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RATO MOJA: Guna's story #12

   <font face="kantipur" size="+3"> /ftf] 24-Nov-03 Gunaraj
     <font face="kantipur" size="+1"> cfh km 24-Nov-03 Gunaraj
       Awesome! 25-Nov-03 Manavi
         Lekhna ta lekhne ho tapai manche Guna ji 25-Nov-03 Marich
           Tee mori Dolma le RAATO KATTU lukayeki b 25-Nov-03 Poonte
             Thank you Manavi, Marchi and Poonteji 25-Nov-03 Gunaraj
               hehehe Poonte , Rato kattu haruanu bhand 25-Nov-03 marich
                 gunaraj jee.. YOu should realize that s 25-Nov-03 Recon
                   Reconji, Thank you for your feedback. 25-Nov-03 Gunaraj
                     Gunadai Gajjab chha ni story...i was 25-Nov-03 L-a-x
                       Gunaji! Tapainko chhuttai cha. rasilo 25-Nov-03 jira
                         Guna Rajji, A good one. Sabai field t 25-Nov-03 Biswo
                           Guna bro, Ekdam ramro cha. Biswo le bha 25-Nov-03 Rusty
                             Gunaraj jee ka to baat he alug hai! You' 25-Nov-03 Doctor Bee
                               L-a-x, Jira, Rusty, Biwso, Doctor Bee T 25-Nov-03 Gunaraj
                                 Guna Rajji, yet another awsome story of 25-Nov-03 chipledhunga
                                   Chipleji... bado utsukata bho? sarai bho 25-Nov-03 Gunaraj
                                     <font face="Kantipur" size="+1"> u'g/fhh 26-Nov-03 akawi
                                       dayummmm! Guna bro, seushi raicha ni 28-Nov-03 KaLaNkIsThAn
Mr G. I thought you have renounced st 30-Nov-03 NSS
   kala akshyar bhainsi barabar.......tee k 05-Dec-03 patali


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Gunaraj Posted on 24-Nov-03 11:48 PM


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Gunaraj Posted on 24-Nov-03 11:49 PM


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Manavi Posted on 25-Nov-03 12:58 AM

Awesome!
Marich Posted on 25-Nov-03 08:31 AM

Lekhna ta lekhne ho tapai manche Guna ji..

Malai man pareko line : pgnfO{ yfxf lyof] pgsf] s[ofsnfk ;dfhdf ljleGg cfj/0fx?n] 9flsP/ klg kf/bzL{ lyP

Aru pani padhana pau
Poonte Posted on 25-Nov-03 08:47 AM

Tee mori Dolma le RAATO KATTU lukayeki bhaye po tension hunthyo ni...haakim Durge pani asaadhai nachahine kura ma tension linae raichha...

"RATO MOJA matra fukaleko...RAATO KATTU ta aafnai jyan mai tassera baseko thiyo...maile kehi birayeko chhaina" bhanera daabi garna milthyo ni...hera, bekaar ma paanch-paanch jor RAATO MOJA ko satyaanaash! Baru yo chiso ma tyo bheda ko oon ko moja re...sab jalauna satta aek-dui jor tei KISNE laai diyeko bhayeni dharma ta laagthyo hola ni gaanthe! ;)

Awesome, Guna jee...as always!

Yo Mariche ko pani dherai pachhi darshan paiyo...sab kushal mangalai hola...

GUNA jee...aru pani lekhdai garam hai...padhna ni majja aaune...puraana sathi haru lai bhetne mouka ni paine...
Gunaraj Posted on 25-Nov-03 08:52 AM

Thank you Manavi, Marchi and Poonteji

Achel kam le peleko chha, pahile jasto lekhne phursad pani paindaina.... dherai din bho sathi haru sanga bhet ghat nabhako bhanera hijo rati jamarko gareko.... Uma le khusi khusi story (nss le bhane jastai life ka narration) lekhna diyeko hijai ho la....
marich Posted on 25-Nov-03 08:58 AM

hehehe Poonte , Rato kattu haruanu bhanda moja haryeko nai thik.. Durga Jilai pheri rato Lagaunti " Thong " lagaune sokh hola.. aajaka naya hakima haru..ke tha .. Bekarma dolmaki aamale Rato gundruk bhanera pakaidya bhe dolmako bauko pheri bihe hunthyo ..kurai garda ni dar po lagcha..Nepal ta arkai po bha cha ta ..

Poonte dc tiraai ho ki new york gai sakya ho..

Recon Posted on 25-Nov-03 09:00 AM

gunaraj jee..
YOu should realize that some people don't have nepali font ...and they could be using it from work
Gunaraj Posted on 25-Nov-03 09:33 AM

Reconji,

Thank you for your feedback. I am aware that many visitors do not have right fonts to read nepali script and some of them can't install the required fonts in their computer at work. I do no know if creating pdf file helps in this matter. If it does, my works are available at
http://www.geocities.com/parakhi2/

I started my writing with the primary objective of reintroducing Nepali scripts among Sajha visitors. Since then I have seen many other sajhaities writing in Nepali scripts here in the general Kurakani section and elsewhere. Many have installed required fonts to read several articles, including from Nepe, myself and some other writers.

