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| Lekhak |
Posted
on 29-Oct-03 11:25 AM
"So she appeared to be trying to talk to me or something.."
"Wait, wait. Back up. You see, I need the full detail as it happened. I can analyze your situation better that way. As your psychiatrist, you need to tell me everything that happened, the way you saw it unfold."
"Hmmm. Well, I am not very good in black jack and I was getting dirty stares from people whose game I was ruining by making bad calls. I thus, left the table and went to the Red-Russian-roulette,one of the hottest table they had going. It seemed exciting, so I joined the group. I missed my first call and was very close in the second one. This time, I picked number 7 and I was allowed to place the ball in the roulette when I insisted. the wheel was lowering its momentum when all of a sudden, I see this woman, in red dress. No it was maroon, skirts going knee high. I couldn't take my eyes away from her for a while and I heard the guy next to me saying, 'Congrautulations.' Yes, the ball stopped right on number 7. I had the feeling something was going to happen, didn't know at that time
whether it was for good or for bad."
"Interesting, go on. Be more vivid if you can."
"I didn't see her for next 20 minutes or so. Then I left the table for a quick rest room break. I went in and came out and all of a sudden I saw this lady right outside of the rest room,as if, as if she was waiting for me. She coughed and immediately started walking. Being so naive in these things, I couldn't tell if it was a signal or just a simple routine. I kept staring at her, she went to the elevator.
I retracted towards the Red-Russian_roulette. I was winning so far, something I never thought I was capable of doing in a casino. Specially because this was an American Roulette- even though the name was Russian, with extra '00' number,increasing the house odds and decreasing our chances of winning.
But, I really was winning, close to 4,000, at that time. I think. But, I just couldn't help thinking about that woman. She had a different level of seduction in her, I swear."
"During all this time, had she ever made an eye contact with you?"
"No, not yet. I guess you can say it was only me. Then I saw her again, upstairs. Wearing a mink coat, I guess the A.C. was too high over there. I am telling you, she looked killingly beautiful. At that time
no money could come close to this maid."
"Just a sec. Let me turn the tape over. You can listen to this recording for yourself after the session is over."
"So, I was saying...I just couldn't stop myself. I thus followed her upstairs. I was trying to think why I was drawn to a woman this bad. I then realized within myself, that her face looked familiar. I tried not to think where I had met her before, as I just wanted to admire her beauty at that time. Remember, you told me not to. They had another Roulette table their, of the same kind. They had one on each floor, I guess. My
dream lady, was screaming with excitement, drawing attention from all the crowd in that table. I ceased the oppertunity and approached close to the table. I could smell the distinctive perfume coming out of her. You, know, you look familiar, I thought to myself, but didn't say a word. She would show her sad face everytime she loose the bet and start jumping up and down everytime she won. She was the queen of the crowd, my lady
in red."
"maroon!"
"Yeah, Maroon. Her aroma was an invitation, don't know why but I felt it was an invitation for a disaster.
Didn't know what was gonna happen, my feet just dragged me closer to her. I've heard stories, bad ones. I just didn't care at that time. Continued.
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| Lekhak |
Posted
on 29-Oct-03 08:18 PM
Will come with the rest next week.
By the way, this was inspired by many of the past posters who complained my stories only involve with death.
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| KaLaNkIsThAn |
Posted
on 29-Oct-03 09:09 PM
Shooooot!
Why the hell did I read this?
Now I have to wait till next week? eeh! Comeon dude, Finish it and post the whole thing please, you are not supposed to torture us like that. eh!
Grippppppppping Narration!!
Should I say more? eh... I will, after you finish this thing!! ;)
Jaawosh Jaawosh!!
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| Lekhak |
Posted
on 30-Oct-03 06:58 AM
Promise to finish it, just for you. Even if it is one reader, it is worth the effort. Say what?
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| Deep |
Posted
on 30-Oct-03 07:06 AM
Lekhak,
kaha euta matrai paathak? hami ke jiudai chhainam ra? meri bassai!
jamal ma saajh saajh tira maghe jhari ma tyampu kurya jasari kuri ra chhu prabho-bhag dui lai.
