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| rajni |
Posted
on 13-Feb-04 04:07 PM
YUTA KABITA LEKHUKI VANEKO
Timilai samjera yeuta kabita lekhu ki vaneko
chhanda ra shailimai aljhiye
Biteka ti samaye harulai angali
Afu bata huna gayeka tita mitha bhulharulai pokhu ki vaneko
Tara khai ke ho sabdako chain mai aljhiye
Kati wata pana haru khera gaisakyo
Nindrale patak patak nimtaisakyo
Samaye mathi samaye khaptidai gayeko anuvab vaisakyo
Thehi samayelai angali yeuta kabita lekhuki vaneko
Tara khai chanda ra shaili mai aljhiye
Timisanga biteka harek pal samjhanama ayirahanchha
Yek yek ghatana chalchitra jhai ankha agadi ghumna pugchha
Timi tada hune kalpana matrale malai tadpaidinchha
Tinai hadpanharulai angali yeuta kabita lekhuki vaneko
Tara khai chanda ra shailimai aljhiye
Hunata harek byekti vitra yeuta kabi hunchha vanthyau
Chahema timi pani lekhna sakchhau vanthyau
Ma vitravayeko bhawanako kamile po hoki
Bhabalai pokhera yeuta kabita lekhuki vaneko
Tara khai chanda ra shailimai aljhiye
Yo patak ko mero prayash purahola jasto chhaina
Chahera pani sabdalai bunna sakiraheko chhaina
Anuvabko kamile hola prem ko ta pakkai hoina
Kinaki timi bina jeevanko kunai arthanai chhaina
Tesaile herau, ali adhyan garau ani sayed………
(happy valentine dear)
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| oys_chill |
Posted
on 13-Feb-04 04:22 PM
Yesto po kabita :)
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| M.P. |
Posted
on 13-Feb-04 05:05 PM
This poem, if it were to be tuned into a song, and sung, would be no less than Manila Sotang's "Mero kati parkheko aayena, yo geet sidhdyaaun bhaneko...." Nice poem, Rajni.
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| rupu |
Posted
on 13-Feb-04 06:31 PM
Another nice work sis. Kasto ramro KABITA....... Pakka pani mero bhinaju lai hola hoina ta :)
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| GoberGanesh |
Posted
on 14-Feb-04 06:46 AM
Sabda ka suruwal ramrari silaunu
Tan ani man chappakkai dhakos jasle
Ani hami feri ayera heraula - timro bunai
Bahira tira, BHITRA tira.
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| Surakshya |
Posted
on 14-Feb-04 08:17 AM
A great Valentine Special poem......hmmm.....what a perfect gift for Sanoafu!!
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| rajni |
Posted
on 14-Feb-04 11:59 AM
Thanx Oys chill, M.P., Rupu. Gober Ganesh and Surakshya. I am really glad that you guys liked the poem. Actually I must say I am honored. Definitely Gober Ganeshji I will learn to knit and stich the sural with my inner and outer emotions and come back to youļ.
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| K~ |
Posted
on 26-Feb-04 01:15 PM
Hi Dijju,
Loved your poem! Waiting for your next piece of work.
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| kanchanp |
Posted
on 01-Mar-04 06:56 PM
hey dijju,great poem...never knew tat u wrote to so well....khai malai ta padhako ni hoina..heheh next piece malai sure pathaishyo hai.....ani i;m sure this one is fr bhijanu..hehe la la cha cha...keep it up...love ya...kanchan
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| rajni |
Posted
on 07-Mar-04 10:53 AM
Ke garnu balla balla lekhna khojeko chanda ra shailimai aljiyera dikka vaisake !!!!! ļ ļ
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| Blues |
Posted
on 07-Mar-04 02:24 PM
Nandiju...I cant believe you were such a romantic........love the poem..I am sure Bhinaju appreciates it...do keep posting new ones.
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