I can't translate my stories in English at this moment. Roman English is not good for long stories. I will try some other options such as creating jpg files and upload them one page at a time. I am not sure, if I have that expertise and time to accomplish this soon.

Once again, thank you very much for your concern.
L-a-x Posted on 25-Nov-03 11:55 AM

Gunadai

Gajjab chha ni story...i was like...suntala pakeko napakeko chamne re....haha.. kasto bhasa ho yo....maile ta kahile sunya thiyena..

dai, story ramo thiyo....I liked reading it...when is the next one coming..and I really liked when you wrote "Uma le khusi khusi story (nss le bhane jastai life ka narration) lekhna diyeko hijai ho la.... ". Uma bhuju lai mero binamra aanurodh..yesto saro garna bhayena ni hamro Guna DAi lai..uhaha le chat ta garna chodnu bhayo...aaba yo ni bhanda bhayo bhane ta pheri sadhu bannu hola ni..
jira Posted on 25-Nov-03 02:39 PM

Gunaji!

Tapainko chhuttai cha. rasilo.

woohi,
Nepathyabata ghumiraheko fan
Biswo Posted on 25-Nov-03 04:05 PM

Guna Rajji,

A good one. Sabai field tira ko aafaile dekhe-bhogeko anubhab ta haina bhaneko?
Rusty Posted on 25-Nov-03 04:38 PM

Guna bro,
Ekdam ramro cha. Biswo le bhane jastai sabai tapai ko aafnai katha ta haina? ehe.. Anyways...it was an awesome piece.
Doctor Bee Posted on 25-Nov-03 04:42 PM

Gunaraj jee ka to baat he alug hai! You're DA BOMB.

Doctor Bee
Gunaraj Posted on 25-Nov-03 05:35 PM

L-a-x, Jira, Rusty, Biwso, Doctor Bee
Thank you all for reading and also for your good feedback.

L-a-x ji... achel gunaraj ra umako sambandha sudhar bha'ko chha.. chat chhode dekhi... story ma chain jhataro aaundaina hola.... arko mahina tira pheri arko story liyera aauna... ahile ta uma ko bhanda pani mero professor ko hat chha malai story lekhna nadinuma...

Jiraji, bharkhar tapainko wrinting padhera pharkeko... tin tira bata tera kurako prasanga milayera tungyaune kala siknu chha tapainsanga.

Biswoji, tyo ta story ma phulbutta bharda bhardai kasko kura halinchha thamyuna garo parchha ni...srimati chain dui ta chora kathmandu ma rakhera padhauna baseko bhanne kura pani parekole.....afnai chain hoina ki? durganarayan dai ko mati afulai teti khera aaidiya bhaye.....

Rusty bro.... kura aijan aijan

Doctor Bee-ji... khai ke bhanam.... chhodna ta sano pataka chhodeko ho... padkinda bomb bhayera padkyo bhane mero ke dosh?

More later.....
chipledhunga Posted on 25-Nov-03 05:51 PM

Guna Rajji, yet another awsome story of yours. Ani tespachi ke bho sunu na. Tee dui jana pheri farkera ae? Saachi pet bokeko ho rahicha? Ani Durga Narayan tespachi tetai nai kaam garirahe ki antai saruwa bhae?

Looking forward to more of your stories.
Gunaraj Posted on 25-Nov-03 06:04 PM

Chipleji... bado utsukata bho? sarai bho? upsamhar pani lekhi diun?

tyo dolma le pet bokeki chain rainachha... gauma dukha bhayeko le hakim sap le jagir laidinchha ki bhanera jyan sumpeki chain raichha... tara uplabdhi chain bhayena... uso ta usko jyan sanga khelne hamra durganarayan matrai chain hoinan re....

durganarayan lai ke bhaho hola? tesko ali pachhi durganarayan le durgam bata saruwa milayera sugam tira aaye... tyo purano office ma chain rato moja ko katha matra banki bhayo re......
akawi Posted on 26-Nov-03 01:20 AM

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KaLaNkIsThAn Posted on 28-Nov-03 06:02 AM

dayummmm!

Guna bro, seushi raicha ni katha ta.. ;)
tkfO+sf] syf dnfO lgSs} dg kof]{ . (akawi le lekhya cut and paste handyaa hehe). Bro ko katha napadhi ta kaa chodthe ra??
#13 chai kahile ni??? hehe...

nice nice!! Aru ni jaawosh! ;P
NSS Posted on 30-Nov-03 08:05 PM

Mr G.

I thought you have renounced story telling after the infamous "MITRA" incident, but you come up with a better one. I think this the best of all 12.

I have been your loyal reader but harsh critic too..:)

Now you are alomost a story writter....keep up..I can see you getting there....:)
patali Posted on 05-Dec-03 01:30 PM

kala akshyar bhainsi barabar.......tee ke jati banga tinga yata farkeka ra uta farkeka sabda ta marijiun bujya bha po...lau na nepali font download kasari garne ho...