| Username |
Post |
| jyotsna_manorama |
Posted
on 24-Apr-04 11:28 PM
SAJHA: In My eyes
Beauty as people say lies in the eye of beholder
My sajha, you are always an apple of my eye
Had not been Ashley’s beautiful “life is sweet”,
Oys_chill’s wonderful, memory lanes
Or Meera’s exquisite narration of “Etiquettes” or “Friend’s forever”
Sajha would have remained just a common place as “SAJHA” suggests
But now, my dear sajha, you are an apple of my eye.
Poonte’s “ Chillo Khappar” and his humorous lines:
“ tyo dhobini ko chyatteko petticoat ko kasam”
and our own premcharo’s “For fun” titles
Rusty’s flirts, Bhanja’s photoshop,and breathtaking pictures
Or even talks about Bending “PEN made in US”
Indeed has given a different flavor in our beloved SAJHA
And yes, my dear Sajha, you are an apple of my eye.
Nescient always comes with poignant feelings of life,
Be it “ voices inside my head” or “ Little princess”
Ashu’s with updates in KTM , and even his Ashufoolery’s
Or Biswo with his political topics,
Has made my Sajha politically, socially, emotionally informative
And yes my dear Sajha, you are an apple of my eye.
Sajha, a common place for poets,
Be it Robert frost with his nature love-filled poems
Or Nepe’s excellent Gazal’s
And many other great poems by various other wonderful poets
Has always made my sajha, a fun place to be
And yes my dear Sajha, you are an apple of my eye.
SITARA and her “Girl’s night out”
Or Nescient’s “My work prostitution”
Filled with criticisms and controversies
Indeed had received a huge response,
but not enough to beat Chipledhunga’s
Nepali Antaksheri, or “1:45 Am” updates,
Which infact reached the maximum point of 300 response
Sajha, a place to see increasing responses, and critics
No wonder, my dear sajha, you are an apple of my eye.
“ Lakers, Wolves, Pacers, Spurs
What’s up with playoffs, analysis, predictions?”
Yes, you got that right, our own sports commentary
Be it Rusty, Ax, DWI, Go lakers, Spurs fan and many others
Or our Sajha Soccer fans with predictions
With our Dominatrix, Ed hunter and various other soccer fans
Sports commentary is always there,
Making Sajha alive in sports perspective
And yes, my dear sajha you are an apple of my eye.
Be Shefali, our own sajha prom queen,
Or Putali 7, our antaksheri queen
Even our online chat master Uday
All brings joy and happiness in this common sansar
And yes, my dear Sajha, you are an apple of my eye.
Our own Guru Trikal maharaj, May I bestow upon you
To predict the future of our Sajha,
And to prevent any disputes of current issues
On “heavy bombastic words”, and intelligency
To make this common ground filled of peace, love, constructive criticisms
And to make our dear sajha, an apple of our eye.
The above mentioned figures are not the only members who have contributed their efforts to make sajha: a better community among Nepalese. There are numerous others whose effort has equally played an important role in the success of the SAJHA community. I acknowledge active members like hellbound, cool_keta, dilasha, manavi, kalabati, isolated_freak, etc etc or our vanished active members like Gunaraj, Patali, Putali7, Najar, NK, and many other passive sajha readers. Lets make this community a common ground for all of us.
Dedicated to Sajha
LOVE, PEACE, AND CARE
Jyotsna.
|
| Megalomaniac |
Posted
on 24-Apr-04 11:57 PM
Just felt like it was an advertizement of threads in sajha. I appreciate your creativity, but i was mentioned no where. Damn! i feel like writing no more....
|
| mirador |
Posted
on 25-Apr-04 12:02 AM
---sajha--
rusty white building
smells of...
fertilizers
wet sunny monsoon
flip flops and sweat
old veins
waiting for the goat
|
| Ekar |
Posted
on 25-Apr-04 08:13 AM
Whoa Jyotsna...U have Lotsa Time ......
|
| Sonika_NY |
Posted
on 25-Apr-04 08:16 AM
Jyotsna, add this, Be it the issue about heavy heavy and bombasting words raised by Bravo ladies, Ladybug and Sonika from NY. Duh.
|
| redstone |
Posted
on 25-Apr-04 08:21 AM
WHERE AM I?? :(
|
| yOuNgBlOoDz |
Posted
on 25-Apr-04 08:59 AM
:)
|
| cool_keta |
Posted
on 25-Apr-04 09:20 AM
Very nice peom Jyotsana. Thanks for including me in that Bend Pen, hehe. Keep posting more of your peoms, its really good.
|
| confused |
Posted
on 25-Apr-04 09:21 AM
nice one jyotsana :)
|
| SITARA |
Posted
on 25-Apr-04 09:35 AM
Jyotsna Manorama, very appealing name you have there. We feel the same about Sajha and Sajhaites. Thanks for taking the time to express it! :)
|
| singdude |
Posted
on 25-Apr-04 10:13 AM
Jyotsna Manorama !!!
