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| GurL_Interrupted |
Posted
on 24-Apr-04 12:06 AM
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| GurL_Interrupted |
Posted
on 24-Apr-04 12:09 AM
Dear,
You can call me insensitive
If insensitivity means giving up my comfort
so that you were comfortable.
You can call me irresponsible
If irresponsibility means adhering to my words
Even when I knew, I was losing a fortune.
You can call me ignorant
If ignorance means understanding your fears
your struggles and your journey.
You can call me selfish
If selfishness means giving up my needs
to satisfy your wishes.
contd...
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| GurL_Interrupted |
Posted
on 24-Apr-04 12:26 AM
You can call me a bad friend
If unfaithful-bad friendship means being genuine
and doing all I could, to just see you smile.
You can call me a cold-heartless cyborg
If being cold and heartless means crying inside my heart
Every time you hurt me
and broke my life into pieces.
You can call me a heartbreaker
If breaking a heart means picking up your pieces
when you could no longer move on.
Yes dear, you can call me a looser
If losing means, “rising up every time I [fell] down.”
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| GurL_Interrupted |
Posted
on 24-Apr-04 12:26 AM
You can call me a loner
If loneliness means giving up my “me time”
for our “us time” together.
You can call me weak
If weakness means, giving all I had
and still believing when I was down in dumps.
You can call me ugly
If ugliness means being honest and beautiful from deep within
You can call me a ‘sold out’
If being sold out means, holding unto my values
and standing up for what I believe in.
contd...
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| Prem Charo |
Posted
on 24-Apr-04 12:29 AM
jab jab unka kayal ata hai,
ek dard sa dil mein chahta hai,
pehle sochta hu unhe baahon mein bharlu
phir hakikat nahi khwaab hone ka ehsaas ata hai.
Tumko jaante nahi,
par chaahte hain hum din bhar khojte nahi,
par sochte hain hum tumhare dil mein rehte nahi,
tumhare hain hum tumko shayad paayene nahi par apnayenge hum
Aasmaan aaj phir se roya hai,
Naakaam Aashiqon ke haar mein ek aur moti piroya hai,
Koi to bataaye kahan mera mehboob khoya hai,
mohabbat ki kabr mein mera yeh pyaar soya hai.
Mohabbat ke naam se darte thhey
Dil ki dhadkan dhadka gaya koi
Hum anjaani raahon pe chal rahe thhey
Achaanak hi manzil dikha gaya koi
Mere saath tum ho ya meri parchhaai hai
Na jaane kis mukaam pe mohabbat humein le aayi hai
Bheed mein hoon phir bhi kyun tanhai chhai hai
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| niksnpl |
Posted
on 24-Apr-04 01:34 AM
Dhoti OUT!!!!
Dhoti OUT!!!!
Dhoti OUT!!!!
This is sajha.com.......Bringing Together Nepali Commmunities. not Dhoti Communities..
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| Biruwa |
Posted
on 24-Apr-04 08:16 AM
Dear GurL_Interrupted ,
I have certainly read parts of your above poem somewhere else.
Are you sure you didn't publish this poem somewhere else too? :)
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| heavencrazer |
Posted
on 24-Apr-04 08:22 AM
COPY AND PASTE I HOPE
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| GurL_Interrupted |
Posted
on 24-Apr-04 10:04 AM
Premcharo,
Good sayeris.
Dear Biruwa,
No, this was my first attempt on this piece! after a series of gloomy mistakes in one single week. It was just my way of pouring out my heart...my life, on and off between three hours last night from 11 pm-2 am, when I was hurting.
Beauty of being a human I think is we all r so different, yet so similar. So, I would not be surprised if this one looks like a photocopy of the piece u read elsewhere. I would be interested in reading that piece too, to see, how two lives so different can express in a similar way. :) Could you provide me a link please? :) Thanks in advance.
-GurL_Interrupted
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| _sade |
Posted
on 24-Apr-04 10:47 AM
G_I, nice piece. Enjoyed. Keep it coming.:)
As being similar to other pieces, we are human beings, nothing weird if some ideas match. So drop off the negative thoughts.
In Jest
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| Zombie |
Posted
on 24-Apr-04 11:00 AM
Sajha Ladies are damn creative. Gurl_Interrupted nice read.
"You can call me cheater, if reading your poem made my day"
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 24-Apr-04 11:13 AM
GI: Appreciate and applaud the sentiments! Very well expressed, indeed!
Here's one from me:
Call me a flirt.... [if you want]
if I hung on to your every word,
succumbed to your every charm,
and yet,
walked away...With MY heart intact?
;))
Keep going GI!
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| yOuNgBlOoDz |
Posted
on 24-Apr-04 11:19 AM
hhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmpppppppp
ke bhanu mah........
yb
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| meera |
Posted
on 24-Apr-04 01:16 PM
Hell sis just when I thought you had disappeared from Sajha, you come with this wonderful poem.
The lines are superb.
Here's from my side:
you can call me a nuisance
if I give bugging you by wanting to talk to u always :-)
Coz I miss u sooooooooo
for you are one of those wonderful person
One of my favorite sis.
hehe, the above lines sound more like an essay. Anyway wanted to tell you again that u r one of those WONDERFUL person. My sis/amaju whatever u call it, u r that !!!
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| kalebhut |
Posted
on 24-Apr-04 01:30 PM
meera ummm i thought she was a nepali songstress meera rana. she turned out a poetess here. haha
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| meera |
Posted
on 24-Apr-04 01:35 PM
Kalebhut :-) :-)
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| GurL_Interrupted |
Posted
on 25-Apr-04 12:08 PM
_Sade,
U here? Huh huh? ? u doing in here? Huh huh! *Hee Hee* J/K! I'm glad u liked ilt :)!
Cheater Zombie (In jest, as _Sade would write it :O!)...Don't take it to heart,t :O!
:-)! I'm glad, u liked it! Yup, I second u on a statement that sajha has got some creativity!
Sitara di,
"Call me" rather than "you can call me" sounds more polished :)! Don't u think so? Walking away w/ ur heart intact after everything...that's THE best! But, doesn't always happen di, does it? :)! If u can do that, superrr!...u'll save urself many heartaches :)! Take care sis.
Partna,
Ur silence is enuff, if u got the message I was trying to convey :l! Duh!! :O!
Meeru,
Had thought of eloping away 4rm sajha w/o any notice...gosh! I tell u, didn't happen! sigh! :)! I guess, it's jus too charmring...draws me nearer & nearer everytime I try to walk away! Now u tell me, what am I suppose to or shud I do meeru :(? :O!
Aww, thanx 4 all ur sweet words dear. That was very kind of u :)! We shud get together sometimes! since we seem to be close in both 'nata', 'thoughts' and etc etc :O! :o! :O!
Kalebhut,
Meeru is everything! U haven't seen 1/4 of her talents yet :O!
-Kalibhootni! :O!
If I had read the creative corner before posting this in here, I would have posted there :)...too late as always! :l! Take care aLL! Good life!
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| nescient |
Posted
on 26-Apr-04 12:25 AM
people are really pathetic
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