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| patali |
Posted
on 17-Nov-03 02:21 PM
....... ..A special world for you and me
A special bond one cannot see
It wraps us up in its cocoon
And holds us fiercely in its womb.
Its fingers spread like fine spun gold
Gently nestling us to the fold
Like silken thread it holds us fast
Bonds like this are meant to last.
And though at times a thread may break
A new one forms in its wake
To bind us closer and keep us strong
In a special world, where we belong.
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| Prem Charo |
Posted
on 17-Nov-03 05:46 PM
Patali,
Is this Kabita dedicated to Rusty ? If so,
Rusty Congrat !!!!
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| Rusty |
Posted
on 18-Nov-03 08:48 AM
Wow, wow, Patali,
"And though at times a thread may break
A new one forms in its wake
To bind us closer and keep us strong
In a special world, where we belong."
how romantic and expressive, yet very simple to comprehend:-)
Love Bird,
how about rerouting this poem toward you:P
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| Biruwa |
Posted
on 18-Nov-03 09:28 AM
The poem you design
makes me feign
that poems can be made
by such a fine maid.
-called patali
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| Biruwa |
Posted
on 18-Nov-03 09:29 AM
he poem you design
makes me feign
that poems can be made
by such a fine maid.
-called patali.
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| Bhunte |
Posted
on 18-Nov-03 03:51 PM
Patali, it is another fine piece from you again. I name the title of the kabita as "Cocoon". It is as beautiful as the pic below:
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| patali |
Posted
on 18-Nov-03 04:02 PM
Thanx everybody...... ho ni lovebird ji..yo ta merai rutsyjiu ko lagi nai ta ho ni....rustyji...ke garnu sadha, simple jiwan bhayeko manchhe pare...sahityik ra diplomatic lekhna ta jyan gaye aaundai aaundaina...baru siknu aam ki kya ho..:p
Bhunteji...malai ta tyo " coccon" le monalisa ko jhajhalko nai metayo....
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| NSS |
Posted
on 18-Nov-03 04:19 PM
Patalis aspiration to be impregnated is splendid. Never heard such a beautiful expression to attract a mate to mate, in a great heat(?). An inception of Real Feminism in Sajha. Shajhalis with Patali's number/home address...This is a chance of life time..... :)
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