Thanx for your poem.
|
| jaya_nepal |
Posted
on 25-Apr-04 10:17 AM
Great Work JYOTSNA...
|
| jyotsna_manorama |
Posted
on 25-Apr-04 11:38 AM
Thankyou all of you,
Megalomaniac, Redstone, I could not list all people who have contributed in sajha, but Yes as I have mentioned, all of us play an important role in upbringing of this common ground.
Sonika_Ny, I appreciate your suggestion, and I beleive that detailed information can be reflected in a sentence itself.
Sitara ji,Thanx for the positive remark, could not come up with any other name, (dimag budho bhayepachhi ke garnu:p)
Ekar ji, yeah you got that right, I got lots of time ain't I? LOL!!
My appreciation to all of you.
Jyots
|
| luckydude |
Posted
on 25-Apr-04 11:43 AM
where the hell is my name? I don't see it.
http://www.sajha.com./sajha/html/userinfo.cfm?username=luckydude
Just a thought
Luckydude
|
| honeybuzz |
Posted
on 25-Apr-04 01:10 PM
Jyotsna good job and hope u will keeo it up
Luck dude u r not lucky for this thread.
|
| Trikal |
Posted
on 25-Apr-04 04:41 PM
jyotsna_manorama,
Great poem...........
You definitely have a gift for writing poems. You have a way of expressing things that is very different and uniqe than others. Not everyone has such a gift. People write poems for thier own appriciation but you did appriciate others, through your poem. Thank you for sharing your valuable expertise and your outstanding talent.
Definitely your poem deserve to be the best poem of the year. We are prpud to have you as part of our Sajhaland.
Wish you all the best and God bless you.
Trikal............
|
| Trikal |
Posted
on 25-Apr-04 04:43 PM
Prpud = proud
Typeing mistake..
|
| meera |
Posted
on 25-Apr-04 05:25 PM
Nice poem Jyotsna, the way you mentioned different names with their work.
Living in a small town with barely 5 Nepalis its gets lonely sometimes but ever since someone referred Sajha to me, its become a second home and have met some wonderful people through here.
hope for more poems from you in the future.
|
| Dominatrix |
Posted
on 25-Apr-04 06:03 PM
Jyotsna.. i agree with fellow Sajhaites, thoroughly enjoyed reading that poem of yours, read it twice over coz it was that nice, and im honoured to be mentioned there.. thanx darling. Keep up the outstanding work. ;o)
Domi
|
| lopsee |
Posted
on 25-Apr-04 11:56 PM
me think me in lop with cruz
|
| dyamn |
Posted
on 26-Apr-04 01:04 AM
laaa jyot, mero nam chotayacha.. phereee lekha, and this time don't forget my name too ; Dyamn Bahadur.. heheh kiddin kiddin'.. good work sista.. god bless you.....
:)
Dyamn
|
| Rusty |
Posted
on 26-Apr-04 10:49 AM
jyotsna_manorama,
Wow ..wow.. you wrote such a beautiful poem. I am amazed to see my name in your poem. And, I am also astonished to see that you know as many Shajhaits as I know; Anyways, you are very good observant.
|
| LadyBug |
Posted
on 26-Apr-04 04:20 PM
Sonu...
No need to be on anyone's list.......the thing about being truthful is that it really HURTS sometimes for people, asyou can see. So i am not surprised to see who made the list and who did not. hope you had a good weekend. Mine was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :):)
jyostna_manorama _
enjoyed your poem. do keep writing...
all the best,
LadyBug
|
| Sonika_NY |
Posted
on 26-Apr-04 06:30 PM
Ladybug, I don't want to be in any bullshits lists too. Yawnn. Yes I had great weekend too with my hunky hunk. How is your hubby doing? Hope you two are having great life.
