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| deep |
Posted
on 06-Jan-04 03:16 PM
Ye---tero bau ko akhada ho yo?
Je man layo bhanyo, lekhera falyo, din na raat gundaharu jhummeko chha jhummeko chha..khurukka aa afno gharma marna janu niýmarna nasakyaharu---
Ye --- khai torch le ta torchýtyai jhyang ma chha jasto chha---
Police lai bola taýphone garna phone---
Aba phone ta ghiraulale gare matrai ho, mu** phone ko line sine chhaine ke ko phone garni? I assured to myself but was a bit worried too. On top of that chhyapi damned Machakaji was breathing so heavily on me----chhyapi ra jaand ko manau aadbhut misran yukta Machakajiko swas-praswasle ustai taukai dukhla jasto bhaisakya thyo. Meghanaýs younger brother and her mom were still scolding at us right and left. Love letter pani falya thyo after seeing Meghana near the bhanchha ýek dui din agadi tara khai kalle padhyo tyo love letter pani tha chhaina. Those mom-son duo had no clue who they were yelling at. I knew we were safe behind that nilkadako jhyang we were taking cover against (yes we were safe even against that every -day battery powered flash light) but it was risky to stay there for a long time, though. Anyone could come there in hero cycle from the other side and see us. So, I was a bit worried. Tyam pani raati ko paune bhaisakya thyo, mahina thyo Mangsir.
Let me admit. I was an absolute *aasiq* of Meghana Rana. K garne bhako kuro. Ghar tyatai hadigauko gallima thyo. Sorry, can't be more specific than this. Risk is involved. Rana bhe pani yessima taat paltya Rana re chhanýthey didnýt even had a phone line. Had a small ground floor house, but later added second floor, BTW. Anyway, Meghana was not the only girl in the house. In fact, she had 3 other sisters. Meghana maile re. So, what? Haina? Of course, the other sisters were chwank too, and I would have been lucky to have any of them but my other friends had already reserved those other sisters for themselves. Not too long, I had heard one of those sisters responding to my buddy Machakaji-a reserving friend. Just this past Saturday when Machakaji tried to give the kanchhi Surpiya maiya a faded vague smile, she yelled ýthukka kukkar moraý right after she poured some water for ýSaniý on that pipal bot. Alarmed Machakaji backed off.
Just a quick note on Machakaji. He was a ghwank dude. Dohoro jyan bhako mu** dadak thyo. His name needed a serious correction and the correction was long overdue. He was the most ýsaprekoý among us as far as the physique was concerned. Sapreko mane you know like that kauli near that outdoor toilet. Such a jyango dude was called "Machakaji" and was after the kanchhi maiya, Supriya. He should have gone after the jethi, Dibya rani, based on his built--but Asimdai riding on his Honda trial XT used to circle around the house at least once a day for Dibya, though. Ani, Asimdai sanga takkar linu bhaneko dhulo pitho huna binti gare jastai thyo. So, Dibya was like aakasko fal aankha tari mar but Gumbe, my god! must admire his patience and dedication to Dibya, was hopeful that drug addict Asimdai is not gonna be around for that many days. So, Gumbe was next in line for Dibya. That's how far Dibya was for others. Asimdai shivakhulit huni kaile---ani tyas pachhi Gumbe ko pali ---ani balla aru---mu** palo aaune kaile kalile!
The former, most recent, Meghana aasiq , Surendra, lai jaundice pani bhako ani Surendrako Ba (Narendra Baje) le bhogateko bot ma banera dui char swaththa pani laisakeko re tyo Meghanko aghi pachhi lagyo bhanera Surendra bro lai. So, bado muskil le I was in for Meghana. Kayamat se kayamat tak here dekhi, I was dreaming of running away with Meghana and blessing her siudo with sindoor right in front of Churiya mai, almost every day. Now donýt ask me where Churiya Mai was 'cuz I didnýt know. I had just seen her in many trucks that used to go through hadigau for balauwa in Dhobikhola bank ýChuriya Mai ki jayý. And I kinda thought that Churiya mai is cool.
