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   Sayad timro agaman vanda malai timro pra 05-Apr-02 Suman Dhakal
     Nice one Sumanji. Speaks volume. I can a 05-Apr-02 Sukumari
       Suman ji, Shirsak: "po" Tyo ta 06-Apr-02 Rumor
         Rumorji, nice one. like ur style. keep u 06-Apr-02 Suman Dhakal
           awu priye hagna basawun kodo bareema h 06-Apr-02 jira
             >Awu priye hagna basawun >kodo bareema 06-Apr-02 Nepe
               hahaha! I thought so too Nepe! How com 06-Apr-02 NK
                 janchhaun bhane jau khai ma k bhanuta 06-Apr-02 rk
                   mero maan lai collateral ma rakhera timr 07-Apr-02 Gaine
                     Thank you, Suman ji. I am not that mu 07-Apr-02 Rumor
                       NK! Thanks for the comment but I coul 07-Apr-02 jira
                         here is a good one for you all hare k 07-Apr-02 badmass
                           Hey badmas, I thought that was written b 08-Apr-02 Sir Sayed Ahamed Khan
                             Prem!! Prem! Ouuuphh Prem! Bihana uthen 08-Apr-02 jira
                               timi phool bana priya ma kanda banidiul 09-Apr-02 voice
                                 you're right khan. all the bad things ar 09-Apr-02 badmas
                                   Timi Muduli bana priya ma Keto banidinch 09-Apr-02 Makardhwaj
                                     >awu priye hagna basawun >kodo bareema 09-Apr-02 Makardhwaj
                                       " Awu priye hagna basawu kodo bareema 10-Apr-02 jira
jiraji, my hats off to you. keep postin 10-Apr-02 Suman Dhakal
   Jira Jee, Raudra bhanya k re ? Me 10-Apr-02 Makardhwaj
     tee din gaye yee din aye mohi khane toum 18-Apr-02 badmas
       HAIKU Pokahriko dilma ma 1lai Gaine 19-Apr-02 Makardhwaj
         Desh Lay RAgaat maagay khukura bali chad 19-Apr-02 jusay
           khola khola nahida samdhini samdhini ko 19-Apr-02 badmas
             hi its badmas again dado dado thankot 19-Apr-02 badmas
               Mero kabita (gaana) ko shirchak cha "Tim 19-Apr-02 Nabin
                 ur a clever guy Suman Dhakal 20-Apr-02 Suman Dhakal
                   Madhu is from Kathmandu and she went to 20-Apr-02 aahhhh
                     Timi Kodho bari ma basda jira Timro ta 21-Apr-02 Pauna
                       Jira himal herera koda baari ma hagna ba 21-Apr-02 FreeeeK
                         ukali ma tekne lauro samaune ma bango 27-Apr-02 badmas


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Suman Dhakal Posted on 05-Apr-02 06:56 PM

Sayad timro agaman vanda malai timro pratikcha nai mitho lagcha
Sayad timro agaman vanda malai timro pratikcha nai mitho lagcha
Katai yesri nai bachne vayera ho ki, timilai payera pani gumaouna man lagcha

Suman Dhakal
Sukumari Posted on 05-Apr-02 07:26 PM

Nice one Sumanji. Speaks volume. I can almost relate to it.
Rumor Posted on 06-Apr-02 07:06 PM

Suman ji,


Shirsak: "po"


Tyo ta mero po ktha ho,

Uni ta meri po thieen,

Katai bato Bulera po timro ma aaeen ki uni,

Parkhai ta mero po ho,

Teshaile, aja bholee diusai sapana po dekhane bhaye chhu.....

.........Bibasta ko katha sunaune po bhaye chhu...........
Suman Dhakal Posted on 06-Apr-02 08:04 PM

Rumorji, nice one. like ur style. keep up the good work. i'm in the process of writing another one but haven't quite figured out how to end it. haven't quite come up with the words. keep posting if u have more and i will do the same. again, a very nice one.

Suman Dhakal
jira Posted on 06-Apr-02 10:00 PM

awu priye hagna basawun
kodo bareema heemal herera............
Nepe Posted on 06-Apr-02 10:18 PM

>Awu priye hagna basawun
>kodo bareema heemal herera...


The most hilarious kabita I ever read. Jira, you are one hell of the talent.


