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| khimu |
Posted
on 12-Nov-03 12:49 PM
weel ago, waiting on collagehouse steps , i saw something i had never seen before . My back against the warm brick wall, in happy prospect, i started towards the red-orange of autumn on a tree. At the very center of my concentration was a single leaf; a torn yellow-green, not even red yet. But it feel. I saw the precise moment of release- the instant the leaf actually disconnected from the branch. It was the brevity of perfection .
Partition in sunderance , as ambilicus severed, a future unlatched; an end and a beginning . There was an enternity within; the filian unity; the brif stroggle for scape, then the sudden absence of support, and from an empathic vicariousness i found meself.
I found my entire life an instant; I sat up, in respect and humility. The leaf swung, in descending pendulum . I rose to grab it, then stopped. I was standing in a small pile of wet and shredded leaves. The leaf, left it by a breez, slowed, suspended, paused then rolled over on itself. I knew that one day this leaf too, would crumble into a crust of sinew and stem, so i let the leaf continue, rising upward.
The leaf waltzed in an arbit around itself. Other fell around it, but I kept my attention. This leaf was lighter. It tool its time. The torn yellow leaf, becaise of its shape, spun differently than the rest. The leaf was continually tossed up in erregular oscillations, gaining further distance, until it came near the wall of the building. As the wild approached the brick collagehouse, the air was forced up and over, trying to pull the leaf along with it.
The leaf riched up, against gravity, and against the lacerated shreds below. It hungm pulled up and down by destiny and srlf-aspiration . But it was the prograss, action and direction of the moment that mattered. I found timelessness. What the leaf meant as a whole, was that the leaf meant at each moment. And at this moment, the leaf is hanging by its green stem - is it at the point of release- it is falling - it is floating - and it is rising over the brick collsgehouse.
peace of mind
khimu
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| DWI |
Posted
on 12-Nov-03 01:08 PM
Ke ho Khimu?
Reminds me of old Pink Floyd days when one would gaze at every trivial item and try to solve the mysteries of the nature.
Liked the contents, but some words were totally our of my vocabulary.
Testo lekhera ke ko peace of mind?
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| L-a-x |
Posted
on 12-Nov-03 01:13 PM
good one khimbu..
i was also wondering at times, its so difficult to pass time..no one has a moemnt to talk and everyone is busy like a machine...their assignments due and stuff....I miss home at this instances, and feel lonely and lost int he croud. No one has a moment to say hi....and you are surrounded by all the people who are least bothered if abything happens to him/her.
Good thought Khimbu....Keep writing...I am not god at writing but read alot....esp in sajha..
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| john doe |
Posted
on 12-Nov-03 01:18 PM
Khimu, that was deep! Keep up the good work!
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| saroj |
Posted
on 12-Nov-03 01:37 PM
Not meaning to sound judgemental here, but I highly doubt this is Khimu's original piece. Having known khimu since his nuwaran days on sajha a little while ago, I know this is beyond his current scope of vision to write something like this.
Just because someone posts something here, doesn't mean he wrote it!
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| confused |
Posted
on 12-Nov-03 01:41 PM
its an awesome peice...good goin khimbu
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| khimu |
Posted
on 12-Nov-03 04:05 PM
sorry for misspeal gareko ma
i always do f*ck myself
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| sankaa |
Posted
on 12-Nov-03 04:58 PM
dyammmm khimu bro, if it is yor work then you're a genious.. .good job bro...
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| saroj |
Posted
on 12-Nov-03 05:11 PM
Hey Khimu, it is better for you to accept the truth than for somebody else to find out.
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| sankaa |
Posted
on 12-Nov-03 05:40 PM
hate to do this for you khimu bru but i hate plagiarism.. please be sensitive on such serious matters ....
btw, did you change first few words in the article so it couldn't be google?? nice though..sorry mannn
http://www.conncoll.edu/admissions/essays/alford.html
love,
sankaa 007 ;)
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| sankaa |
Posted
on 12-Nov-03 05:43 PM
* btw, did you change first few words in the article so it couldn't be googled?? nice thought..but sorry mannn
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| sankaa |
Posted
on 12-Nov-03 05:55 PM
last line written by Philip:
it is falling - it is floating - and it is rising over the brick red schoolhouse.