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| isolated freak |
Posted
on 30-Oct-03 07:07 AM
and what happened next? .. come on dude, post the second, third and the concluding part befopre i go realist.
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| isolated freak |
Posted
on 30-Oct-03 07:15 AM
I don't normally say it, but after reading the above piece by lekhak, I have to say, feichang hao (extremely good).
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| KaLaNkIsThAn |
Posted
on 30-Oct-03 07:30 AM
Ooooh, i enjoyed being an exclusive reader for a while.... eh! Lekhak, Jawosh Jawosh!! ;)
Deep bro,
Tyo maaghe jhari ma "100 hunder" khaa ko, frozen egg dine kukhura ko pothi jasto yo hazur ko ke haal bhaa ko? Kaa haal baa ni tohar babua??
St. Mary's ko taruni haru ta Bus ma po aauchan ni meri basssai, kaa ko tampoo-tampoo chahardai hinibakshya ni? Tyampoo ma ta tyo "sarkari officerni" haru matrai hunchan ni ho, sappai kitab kitab haru...
Kitab ke, book .. eh, boodhi kanya! ;)
Hazur ko yesto rahar laagdo "jawani jaaneman hasin dil ruba" umer ma ni aba ke ko kitab kitab herdai hinya ni? yesso "khaati" kuro herdai hidna chodera...
Phew... (JPT)
*** Lekhak bro ko next installment na aayesamma yo thread lai uchalnu paryo ni.... Swatram parne gari.. eh..
Iso, teach me how to swear in chinese, please! :D
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| isolated freak |
Posted
on 30-Oct-03 08:11 AM
kalanki bro,
kina gaali garna sikne bro? gaali garnu ramro hoina.
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| Deep |
Posted
on 30-Oct-03 08:31 AM
Kalanki bro,
Aba nagarnu gaf chutna suru gari haliyo kere --lekhak le bhag dui napele samma yo mancha ta aba hamrai ho--ta lagam gaf gaaf ma--kaso?
"Tyo maaghe jhari ma "100 hunder" khaa ko, frozen egg dine kukhura ko pothi jasto yo hazur ko ke haal bhaa ko? Kaa haal baa ni tohar babua?? "
Khai yasko barema ta malai tha bhe na--afu pothi sothi ni pariyena-- ke kasto hal hunthyo kasko kati lumbar ko hundar ma tyo pani tha chhaina, bro. saajh saajh tira maghe jhari ma tyampu kurya bhannu ko sidha artha pratikhsya ko tibrata lai lakshit garnu thyo lekhak ko sambhandhit prastutiko--
ani hamaar haal to bawaaal hoi gawa--lungi udi gawa hawame sauni ki chhori ke sang jora jori me--
"St. Mary's ko taruni haru ta Bus ma po aauchan ni meri basssai, kaa ko tampoo-tampoo chahardai hinibakshya ni? Tyampoo ma ta tyo "sarkari officerni" haru matrai hunchan ni ho, sappai kitab kitab haru...
Kitab ke, book .. eh, boodhi kanya! ;) "
mathi nai bhani sake ma pothi sothi haina bhanera--malai cent meriz ko bas ma ke hulthe meri bassai! haha kaar bhai haltyo ni--maghe jhari ko saajh ma usai ta ma already rankira huni ek ghanta aghi paan garya twat le---jhan cent meriz ko basa chhirera "ma ta timro ghanashyam timi meri radha piyari" bhanne ke dinthe?
Aba jhyal bahira bata bus sus hernu satta ta baru makhan ma ---[bhaigo yo kuro na kotyam]. feri ma kalanki bro jasto kuniyat le tyampu takne ni ta haina ni--heri.
"Hazur ko yesto rahar laagdo "jawani jaaneman hasin dil ruba" umer ma .."
