n protective he seemed. I would feed him water n cereals. I would go near by n sit for hours telling him my funny funny stories. He would wink on me with his cute little eyes and he would make humorous expression. And he would flutter here n there singing in his unique celestial voice. Cuckkuurrrriuuuuuuuuuuuu ckwaaaaaaaak!!!
I would laugh n i would sing for him. He has become so conspicous around my neighborhood. Everybody would notice him and halt for a moment to see my subash n make a greet n would walk away. My frens would come to visit me n say..."wow, what a chivalry fren u got there....always keeping an eye on u....u r lucky!!!" Everybody fell in love with subash.
As one midday, i went to meet my best fren at roof whether he is doing fine or not. i saw my subash teetering here n there in the reiling. i had been very vigilent with him but still i could feel something missing n could tell that his hub of attention were somewhere else. Sometimes i could see him bovinly moving here n there n sometimes he would act in such a mischevious way. I could not figure it out what is eating him so much...
As i time passed by...as i was basking on turf enjoying the fresh shades of tree and i heard someone clearing the throat..."uhummm uhummm uhummmm..." a old man next to my home was calling me. He had a small land infront of my house where he used to plant corns n grains. What i saw was a funny looking spotty hen in his hand. I dont know i find it so cute n so alluring. Now i could feel why subash was acting so strange way. The old man asked my permission whether it is okey to let subash meet her. I said sure...why not. Can u believe....i could see subash so happy. Guess what?!? I christen the hen SOBHA.." I told to sobha that from now on wards...u will be sobha of our subash!!! n to our home. Since then sobha would come to visit frequently to meet subash escorted by old man. I thanked the old man for being so pensive of my subash.
As time flew by, sobha's visit come out to be lessening. My poor subash was feeling so sad n frivolous on reiling. What i notice later was subash could see sobha herding in the far distance field. Oh my subash was so desperate. One fine winter day...as i was watching tv on my living room next to window....subash tried to kill himself...it was acute suicide actually. He was trying to get sobha desperately which was beyong his reach....so he tried to kill himself throwing from such a tall roof to die for sobha. "oh my goodness....subash....hold on i m coming..." i swift like wind to catch him from roof. His feet got stuck on one of the wire. He nearly died. I had no idea what to do....so i called my gaurd to get something down to get hold of subash....at last we made it. Subash was safe n sound!!!
I really scolded subash for his silly impish act n consoled him that someday sobha will come to meet him. As i was sitting on porch one day..."tick tick tick...." i heard the sound of nail ticking on cement ground. I peeked slightly from the corner of eye...."guess who was it....SOBHA....our subash's sobha has come to meet my subash...." oh god, i was so happy. Really i mean it. Sobha has become little slimmer and little active. She was hiding in corner so i may not find her....but i acted as if i haven't seen her. Sobha climbed the stairs and met my subash. Oh how happy i could see those couple there in roof top. Subash was even more pompous now with sobha. N sobha i could see fluttering her unique black n white spotty wings to tease subash!!!
As time pass by....sobha's visit came out to be frequent one. I was so happy to see happy couple being hub of my sweet home and limelight of our neighborhood.
One day...as i was sitting on the porch as usual....i sense something in the gate. Oh my goodness.......sobha was there with my subash's children....they got four cute children. N sobha was hustling n bustling there so that nobody could see her n her baby there. She brought them to meet their baba....My subash!!! Wow....i felt so happy that my subash got such a lovely family.... I was so so so so much desperatly waiting for baba to tell the whole story....wondering when he will come n i will tell such a benedicting story of my subash...
I told whole story one by one without breathing to my baba. He could not believe at first and later he saw with his own eyes. I could feel he was relishing the delirious act of subash n the family bunch!!!
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| Bhunte |
Posted
on 09-Sep-03 04:43 AM
my subash....
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| Rusty |
Posted
on 10-Sep-03 07:13 AM
Uff!! Balla balla padhera sake. Very nice, you and your Subash! Also great picture:)
Tara yo bhale ko photo dekhera, malai tyo ratoo bhalee kwaa kwaa sutkeri lai kuwa, sutkeri ko niew pari tauko maile khaye..bhanne geet yaad aayo.
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