Nepe
NK Posted on 06-Apr-02 10:37 PM

hahaha! I thought so too Nepe! How come jira did not have anything to thow at my "poems?" I am still waiting....
rk Posted on 06-Apr-02 10:41 PM

janchhaun bhane jau khai ma k bhanuta

janchhaun bhane jau khai ma k bhanuta

tara timile dinchhu bhaneko khaita?
Gaine Posted on 07-Apr-02 01:46 PM

mero maan lai collateral ma rakhera timro maya ko loan liyeko thiye..
interest tirthe-maya dinthe-mero bank ko prasamsa gaunthe..
tara mero bank ta bankrupt vayecha....dharauti swarup rakheko maan marigayecha!
Rumor Posted on 07-Apr-02 02:46 PM

Thank you, Suman ji.

I am not that much Khapish to write Kabita and Muktak, however I tend to write some time.

Kabita kahile kahii BORE hunchha Sunnelaii..................

anyway, thanks once again
jira Posted on 07-Apr-02 03:42 PM

NK!
Thanks for the comment but I could not find your poem though.
badmass Posted on 07-Apr-02 03:51 PM

here is a good one for you all

hare krishna hare ram
lategayi sita chaad kaya ram
hante hante ho gaya sham
sita ne kaha bas karo ram
utne me laxman aaya
ram ne jhatpat kattu lagaya
uske baad laxman ne bhi sita ko haana ouur bola
jaya shivashanker kailashpati
paap lage ladai siti
Sir Sayed Ahamed Khan Posted on 08-Apr-02 02:20 PM

Hey badmas, I thought that was written by Galib.

Sir Sayed Ahamed Khan
jira Posted on 08-Apr-02 09:00 PM

Prem!! Prem! Ouuuphh Prem!
Bihana uthenye, butti baley, bathroom gayen, dhara kholey, pani ayo
priye! tura timi aayeinawu........

Sabhaar - auntai bata..........
voice Posted on 09-Apr-02 12:13 AM

timi phool bana priya
ma kanda banidiula
timilai kasailai jiskayo bhane priya ma chusuka ghooche diiula
badmas Posted on 09-Apr-02 03:30 PM

you're right khan. all the bad things are said and done by indian. notice that the "chada kabita" is written in hindi.
Makardhwaj Posted on 09-Apr-02 07:35 PM

Timi Muduli bana priya ma Keto banidinchhu
Timi Matta bana priya ma Dhoi banidinchhu

Timi Ful bana priya ma Mahuri bani timro swad linchhu
Timi bachcha bana priya ma kamila bani timro *** ma chilidinchhu
Makardhwaj Posted on 09-Apr-02 07:38 PM

>awu priye hagna basawun
>kodo bareema heemal herera............


Jira thanks a lot. It makes me lough all the way. I forwarded it to my mates.
Expect similar stuffs in future.
I also liked your (?) Digital Ukhan Tukkas.

Makardhwaj
jira Posted on 10-Apr-02 10:05 AM

" Awu priye hagna basawu
kodo bareema heemal herera "

- The above verse comprised of all nine Russ as they are believed to be the part of typical nepali kabeeta...


here they are:
--------------------

Prem - Awu priye, let us do it together.

Hansya - Hagna basawu, what a comic!!!

Karun - Think of pain while you are .......

Raudra - Half way through, you will find yourself figting to finish it as if you are in some kind of battlefield.

Bir - The whole action is believed to be the part of bravery as the kodo ko tuppas are considered very sharp.

Bhab - Nobody wants to take such an action without having preliminary thought of doing so..like bhab awunu

Saundarya - Thinking of site seeing heemal under such pressure

Bibhatsa - Imagine what happens next after you finish.

---Sorry.....I forgot the ninth one...
Suman Dhakal Posted on 10-Apr-02 12:00 PM

jiraji, my hats off to you. keep posting ur poerty

Suman Dhakal
Makardhwaj Posted on 10-Apr-02 08:33 PM

Jira Jee,
Raudra bhanya k re ?


Mero Muktakko sirshak chh:


Malai k ko dar?

Timi sui lagauna aeu
Maile sui ropidie
Malai k ko dar?

Ghau sanai thiyo
sui bhane thulo thiyo
Timlai dukhyo
Malai k ko dar?

Timi thasthas kankanyeu
Maile ansu puchhidie
Malai k ko dar?