Peace Out
|
| Zombie |
Posted
on 26-Apr-04 06:41 PM
Ladybug and SonikaNY Sajha's disclaimer is ___ Do not use the forum if it could have sent through email. Thanks
|
| jyotsna_manorama |
Posted
on 26-Apr-04 08:53 PM
First of all, my warm appreciation to Sajha admin, including San for featuring this article.
and thankyou for all sajhaities for thier positive and warm remarks on one of my attempts to create a bond of peace and love with sajha and all sajhaitites including those who I might have forgotten to include in the above attempt.
Luckydude, ladybug, sonika_ny, honeybuzz, and many others, who I have for forgotten to mention in the list, I did not have any intention to exclude any sajhaities, and I am sure all of us here in sajha have contributed one's effort to make SAJHA, a common ground for all of us.
Trikal sir, I am honoured to read your positive remarks, the poem was themeless,and was just trying to unite all sajhaities regardless of the ongoing disputes about intelligency, or nationality.
Meera, Domina, Rusty, lopsee, dyamn, luckydude, honeybuzz, sonika_ny, ladybug Thanx for your appreciation. Meera, I understand the feeling of living in a place far away from one's familarity. Having a place to share our inner feelings, when we are isolated from our familarity sure does helps in lessening inner pain, and I beleive sajha has served this purpose.
Jyots
|
| Poonte |
Posted
on 26-Apr-04 11:56 PM
Ahem!
Tyo dhobini ko chyaatyaa petticoat ko kassam, this poem can be used to advertise Sajha! Quite impressive observation and a wonderful portrayal.
Tyo dhobini ko poi ko udhryaa kattu ko kassam! ;)
|
| KaLaNkIsThAn |
Posted
on 27-Apr-04 02:24 AM
wowow!! That was great Jyotsana! ;) (ting)
Poonte dai adkyo adkyo, peticoat ma aljhiyera chyattya kattu ma aljhyo!! dum lagaam dum, haisssssya!! comeon dai, haissssya, you can do it, haissssya!! that's the way, haissssya!! aha aha haissssya!!! One two cha cha cha, next 2 cha cha cha, still stuck?
|
| chubby_cheeks |
Posted
on 27-Apr-04 07:16 AM
awww this is nice!!!
|
| nutan |
Posted
on 27-Apr-04 10:13 AM
nice one jytosna, a beautiful portray of sajha and all sajhaities!!
|
| LadyBug |
Posted
on 27-Apr-04 10:19 AM
nutan --
correction, not "all" sajhites
jyots --
there is always 'next time'
do keep writing
Sonika -
i'd email you.......but since i am already logged in here.....thanks for asking dear!
my hubby is doing great, quite busy but still took time to go eat out with me at a really nice place.........still have leftovers, yummmmmmm. if you come to my place, i'll take you there too .....nice to hear your hun and you are having a good time. we always have a blast too, in each others' company. :) more later.......gotta go now.
love,
LadyBug
|
| nescient |
Posted
on 27-Apr-04 10:22 AM
And they say my poems bring tears in eyes?
For the first time I have no words to express my feeling.
It's beautiful!BRAVO!!!!
|
| jyotsna_manorama |
Posted
on 27-Apr-04 10:53 AM
Poonte dai ko dialogue change bho, :p wink wink, kalanki poo dai sanchikai adke jasto chha , la hai nikalnu paryo udhraya kattu bata:p
nescient, nothing is comparable infront of your poems, they are emotional and very touchy!!! you bring back my painful memories of life, the bitter life which may have substitution but no replacement as uday has said in your father of ghost poem. I can relate to my own experiences in every words of yours, I simply admire and respect you!
and thanx everybody, now i am getting ashamed of myself!!!:p
|
| GurL_Interrupted |
Posted
on 27-Apr-04 11:22 AM
Hey Jyotsna_manorama,
Nice poem indeed! U seem to have a really good observational skills. I been here for a while and if I was to attempt writing a piece, I don't think I would have done as good as u did, mentioning the sajhaites and their attributes :)!...I know, me sux beeg time at observation sometimes :O! For once I thought, u were some old sajhaite with a different nick, coz u've done grreat! paying attention to details! Great going!
Take care!
|
| Hellbound |
Posted
on 27-Apr-04 12:44 PM
jyotsna, an awesome piece. I am mesmerized to see my name as an active member. Thanks. I am expecting more writings like this. Keep writing:)
|
| EdHunter |
Posted
on 27-Apr-04 12:56 PM
i read it twice and just realised that i've been mentioned as well.. :P thanks... but seriously though.. it's nice. and not juz cos i'm mentioned... even if i wasn't ( not that i care~) it's still nice.. from the bottom of my heart.. Cheers and keep on writing... :P
|
| jyotsna_manorama |
Posted
on 27-Apr-04 04:12 PM
G_I, You nearly caught me there!!!! :p old sajhaitie with a new nick,gurl leave that job to our investigator charo prem charo from HAWAI, he would take care of it.( wink wink).
