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| rajni |
Posted
on 09-Jun-04 12:39 PM
SANSAR JASTO CHHA TESTAI SUNDAR CHHA
Sansar jasto chha testai sundar chha
Sukha ra dukhama rumalliyeko chha
Haso ra rudanma aljhiyeko chha
Sassosta ra chalkapat bich chatpatayeko chha
Tara sansar jasto chha testai sundar chha
Beli ra chameliko subash chha
Nilkadako namitho byatha chha
Mayurko manahohak nach chha
Dumsiko bishalu band chha
Tara sansar jastochha testai sundar chha
Marubhumiko prachanda taap chha
Barpipalko sital chaw chha
Aushi ko gahiro raat chha
Junkiriko priya nach chha
Tara sansar jasto chha testai sundar chha
Prakritiko bhayanak prakop chha
Barshatko rimjhim bahaw chha
Tachad ra machadko tanab chha
Mitra bhabko sath chha
Tara sansar jasto chha testai sundar chha
Rajni
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| Rekha |
Posted
on 09-Jun-04 12:51 PM
Nice one......... Keep it up girl............ Peace Out...............
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| GurL_Interrupted |
Posted
on 09-Jun-04 01:46 PM
"Sansar jasto chha testai sundar chha" Kina? Should we be content with what it is or what we have? Or should we make an effort to make it a better place? But then what actually is an ideal place? Sigh!
Nice poem sis! Sowwie, I'm just thinking out my thoughts loud!
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| meera |
Posted
on 09-Jun-04 08:33 PM
I agree with the topic 100 %
Nice poem sis.
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| angel |
Posted
on 09-Jun-04 09:51 PM
very ture and very nice lines
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| kalabati |
Posted
on 10-Jun-04 04:23 AM
SUNDAR CHHA
AJHA SUNDAR BANAU
CHAHANA LESUGANDHIT PHOOL SAJAAUN
HOINA RA YEK BAAT BATAUN
YEK GEET SUNAU
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| rajni |
Posted
on 10-Jun-04 08:44 AM
Thank you Rekha, G_I, Meera, Angel and Kalabati, really kind of you. I need your support and encouragements as it helps me going.
Gurl_interupted when I am saying ýSansar jasto chha testai sundar chhaý, I mean to say take the world as it is with its + and _ points and its beautiful!!!!!. Of course we should always try to make it a better place as said by Kala batiji ý SUNDAR CHHA AJHAI SUNDAR BANAU......"
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| kanchanp |
Posted
on 10-Jun-04 09:07 PM
yo nandijju....great one...man...keep it up..hajurko yestai kabita haru aru pani aairakhos....tyo arko chai pani rakhsyos na.....hahah tat one ke...tyo sojoho manche wala ke..hahaha la hai i;ll be waitin..
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 11-Jun-04 09:48 AM
I agree with you Rajni; love your sentiments!
I had once, read this at a beautiful park:
"Take nothing but pictures,
Leave nothing but footprints!!!"
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| rajni |
Posted
on 11-Jun-04 03:47 PM
Thank you Kanchanp, definitely I will soon post that one too ý. Smile fucchi bahini.
Thanks a lot Sitaraji, your words mean a lot to me. Foot print chai hajurle chodne hamile pacchyaune hola .
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| JagaltayBhoot |
Posted
on 11-Jun-04 04:31 PM
ho , sansar jasto chha thikai chha
dukha lai dherai le naramro bhanlan, tara dukha nabhayeko bhaye sukha ko ke mahatwa hunchha ra?
jeewan ko mahatwa yas artha ma chha ki tyahan mrityu chha.
tyasai gari, gham ko mahatwa yas artha ma chha ki tyaha barsat chha
din ko mahatwa yas artha ma chha ki tyahan raat chha
dharmatma ko mahatwa yas artha ma chha ki tyaha paapi chhan..........sabai dharmatma nai bhaye kasle ganne?
ra, murkha haru nabhaidiyeko bhaye bidwan ko ke mahatwa? sabai bidwan hunthe ni
arthat, so-called ramra and so-called naramra kura haru ek arka ka purak hun.......ramro naramro bhaneko tyastai ho.....je chha, thikai chha
on shantihi shantihi
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| rupu |
Posted
on 13-Jun-04 08:13 AM
Dijju, kasto ramro kabita :) arko pani chadai hai :)
Timro sansar ani hamro sansar
Mandir ma baleko diyo jasto sundar chha
Bhawan lai arpan garna rakheko ful jasto
Pabitra ani sundar chha
Timro ani hamro sansar sundar nai sundar chha!!!!!
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| rajni |
Posted
on 13-Jun-04 06:26 PM
Thanks J B ( kasto ashajilo nam rakhnu bhayeko :) ) and rupu for nice Bisleshan of the poem and making it Mandirma baleko diyo jhai ujyalo.
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| srijana98 |
Posted
on 14-Jun-04 11:11 AM
Rajni di
Ekdam ramro kavita. rko jawos.
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| srijana98 |
Posted
on 14-Jun-04 11:14 AM
Hana k ho Rupa di. I never knew that you could write this great. Anyways keep it up. Arko jawos hai,
I was so shocked to see Prap the other day. I felt so bad not to recognize her.
Love
Sriju( as you used to call me)
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