Kalanki lai sauni ki chhorile sabai bhanisaki ki ke ho mero barema?---yasso ek duita kura ta sekret rakhnu hai---tyo kalanki bro ali senti chha bhanethe---birsi chha kyare!
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| decadence |
Posted
on 30-Oct-03 08:34 AM
me too an avid reader. plz post the concluding parts soon
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| DWI |
Posted
on 30-Oct-03 01:32 PM
Now it is even more worthwhile. I just finished half of the remaining half. I promise that it will be up by Tuesday.
Deep,
Hope to see more from you too. I have taken a lot of your and other Sajhabasis suggestions this time.
Isolated freak,
My Chinese mitra. You know it means a lot to me. Mushi Mushi (is that Japanese or Chinese?). Do read next week.
Decadence thanks.
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| Lekhak |
Posted
on 30-Oct-03 02:46 PM
I keep mixing with my handles, as girl_interrupted would say, Sawiee
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 30-Oct-03 02:56 PM
Right Hand(le) is Lekhak(writer); Left is DWI(drunk while inscribing)????
You might want to practise, lef, ri, lef, ri.... ( like I do with the pre-schoolers) so your hand(les) don't get mixed up!
:P
Finally, whew.... Lekhak back with a gripping story. Kalanki, stop griping.... wyaat, wyaat thuley, wyaatting is a bhirtue!
;)
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| nepali_angel |
Posted
on 30-Oct-03 07:23 PM
Have you watched a movie called Deer Hunter, DWI? Now it's about Russian Roulette, and it's a must-see. I rather see death involved in your stories....makes it more interesting.
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| kaLANkiSThAN |
Posted
on 30-Oct-03 08:26 PM
One thing is proven!
I always thought Lekhak was Oys. LOL! I always had a doubt about it. I even interrogated Oys, haha.. and he denied -- "Kaa daai ma kaa bata Lekhak hunu ni" bhandai. LOL! I believed Oys, but I still had a hunch. So, DWI bro is Lekhak? Luki Luki Lekhdine? eh... aaaaaaaanch bro!
I also thought that the story was about "russian roulette" as shown in the movie "Deer Hunter" since the story was written by none other than Lekhak eh! (By the way, that was one of the most horrifying scenes in the movie... eh.. Memorable one though).
So, here I am, still waiting for tuesday! ;) Tuesday you said, didn't you. ;) hahaha!!!! natraaaaaaaaa... grrrrr.
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| isolated freak |
Posted
on 31-Oct-03 07:29 AM
Isolated freak,
My Chinese mitra. You know it means a lot to me. Mushi Mushi (is that Japanese or Chinese?). Do read next week
DWI,
My fellow analyst mitra, if we don't appreciate the good things taht we come across, what's the whole point of living? life is about appreciating the beauty of people, words and creations, hoina ra?
Mushi Mushi is Japanese for hello. Xie Xie ni is Chinese for thank you. :-)
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| KALANKISTHAN |
Posted
on 05-Nov-03 09:52 PM
KHOI TA?
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| Ghost |
Posted
on 05-Nov-03 10:59 PM
DWI,
It's Moshi Moshi and it means "hello" but you only use it when you answer the phone. Otherwise just say "konnichiwa"
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| isolated freak |
Posted
on 06-Nov-03 07:15 AM
when is the second part coming out?
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| Lekhak |
Posted
on 06-Nov-03 08:01 AM
Lau maryo
Kalanki, I apologize for the delay. About the revelation of my other persona (DWI), that was declared in my last works and also when you click the 'Lekhak' personal info link.
Thanks for all your support so far.
Isolated brother, I will make every effort possible to post it by tonight. 80% of the 2nd half is completed, only the climax is left. Just to assure you, the climax was thought before I even started writing, so there won't be any changes. Thanks for following through. I meant, Xie Xie ni.
Ghost! Konichiwa!
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| Lekhak |
Posted
on 06-Nov-03 09:09 PM
Please refer to 'RED ROULETTE: End Game' thread for the conclusion to this story.
Lekhak.
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