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   Dear Chhandabadha Kavita Lovers, Belo 16-Dec-03 dcmetroadmin@sajha.com
     Dude, You posted it in a wrong place.I 16-Dec-03 DP


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dcmetroadmin@sajha.com Posted on 16-Dec-03 11:05 AM

Dear Chhandabadha Kavita Lovers,

Below are parts taken from various 'Sarga" of "Yo Samaj" Mahakabya published at Nepalipost.com
http://www.nepalipost.com/epic.html

Part below is in "ShardulBikridit" chhanda according to the website.

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7"nf O{Zj/ s[i0fn] ;snsL 5f]/L a'xf/Lx¿,
s]xL aRg gbL u/] dgk/L uf]kL dhfn] c? .
o:tf of}glkkf;'sf zx/df r]nf eP wTo/L Û
dfnf xft e/L hkL v';v';] /fVg] dhfsf k/L ..@)..

k'qLsf ;xdf n'nf]let eP j|x\df ePsf hg,
5g\ cfbz{ oxfF ls jf lzj ptf 5g\ df]lxgLsf ;Fu .
ljåfg\ w]/ j[x:klt a'w ptf rGb|} ljrf/Lsg,
rf]vf] sf] 5 / Û ef/t}e/dxfF cGwf ePsf ug ..@!..

o:tfsf dgsf ljrf/ clg tf a9\tf l;sfO{ j/L,
tL jfT:ofog tf 8'n] wlgssf Kof/f eP s:t/L .
sfdf]GdQ eP/ g} g[kx? lgwf{x?sf tg,
rf/L cf;gsf u/] 9lndnL s:n] lauf¥of] eg ..@@..

cfof] qmflGt otf cxf] Û wlgssf] pBf]u /f]hL ljgf,
gfkmf ;f]g{ eof] dxf ;d/tf pTkfbg} jf;gf .
Sof a9\tf x'g u} lbbf c´ a9\of] ;+;f/df sfdgf,
h:sf kfq eP oxfF s';'d tf eGg] 5 ;+efjgf ..@#..

Hofb} lnKt eO{ ;/] clu wgL cfˆg} t tfst\ ;sL,
k};f]sf] /x/} u/La dlxnf km:y] dhfn] slt .
ef]sf bLg g/] a;L cln ptf nf} xLg y] a]ktf,
of}g} /f]u lnO{ lgnL y'se/L ?Gy] ljgf sfdsf ..@$..

of}gft[Kt s'g} s'g} hgx? ef/L ax]sf clt,
sfdL lnKt eO{ v;L dg'h tf gf;L /x]sf slt .
o:sf] x]t' stf < sxfF < lsg eof] ;f]Rb}g sf]xL a'w,
eG5g\ sfd'stf c/] dg'hsf] cfwf/zLnf ;a ..@%..

7"nf] ;fg' bof dof ;'vx¿ jf b'Mvdf g} klg,
k}nf] sf/0f xf] wg} clg otf lgdf{0f ;t\sf] klg .
sf]xL bfgj jf s'g} dg'htf af]sL /x]sf hg,
b|Jo}sf jzdf k/L km/ssf tTsfn x'Ggg\ < eg ..@^..

dfG5]sf :d/sf cg]s ljwtf b|Ao}x?n] oxfF,
s'07f jf ljs[t} u/L ;snsf] lgwf{l/t} 5g\ hxfF .
afFsL z]if s'g} eP dbgsf] ;fIfft\ ;/Lsf] 56f,
xf]nfg\ pQ/sf hafkm lbgdf sfdLkgf g} stf ..@&..

of}g}] dfgjtf ljif] hutdf ;Tx]t' efÚsf] eP,
of}g} j[lQ t Yof] cxf] Û s';'ddf h:n] tL dfG5] eP< .
jf ufO{ c?df w/L dg'htf b]V5f} eg] ;Tw[t] Û,
dfG5] 5g\ hgtf g tf kz' s'g} efÚsf s'g} b]V5' x} Û ..@*..


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Now in Malini Chhanda


dflngL

gog rkn uy]{ rNknfP/ 6Nkn\,
ljxu ;sn xfF:y] z'Gb/LnfO{ 5f:y] .
;/ ;/ ;/ s:sf] wf/sf] Vofn uy]{,
v'zlbn ;a gfRy] sf]lknf km"n l6Ky] ..!^..

cln cln km'n xNnL cK;/fnfO{ 8fSy],
cw/ s';'dnfO{ nflndfn] l;+ufy]{ .
;sn j/0f uy]{ :ju{nfO{ k5fy]{,
lbge/ ;a 3'Dy] e|'ntfn] laufy]{ ..!&..

l;/ l;/ l;/ ;sL{ jfo'n] tfg ey]{ ,
em6k6 ktn] tf e"tsf cy{ uy]{ .
t?j/ ;a xNnL j]bsf ;f/ uy]{,
;/ ;/ k/:of}nf cflb af]nL ;sfy]{ ..!*..

s';'d ;b[z /fd|f] kftn} 5'l§gfn],
dw's/ ;a k'Uy] :jfbsf] sfdgfn] .
xl/t j;gnfO{ km'na'§] xhf/,
lsl;d lsl;dsf y] ;f/LnfO{ tof/ ..!(..

dudul;t ;NSof] jf;gf s:t'/Lsf],
/d/d jg af:of] efjgf j]bgfsf] .
56k6l;t p8\g] 8fkm] sflnh\ xhf/,
v'z lbnl;t em'Ny] gfRgnfO{ tof/ ..@)..



Sajha featured a poem by the same author at:
http://www.sajha.com/sajha/html/column.cfm?extraid=494

The author's interview is currently being published by paradesh.com at:
http://paradesh.com/2003/december/hom_nath_subedi_interview_kamala_sarup.html

-DMA
DP Posted on 16-Dec-03 10:41 PM

Dude,
You posted it in a wrong place.I don't think many people here (in Sajha) cherish Chhandabaddha kavita.I am not even sure that they know what "Chhanda" is in Nepali Literature.
I love them.
I'm surprised, nobody replied.