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| deadsouL |
Posted
on 17-Feb-04 10:56 AM
I met you at the dawning of a new day
I really didnot know just what to say
Your voice over the phone just sounded so right
That you really made me feel good and made my day so bright
As days went by i wondered how you look
And wondered what part you would play in my life's written book
For now only time and space will tell
But for us right now things are going so well
So maybe one day when you come here
My heart will find true love and won't have to roam here n there
So good night my love and have a good sleep
For i hope in your heart my love will creep
So if you get lonely just look at the stars up above
You'll find me there watching over you with happiness and love
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| Kim |
Posted
on 17-Feb-04 11:07 AM
Wonderful! now i know where to look... Peace
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| deadsouL |
Posted
on 18-Feb-04 09:36 AM
Oh .. thanks , so where are u looking at now ...
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| Kim |
Posted
on 18-Feb-04 11:59 AM
Supposed to look up above the sky into the stars and look for a familiar face.. but also looking @ that the person behind the deadsoul. ...... Peace
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| acharya |
Posted
on 18-Feb-04 02:08 PM
Another instance of chat love?
Keep it up, deadsoul!
Your poem is so true for me too!
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| deadsouL |
Posted
on 18-Feb-04 06:54 PM
yah but distance love hurts much ... but theres a saying that distance is a key for a true love.. well it depends ..
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| Epiphany |
Posted
on 19-Feb-04 02:23 AM
wake up guyssssssss... time for some reality check!!!!
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| angel |
Posted
on 19-Feb-04 06:10 AM
i was lonely and i just looked at the stars above
but i couldn't see u watching me :-( :-)
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| deadsouL |
Posted
on 19-Feb-04 08:51 AM
Look at the stars , think about ur love and still if u don feel them then go to bed u'll surely see them in ur dreams after that ...... :)
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 19-Feb-04 10:55 AM
Wishful wishing of wishywashy feelings!
*Star light star bright,
I wish I may, I wish I might,
see you in the stars tonight!
If I do, I'll keep you in sight,
If I don't, I'll drink some Bud Light!!!!
Goody goody Nighty Night!!!
;)
* Mutated version of nursery rhyme. :P
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| zero gravity |
Posted
on 19-Feb-04 06:09 PM
A Different Music
This music pulls me north
I am so filled with mirth
So hard to explain this attraction
I wish for no protraction
I sail north despite the flurry
Rising from the swamp slurry
This music is different
It speaks to my soul
This wakening is different
A new day on the roll!!!
SITARA, you make me proud!!
ZG
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| patali |
Posted
on 19-Feb-04 10:11 PM
..Tell me about the distant love "deadsoul"...mritaksathi:p
"As I am saying good night at the end of the day,
And you are not here, but many miles away,
My heart is so empty and so lonely inside,
As I wipe away a tear I am trying to hide.
I close my eyes and try to go to sleep,
But with the sadness inside I begin to weep.
Suddenly I remember what you once said to me,
Just meet me in the stars, waiting for you I will be.
When distance tends to keep us apart,
Remember I still hold you near in my heart.
When the night together, can't be ours,
Just close your eyes and meet me in the stars.
Remembering those words, I begin to smile,
And gently close my eyes, lessening the miles.
I can see the stars, oh how beautifully arranged,
But you are not there, no hug to exchange.
I sit alone waiting, with hope in my heart,
No longer wanting to be kept apart.
Suddenly in the distance, a shadow appears,
A tear rolls down my face and the image is clear.
There is no question it is you that I see,
Waiting in the stars, just like you promised to me.
You hold out your hand as you become near,
And put it in mine saying, "I miss you, my dear."
Suddenly there's gentle music, filled with romance,
You gently pull me close, we begin to dance.
Just meet me in the stars, that is where I will be.
A special place in the stars just for you and for me."...
....Deadsoul ra malai matra thahachha yo raat ko sitara ko chamatkaar........
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| deadsouL |
Posted
on 20-Feb-04 07:52 AM
that was nice n thanks too .... :)
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 20-Feb-04 09:48 AM
IN THE STARS?!
You are but a distant glimmer,
I'd rather forsake the galaxy,
Flow away from the milky way.
I'd rather feel you in the trees,
Feel your warmth in the sun,
absorb your essence in the breeze.
Intoxicate your presence,
in my wine,
revive memories, not a shrine.
Rather inhale you with every breath
close my eyes, till dreams arise
No tired, squints at celestial skies.
I'd rather see you in my horizon!!!!