Last line written by Khimu:
- it is falling - it is floating - and it is rising over the brick collsgehouse.
hhaha khimu.. looks like schoolhouse has been broken down and now they have built the "collsgehouse" eh?
bhai, it takes some time to come up with a nice thing so please be patient and do not do anyting like this again...
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| lonely1 |
Posted
on 12-Nov-03 05:57 PM
What the heck r u doing khime?
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| L-a-x |
Posted
on 12-Nov-03 06:05 PM
Anyway, this was a nice article....even if it is not khimbu's original....
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| lonely1 |
Posted
on 12-Nov-03 06:10 PM
If you are posting something for us to read, give at least the credit, you know, and we will all appreciate your thoughtfulness. The worst thing one can do is pretend to be someone you are not or take credit for something you did not do. Even Private Jessica Lynch says that. You are supposed to be Nepal aamako saput!!!!
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| khimu |
Posted
on 12-Nov-03 06:22 PM
what the heck!
ya, thats not mine
i got book some kinda bunch of ESSAY on it but i really like this one so i stick it on SAJHA
don't blame me
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| sankaa |
Posted
on 12-Nov-03 06:28 PM
now you're mad huh??? bru, you can't just copy paste someone's work and post it like this without giving any credit to the original writer. Also, if you had clean intention on sharing Philip's work, without pretending it to be yours, then why the HELL did you change few lines in the begenning para, deleted a whole para and changed some words in the last line(some obvious changes).
I thought after getting busted you will come and say sorry or something but you are mad now.... thats nasty...
take it easy bru...
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| ru |
Posted
on 12-Nov-03 06:33 PM
khimu,
The issue is not centered on posting some "borrowed" thought-provoking essay...and the comments so far do laud that aspect of the posting...but to remain aloof and not clarify the "source" on your second visit, especially when plagiarism has been contemplated prior in the thread....this tarnishes your credibility if nothing else.
again, mero dui paisa.
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| phateko_kattu |
Posted
on 12-Nov-03 09:14 PM
Khimu ley testo lekhna sakne bhaye ta sungoor ley swarga dekhi halcha ni .ki kasho khimu ji ?..hehe
Sabaile khatra khatra english ma message post gareko dekhera hamro khimu ji lai pani uniharu sanga competition garne jhok chalyo .Uhaan ko affno english vocabulary fractured cha ....ani aru ko na chorera k garosh ta bichara .
Tara uhaan ko chorne style chahi nikkai dangerous cha hai .Naani dekhi lageko Baani ho ki ba !!
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| u_day |
Posted
on 13-Nov-03 01:40 AM
That peice reminds me of the movie "American Beauty": A character of the movie, a highschool student, who is mostly high and dazed videotapes an empty plastic bag floating in the air. The bag was empty yet it contains so much meaning. It kept floating in the autumn breeze just like the leaf in the article above. The plastic bag doesn't have the destination; it doesn't know where it can came from and where the wild wind is going to land it, yet it goes with the flow of the wind until it lands on an unknown place.
( Source: movie "American Beauty" starring kevin spacey, Mina Savari...a new guy and the gurl from the movie 'The Ghost' and others. In theatre near you about two years ago)
Ok! I cited my source. Sankaa ji, now you don't go jalaying Lanka saying that I copied and pasted somebody else's article.
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BTW, Khimu is speechless now that sankaa googled the source of the article.
Tyahi,
U-day
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| sankaa |
Posted
on 13-Nov-03 01:56 AM
punk....
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| sankaa |
Posted
on 13-Nov-03 02:01 AM
i wasn't trying to be an smart azzz but just letting this bhai know that using other's work without crediting them is not good.. ..
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