Hellbound ji, I wish I could have skills like yours in gazal's. You fascinated me with your choice of ghalib's gazal , and the grasp of literature. I yet have to learn various things of literature from great figures like yourself in this sajha world.I am glad you enjoyed my attempt.
Edhunter ji, how can I forget ya, I was almost drafted to your soccer club, u remember now:p
I came across in one of the thread about usage of " apple of my eye" and " beauty lies in the eye of beholder" as a plagarised form of dictions. I beleive these are an expressions, and need not be in quotations and hence beleive that such expressions are not considered as a plagarism.I hope I am not mistaken.
|
| redstone |
Posted
on 27-Apr-04 05:23 PM
jyotsna...i wub you, marry me :-D
|
| Prem Charo |
Posted
on 27-Apr-04 06:18 PM
Jyotsna,
Your poem has a best wider range of sense and observation. You go girl...
You are the best poet in sajha. Here in Sajha, people try to show their Intellectual ability using hard and complicated words. But they don't understand if readers don't apprehended the meaning or intention of poem, than how good they write, it doesen't matter. You showed them the way. Maybe these "arrogant" people will open their eyes and mind.
Jasto dekhyo ustai vanne charo : Prem Charo
|
| Bramha |
Posted
on 27-Apr-04 07:43 PM
Prem Charo,
I opt for no barriers to any talents in terms of words/complexities they use. U bro has some inferiority complex. I enjoy every bit of literature written here even if I don't write myself. So stop preaching. There might be lots of people in SAJHA who actually don't like your cheap HINDI sayaries in Nepali site. Still I have no complains and I have enjoyed ur other postings. NO HARD FEELINGS!
Peace!
|
| yadav |
Posted
on 27-Apr-04 07:53 PM
Prem Charo, I haven't checked your other thread, but what's keeping you from saying
jyotsna_manorama = najar
:P
|
| jyotsna_manorama |
Posted
on 27-Apr-04 08:23 PM
Prem charo ji, redstone ji, Brahma, and yadav ji thanx for the appreciation.
Yadav, I am laughing to death here, should I make you able to hear my laugh? if so, hahahhahahahhahah. I hope you know the reason behind my evil laugh. :p
|
| KaLaNkIsThAn |
Posted
on 27-Apr-04 09:00 PM
>>>jyotsna_manorama = najar
hahahahahahhahahahahah!!! ooooi maaryo bajje yaadav le.. ehehe... hahha, oooooheho hooo ha ha ha ha!!
okay, m serious!! ummm... khitititi....
sakinaa,, hahahahahahhahahahah.. LO... ROTFLOL.... najar jyotsna re.. .hahaha.. aaankha baata aanshoo hahahahahaha aaisakyo haasda hasda... aba chup... shhhh.. not talkie talkie... ummm... zip!!
kititititi
hahahahahahhaha.... jyotsana is najar re hahahahaha.. oooooi mummmy!!
(ho ki kyaa ho?)
:P
|
| Poonte |
Posted
on 27-Apr-04 11:42 PM
Masta le suti raa...yo madhya raat ma raachhas jasto haansera uthaidiyo ni Kalanki le! Oye, Bhai cha...ke bho?
Narayana!!!!!!! Ochhyaan bhari mutna ni bhyaisakechha..kosle hasayo testari??? Ram Ram...bau hune umer ma ochhyan ma mutni?
Yadave le testo po gardo raichha? Yadav jee...arko pali malai hasaune belama yesso agrim suchana paam hai? Ma diaper laayera sutchhu kya! ;)
|
| NK |
Posted
on 28-Apr-04 07:46 AM
Jyotasna Manorama,
Enjoyed it!
ps what a name! any idea what to replace my boring name with?
NK
|
| Poonte |
Posted
on 28-Apr-04 07:50 AM
Ba-baaaaaa..aaja kina Sajha ma bhuinchaalo ayo bhaneko ta...NK!!!!!!!!!!!!! Long tyam! How's you???
|
| najar |
Posted
on 28-Apr-04 10:12 AM
lolzzz
Jotsana, a good one! keep it up....
okay now to business...how many times do i have to clarify that i have ONLY ONE registered name on sajha and i only write as that: NAJAR, nothing more or less (if this makes sense), do not quite know if other speculations are going on as well.