**********************************
ZG... :)
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| hansy420 |
Posted
on 20-Feb-04 09:53 AM
damn! bujhnai garho...
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| deadsouL |
Posted
on 22-Feb-04 07:41 AM
bujhna lai paila luv garnu parcha hansy bro .. haha ..
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| hansy420 |
Posted
on 22-Feb-04 07:59 AM
ho aba yeti bujhna ma lop garna jaana paryo jastai cha
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| putali7 |
Posted
on 22-Feb-04 03:14 PM
Awwwwwwwwww i loveeeeeeeee romantic love poems. It's very touching and reminds me of my long lost friend:( I missssssssssssssed u! Wish you lots of love, happiness and good health.
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| deadsouL |
Posted
on 23-Feb-04 07:58 AM
then u must have loved mah poem too .. haina ta putali ?? and who that losssst fren ni , fren or more than a fren .........haha ........
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| Ms_Independent |
Posted
on 23-Feb-04 08:42 AM
"Look at the stars , think about ur love and still if u don feel them then go to bed u'll surely see them in ur dreams after that"
Ahem! dead soul, khurukkana bihe garera laijau, ani dui jana sangai basera tara gannu :P ani no more tenisones of distant love ;)
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| putali7 |
Posted
on 23-Feb-04 02:40 PM
well deadsould just a friend ni ta. NOthing more than that. We did not go any further than that. But we both admired veryyyyyyyy much together ni. Ke garnu I dont' know where is he at now. wish him lots of peace and happiness
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| deadsouL |
Posted
on 25-Feb-04 07:38 AM
abui kaha bihe garne kura gareko , aile dekhi bihe garyo bhane ta ma sachikai nai deadsoul hunchu haha , ajhai ta malai katti sanga flirt garnu cha haha ... and putali if u two are gud frens and ur missing him then i'm sure he's also missing u somewhere k ... kunai din ta bhetla ni .... ;)
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| ringoketi |
Posted
on 25-Feb-04 12:13 PM
hi all,
i hate love, love screws up everything..so my suggestion is don't love anybody if they don't tell you the truth.
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| deadsouL |
Posted
on 26-Feb-04 08:19 AM
if u don't take love seriously it is not fun , if u take it seriuosly it will break your heart.. but it is the thing that we can't live without .......
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| Trixy |
Posted
on 26-Feb-04 12:09 PM
I believ in wat rongoketi sed... lov suckz.. iv had a heartbreakn story (heartbreakn due not to my part) n im really sick of it all.. wats da point loving sum1 beyond belief n doin everything for dem wen they nevr appreciate, acknowledge it, or giv nt evn an ounce of love n care bak?? wats da point of giving sum1 u adore evrything u got wen they break ur heart wiv no care.. this sum1 is my ex fiance.. yes ex he is nw.. cz he destroyd our true love story, destroyed my heart n turned it into a nitemare dat i cant get out of...love sucks big time folks.. take care...
Trixy
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| ringoketi |
Posted
on 26-Feb-04 01:35 PM
Hi Trixy,
sorry to hear that... hope u r fine right now and doing well...We all have to believe on "truth" without truth there is nothing he/she can do...Trixy i am also in your condition long time and i understand how u feel. Well, never gave up!!! that's my other word. You need to be strong as u r right now...and everyhting will be fine.....:):):)
Ringo
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| deadsouL |
Posted
on 27-Feb-04 08:20 AM
well i agree in this belief and trust things too
...truth hurts...
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 27-Feb-04 10:14 AM
Give your hearts, but not into eachother's keeping!
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| Trixy |
Posted
on 27-Feb-04 07:27 PM
Ringoekti, i appreciate ur fine words, yeh im becomn strongr.. each day is a new day rite.. im sad 2 hear uv been thru same thing cz only who have experiencd this thing will knw how deep it cuts n da scars it leavz behind...
but gues wat..my story doesnt end der honey.. oh no.. love aint gona let me go dat easily is it.. i fell in lov wiv sum1 else.. didnt mean to, it js hapnd cz this othr guy is wonderful.. he loves me so much too..i didnt tell my parents i had broken up wiv fiance cz they wont undrstnd.. bt time went by n i realised i cant break my parents heart n not marry my ex fiance.. so i told da new guy we can nevr go anywher wiv our lov.. so we made a pact nevr to talk or meet again.. n thers da end honey, im stuck wiv my ex-fiance n gota marry him.
Bt i hope ur on track wiv ur life..try not to refer bak 2 da past as terrible as it wz, cz its gone n can only move ahead wiv much more wisdom..
Trixy
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