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| nescient |
Posted
on 05-Apr-04 08:41 PM
Finally the counting is over
And so is the time
She waited for so long for this moment to come
And now it's here
She has never felt so much happier in her life
Atlast the lonely days are gone
No more nightmares
No more waking up in the middle of the night
And looking for something to cuddle
She is no more afraid to sleep
She feels as if she can touch the sky today
As her heart starts racing
She tells herself "everything's going to be fine"
No more worries
No more pain
And yes indeed everything is going to be fine now
She sees him coming
And a warm feeling and a bright smile in her heart
All of her old memories comes back to her
Those times they spent together
How much fun they had
how much she wanted and still wants and always will want him
and of course the contagious laughter
Which now is going to be followed by the separation
And the tears and heartaches
and the loneliness
He still looks the same
Even much better than last time
He hugs her so dearly
Still his touch tingles her
as if he was touching her for the very first time
With so much of his love
Her heart stops beating for a while
She tells her heart "not right now"
"Give me little more time"
He can still make her smile
Feeling of security
And the love and the care
They spend the day just talking,
about their past,present and the future
But there is no future
He hasn't changed a bit
But she has changed so much
And so has her life
The night grows
And so does her pain
They are together on the bed after such a long time
Just cuddling each other
Just the way they always wanted/liked
She is so happy
He kisses her on her forehead and looks in her eyes and smiles
She smiles back and holds him tight
as she fears that she would lose him
She doesn't want this moment to pass
But "that" moment has come
And she has to let him go
She hands him an envolope
It's from her doctor
She has cancer
It has spread all over
And she is dying
His eyes is filled with tears
His heart aches
So much that he feels as if part of him has died
He feels as if he is choking
She closes her eyes
and kisses him for the very last time
and says "love,why did you come so late?"
And then there was the silence.....
The next day,
It's so sunny,warm and beautiful
Just like when they first met
Just like everytime he feels when she is around him
or whenever he thinks about her
He reluctantly dresses up and gets ready for the big final day-the funeral
He comes back
Looks around
it's so empty
His room,house,life and him
He opens the dresser
Then there was a loud bang
and the silence....
Now they are together forever....
No more pain
No more tears
No more separation
....Now just happiness
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| babaal |
Posted
on 05-Apr-04 08:43 PM
Hold on...you stay right there...while I search for something on Google
;)
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| nescient |
Posted
on 05-Apr-04 08:53 PM
hehe plz do.Now i am given a name of a cheater :)
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| GurL_Interrupted |
Posted
on 05-Apr-04 09:19 PM
Ouch!...it hurt real bad!...irony is, sigh! God knows! :'-(!...Hope, ... will not come to this territory coz I don't want ... to be sad! :'-(! Sigh!, how different each one of us is...yet so similar! Sighhhhhhhhh! Shooo! excuse me! got a frog in my throat!...Foolish tears, I know, they always come when u least expect them...when u wish, they stayed locked up insdie ur heart...but do they listen? I wish they did sometimes...Wish, I was stronger than them...! Alas, as always, No!
Very well expressed sis! Very vivid! :'-(! ...cut me thru & thru!
Take care! U have a good Life! Bye!
-GurL_Interrupted!
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| Zombie |
Posted
on 05-Apr-04 09:33 PM
What the f>>kk is wrong with you Babaal dude. The idea here is she/he posted for us to read and enjoy during our idle hours than let us find out if its his/her creation or he/she actually did cut and paste. Instead of word of appreciation for posting and enjoying the beauty of word blended poignantly, you shouting out loud and making non-sense issue. Yeah sure, we nepalese neither build our home nor appreciate others buliding one. Chill dude.
Nescient, take care and keep posting good stuffs.
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| babaal |
Posted
on 05-Apr-04 09:49 PM
Okay...I didn't wanna reveal my codes..but I guess open source policy prevails ;)
In my post above, I had my contents sandwiched between the special tags ....... but apparently you did not understand it coz it never got displayed !
Next time on, I will make sure I mention where the sarcasm starts and ends so that readers like you don't blame me for not appreciating some Nepalese homes being built!
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| babaal |
Posted
on 05-Apr-04 09:52 PM
..and the special tags seem to be a bit too special... ;)
[sarcasm]................[/sarcasm]
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| monika |
Posted
on 06-Apr-04 04:03 AM
Goooood very goooood indeed.But why do u always write poignant proses and poems?
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| dallipokchi |
Posted
on 06-Apr-04 07:35 AM
oh myan i thought it was the "til death do us apart: carmen and dave".....
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| confused |
Posted
on 06-Apr-04 01:17 PM
haha that show was funny...i watched in on mtv last time..haha..dammn weeding party ni kastoo krazzy :P
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| nepali_angel |
Posted
on 10-Apr-04 04:12 PM
Bump!
Very nice, Nescient! Quite profound, yet an easy read. I am your fan henceforth...I hardly ever read poems, but yours did catch my eyes. Four thumbs up(including my two feet thumbs)!
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