Machakaji and I were sitting tight and as quietly as possible behind that nilkadako jhyang. After a few minutes of fat-fat mom and son went down stairs from the chhat. Oh, did I mention that we had given almost Royal positions for those Rana folks. Seto bagh padhe dekhi we were totally into Ukaja, Pukaja, Pakaja, and Dakaja. Meghana's father was awarded Dakaja (Dakhsin Kamanding Jarnel) because his bedroom faced south toward the temple, Meghana's elder brother, whose room faced north, was Ukaja (Uttar Kamanding Jernel), and younger brother was awarded Pakaja (Paschim Kamanding Jernel). We got no Pukaja, though. We had intense debate on Pukaja position. No male members were left for that royal position. At one point Surendra had suggested "Bisne's" name for Pukaja but majority of us objected. Now, who the hell is Bisne? Well, Bisne ke ta tayi mu** kam garne manchhe tyaha Meghanaka. Gumbe declared Bisne is only qualified for either Chhikaja (Chhidi kamanding Jarnel) or Pyakaja (Pyasej Kamanding Jarnel). For now, Bisne was just Bisne cuz they didn't have any chhidi and we were not sure if Bisne slept on passage. Anyway---
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| deep |
Posted
on 06-Jan-04 03:19 PM
Meghanako ghar bato bata ali gahiro ma thyo and was encircled with barbed wire in all sides. The west side had one additional layer of security of thick nilkadako jhyang. That's exactly where we, MachaKaji and I, were that evening. Must admit, we both were a bit drunk.
"Wala-- wala" Machakaji whispered. Hereko ta nabhandai Meghana bhanchha bata hudai came to the chhat. Tyo raati jado ma chhat ma aaunu bhaneko merai lagi hunu parchha, I was delighted. Right then, as I was thinking fast to come up with some romantic move, ye ye ye---kah kah kah besyaka bhadai mu** kaha bata tilla bhera aako re chha euta jadya pachhiltira bata saikal chadayo mero komal dhadma. Romance fled and I panicked. In confusion, dasha lagya, I tried to jump in Meghana's compound. Like I said, the west side was protected with barbed wire and nilada, I was already bruised then tyo kade taarle ta mero jyan ma jatha-bhabi korna thhalyo. I saw Meghana ran down with super speed screaming "Muwaaa". Muwaa released her verbal speed from within---ke bho huh ke bho---marna nasakya gunda bhitrai hamfalera aayo ke ke ho?ý Dakaja, Pakaja, Ukaja, ani positionless Bisne all came to motion. I was in critical position, I quickly tried to cross the barbed wire on the east side toward mulabari, but dashako fandama parisakya rechhu ma--- yatti lamo dharko tanera bhassiyo kadako taar dhadma--
Jyanai jala jasto garera dukhyo. Mu** chokta khana gako budhi jholma dubera mari bhanya jasto bho. Hurukka bhaye---
Ahile samma ni chilaudai chha yo dhadma khat Meghana lai samjhida. Kasaile khatko barema sodhe, fight parda knife lageko bhanne gareko chhu. Meghana lai Pushkar Bikram le bya garyo re, BTW.
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Oys le kya hadigau samjhayo.
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| KALANKISTHAN |
Posted
on 06-Jan-04 07:00 PM
So this was what Deep Brother was brewing?
Aba ta sajha ma ni kahile kahile dhurandhar haru le lekhlan ra celebrate garumla jasto bhai sakyo!! Lekhyo Lekhyo Deep bro le, lau jaa ta... *************** *** **** celebrate! Biyad Biyad.. where is my Biyad!!
Last hasaucha yaar, Hat's off to the narration! LOL... Meghana le ni bye garichi... jhoor bho ni ta! Eh... Yesh paali ta Rani Mukharjee le ni bihe garne re... Mero ni nth tragedy parne wala jasto cha!! hehe... *********************** ta!!
Aru ni jaawosh aba hau!
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| Nepe |
Posted
on 06-Jan-04 07:16 PM
Deep,
Ghachchi ko katha. I knew I shouldn't read it at work. But I did. And I startled everybody with my uncontrollable laughter.
Pa.ka.ja, U.ka.ja., Da.ka.ja... Hahahaha..
And the ending...I can not breath...
Thank you.
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| Deep |
Posted
on 07-Jan-04 09:11 AM
Kalanki and Nepe daiharu, (Ahem!)
Actually I came to sajha after a while to spend some time. Glad to notice Oys's piece. when I read his presentation, I wanted to share my hadigaule gaf as well.
My writing was spontaneous, thanks for provoking, Oys, and contain many writing errors-not factual (I realize). But thank you all for reading.
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| rbaral |
Posted
on 07-Jan-04 09:38 AM
Superb!
Where have you been?
Please, write more often. Rishi
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 07-Jan-04 12:21 PM
Deep ji:
Fabulous! Highly entertaining narration.