Jane belama maile bhane
"Sui ta tyasai bheteko
Tysako charge lagdaina
hisab kitab nagara
firta dinu pardaina"

timi feri dedh mahina pachhi aeu
suiko charge tirna haina magna
Dhal kinna nasakne ma bairagile
k ko suiko ulto charge tirnu?
Uhileko kura sakiyo
Birsideu
Malai k ko dar?
badmas Posted on 18-Apr-02 11:36 PM

tee din gaye yee din aye mohi khane touma jhyaoo palaye

badmas
Makardhwaj Posted on 19-Apr-02 12:31 AM

HAIKU

Pokahriko dilma ma 1lai
Gaine kira mathi gaine kira
ma tolairahe
jusay Posted on 19-Apr-02 01:21 PM

Desh Lay RAgaat maagay khukura bali chadauna!
Rudainan meri Amaa Ganesh prasad ki chori
badmas Posted on 19-Apr-02 05:38 PM

khola khola nahida samdhini
samdhini ko chakai ma daam dine

MAAAYALUUUUUUUUU

ki kaso suman JI
badmas Posted on 19-Apr-02 05:40 PM

hi its badmas again

dado dado thankot ko dado
thankyo (l a d o) smaune ko chado

MAYALUUUUUUUUUUU
Nabin Posted on 19-Apr-02 11:08 PM

Mero kabita (gaana) ko shirchak cha "Timi le......"

Timi le herda kasailai garo huncha yo mann lai
Timi le kurda kasailai saro huncha yo tann lai
Timi le herda kasailai garo huncha yo mann lai
Daha haina na ta irsha nai bho
Jalan haina na ta shankha nai bho
Timi le herda kasailai garo huncha yo mann lai

Timi le sodhda kasailai thesha pugcha yo soch lai
Timi le bolda kasailai kesha bancha yo mann lai
Timi le sodhda kasailai thesha pugcha yo soch lai
Sankina haina ta gunaso bho
Chyakhe thapeko na ta paso nai bho
Timi le

Chaha haina na ta irsha nai bho
Jalan haina na ta shankha nai bho
Timi le herda kasailai garo huncha yo mann lai.

Dhanyabad!!
Nabin.
Suman Dhakal Posted on 20-Apr-02 01:11 AM

ur a clever guy

Suman Dhakal
aahhhh Posted on 20-Apr-02 06:24 AM

Madhu is from Kathmandu and she went to St Marys with us. Is this the same girl you are talking about? The picture looked like her. She is a strong girl with a very good personality. San ji you should have told her or any or women who are posted in the web about the consequences of posting this pic on the web as you know how nepalese are. They may travel the whole world but thier mind will still be the same....Pakhe.. These men will never let women grow in any ways. Just because a picture was posted here they talk shit about her, what the hell do they know about her? She is my friend and I know about her. Comments are easy, do you guys have a guts to let women do anything? If there was a picture of a guy instead of a girl, would you guys still be doing the same? I know now you all will have a answer for my comments too because you all are losers. All you can do is gossip about others life...get a life guys. san ji I request you not to put pictures of any women here, why don't you do something to stop the women coming from this site too? Women don't deserve anything....I am really mad because I know Madhu and she doesn't deserve all this crap. She might not even know about all this. Learn to appreciate guys, that will make your life easier. Be positive about life. We are in kathmandu and we are much more open than you guys are even after being in USA you all are still in the dark. There will be much more pictures coming up there and you guys will have a bad comments for everything. What's the use......
Pauna Posted on 21-Apr-02 10:41 AM

Timi Kodho bari ma basda jira
Timro tasbir ma digital camera ma kaid garna chahanna
Timi le himal harda jira
Himal ma bashera ma Kattu kholna chahanna
Timi malai na hera, ma timi li hirdina
Khola ko bagar li pani ma sodinna
Gram khayera Paund pani ma jhardina
Ani flush ko ka kura....................................!
FreeeeK Posted on 21-Apr-02 09:55 PM

Jira himal herera koda baari ma hagna basecha.
hagera siddiyo pachi jira surprise bhayeca
ye to kamal ho gaya, dhoti ko phad ke rumal ho gaya
jaisa khaya waisa aya fir khaya to ganahya
badmas Posted on 27-Apr-02 02:50 AM

ukali ma tekne lauro samaune ma bango
aimai le lauchan sari cholo gai ko p-u-t-i nango
hureee huturi
poila jane ra-di lai dinna tuturi
salko pata suluttai
nai nai bhanda pasyo khuutai