Unfortunately, i don't frequent sajha much these days, however do make an occasional brief visits. Just because i don't write or visit does not mean i am somebody else.....A sajhaite friend brought my attention to this thread and hence this clarification.
All others from good ole days, hi :)
ps i do cherish my active sajha days tho :)
|
| najar |
Posted
on 28-Apr-04 10:14 AM
Jotsana=Jyotsna
somethings never change and one of them is my typos problem! sorry JM..
|
| jyotsna_manorama |
Posted
on 28-Apr-04 10:24 AM
oho kalanki, kasto rakshesi hanso tyo, sara kalanki ko ta nidra khulayo khualyo, hamro saat samundra ko poonte dai ko pani nindra disturb garechha:p free show at NY tonight: Poonte on diaper:p
Nice to see Nk after a long time, hope everything's perfecr at your end.
najar, thanx for the appreaciation. Yeah, I understand the ongoing investigation about nicks here at sajha, one's identity does not change due to sayings of others, nobody knows you better than yourself, so It's okay.
|
| Hellbound |
Posted
on 28-Apr-04 01:40 PM
Jyotsna,
Grasp of literature-- first of all you need to have passion of what you do/write, and then feelings and imagination of what you're expressing. I think you got the knack of blending both components with balance, so why don't you try writing more:)
PC Hawaii ji,
Using complex words doesn't harm your literature at all as long as it makes sense to the writer himself/hersellf. I think I have posted this statement before-- when something comes up to your mind, you grab a piece of paper and portray your thoughts in the form of literature so that your imagination or feeling doesn’t get lost forever. Your literature may turn out to be good or bad or vague to the others, but it is importnant that it makes sense to you.
La aro pani sunau sunau
|
| KaLaNkIsThAn |
Posted
on 28-Apr-04 02:18 PM
>>hamro saat samundra ko poonte dai ko pani nindra disturb garechha
JM (Not the Lizard King ;))
Poonte dai ko ta kurai nagarum... achel time time ma budha (:P) nisassiyera uthcha... Sato gaa ho ki ke ho, chisikka gare pani jhasanga jhaskincha... eh... sajha ko bokshi laagyo ki... eheh!! Jhakri chaina sajha ma koi, Jagalta fijaayera kucho le thataune????
LOL!
|
| NK |
Posted
on 28-Apr-04 05:17 PM
:) Poonte me fine and you? Self-imposed maternity leave is just about to finish. Am I glad or am I glad? :))
|
| jyotsna_manorama |
Posted
on 28-Apr-04 08:38 PM
Hellbound ji, thanx for the suggestion. I sure will try more. I am one of the admirers of your writings, The artistic style in which you portray your thoughts are strikiing and simply astounding.
PC ji, I envy your residing place, Hawaii: paradise for Jytosna.:p
"Good writers define reality; bad ones merely restate it. A good writer turns fact into truth; a bad writer will, more often than not, accomplish the opposite."
-- Edward Albee
Good writers are those who keep the language efficient. That is
to say, keep it accurate, keep it clear.
- Ezra Pound (1885-1972), U.S. poet, critic.
The above stated quotes are one of my favorites quotes on good writings, and I definitely agree with Hellbound.
Kalanki moraa, la hera hamro poonte dai lai ke bidhi tarsaideko, aba nisasine, jhaskane, aatine, daraune banaidera. Tyahi kalankisthan kai bhoot lageko hunuparchha, madhyaraat ma marne gari hansiraakothiyo, bichara poo dai.
Call For sajha's witchdoctors for our beloved poonte dai:p
|
| DcKeTa |
Posted
on 01-May-04 07:05 AM
Hi Jyotsana Ji
Wow, what a wonderful expression regarding sajhaites.. I really appreciate your time and your talent. Just a superb POEM.
By the way thanks for mentioning my name on it.. Well, call me sports Fanatic But Once again i would say GO LAKERS...
ANyway you have really extraordinary way of expressing thoughts and i am sure, your appreciation for the Fellow Sajhaites will make our SAJHA community a really better place to be.
Cheers.
|
| dallipokchi |
Posted
on 01-May-04 04:54 PM
i read ur poem and i liked it every much...i've been thinking about you day and night...and i think it's love...!!!
sorry it's a dare....
|