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| Poonte |
Posted
on 07-Jan-04 01:32 PM
LOLOLOLOL
bharai raati sapana ma pani khititititititi haasne bhayo mero yo syaano jyan...
yo dui jana Haandigaonle haru lai (Deep and OYS) eutai kotha ma thundiyo bhane ke hola? Pahilo patak Nepal baata Nobel prize paune piece utpanna hola...ee, samaat samaat duitai lai...thundim! ehehhehe
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| oys_chill |
Posted
on 07-Jan-04 02:26 PM
Hasayo deep dai le :).......another handigaon classic ;)
Sanka ta lagya thiyo..achel Sajha ni slow slow cha..koi lekhne hoinan. Balla balla saki nasaki euta lekhya hoping others would join in. Actually, thanx to you Deep "nibhna lageko deep lai pheri beujaunu bhayeko ma" ;)
Aaba lekhne ni deen dherai chainan jasto. Hijo padya kura aja birsinchu achel...Enter quart. life criziz jasto cha..la lekhdai garum hai deep dai aroo ni...Jira dai chai kata lagechan? yeso sankam bhanya :P aroo le ni lekhe jado katna sajilo hunthyo......
btw deep dai, achel handigaon ko galli haroo sab farakilo parya chan re :) kasko bihe huna lagya ho pheri!
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| Deep |
Posted
on 08-Jan-04 08:52 AM
rbaral,
thanks. I was around here. I had written a couple of stories a few weeks back but I found sajha as unstable as the so called leaders in our nation when I came here to post them. I like to post the stories as soon as I am done writing. That's why you notice many grammar and other agreement errors in my postings. Also, I am not expert in English, of course. I tend to revise my writings and keep revising them until I completely lose interest in them, If I save my writings . Then, I end up deleting all those revised stories. That's why I like to post as soon as I am done expressing.
Sitara,
I am glad that you considered my writing worth reading.
Poonte,
kya latte dini oho! tara je bhe ni--ma ta danga ni!
Oys bro,
"Jira dai chai kata lagechan?"
Jiradai lai marichdai le Nepal ko sudhdha maal bhanera kalo padartha misrit ke tanna lagaye chhan, jiradai ajhai sifal ko ukalo oralo ma gadi lakhetai dhunga handai gardai chhan re...
"achel handigaon ko galli haroo sab farakilo parya chan re :) "
yo ta barbad bho ni! Hadigauka galli, tyo pani farakila farakila? Bahut nainsafi he ye!
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| patale |
Posted
on 08-Jan-04 04:16 PM
khit khit khit........hansera nai marchhu kyare yo budheskaal ma........
lau hai handigaunle dajubhai didibahini haru...sabadhan..HIGH ALERT!!! ghar oripari falame taar lagayesh..ghar ka aru meghana harulai bacahayesh hai!!! natra barbaad parlan ee lafanga aawara harule....:P
congenial narration...!!!
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| patale |
Posted
on 08-Jan-04 04:17 PM
khit khit khit........hansera nai marchhu kyare yo budheskaal ma........
lau hai handigaunle dajubhai didibahini haru...sabadhan..HIGH ALERT!!! ghar oripari falame taar lagayesh..ghar ka aru meghana harulai bacahayesh hai!!! natra barbaad parlan ee lafanga aawara harule....:P
congenial narration...!!!
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| Kancho |
Posted
on 08-Jan-04 04:31 PM
A good one! Dherai pachi ramailo padhna paiyo!
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| Deep |
Posted
on 09-Jan-04 08:53 AM
patale,
dhannebad, dhannebad, and dhannebad (euta postinglai euta dhannebad ta dinai paryo ni).
"hansera nai marchhu kyare yo budheskaal ma........ "
la badhai chha. afu ta khai pilsiyerai suikiyela jasto chha---aba shanti bhanne kt sanga bya garnu parla jasto chha---- natra shanti sanga basna paine chhat chhaina.
Kancho,
Ramailo lagya sunera malai ni ramailo lagyo tara tyo sanjh ta ma harip tension ma ni.
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| patale |
Posted
on 09-Jan-04 01:27 PM
ho ni ta deep ji yati ramro narration lai ek choti matra posting garna mandai manena yo maan le........
teen choti ko dhannebaad le ta mero maan ma nai chahakilo deep lyaidinu bhayo ta yahan le...
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| sparsha |
Posted
on 10-Jan-04 10:56 AM
hawa hawa!
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| tuppi |
Posted
on 10-Jan-04 04:31 PM
Did you say that your Meghana married Puskar Shaha?
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| Deep |
Posted
on 12-Jan-04 06:16 AM
"Did you say that your Meghana married Puskar Shaha? "
I thought not answering this query is unfair to the concerned parties---(I am not sure who else fall(s) in this group beside me---)
The answer to your question, Tuppi, is : NO.
Puskar Shaha did not marry MY Meghana. If she were mine, how could Puskar or any other man, or whoever for that matter, have taken her away from me. She, Meghana, was as much of mine then as Aishwarya Rai is for millions, these days.
Whom the Puskar Shaha married, perhaps, was his Meghana not mine.
It appears to me that you went through my posting (above) and I sincerely thank you for that. Hope you will, time and interest permitting, continue to read and offer comment(s)/question(s) in the future.
"If I have to claim her, then she is not mine".
-Deep
Insecure love-false- Claims
for those who love-truely
Acceptance is enough to eternity.
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