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| Jhapali kancha, SD |
Posted
on 07-Jun-02 01:48 PM
Priya, timro tasvir ma tysto wastawikta rahecha, tsyto rahasya ani tysto khubi ki timro tasvir ko charcha ma manis haru apas ma ladan lagechan. Ma ta timro avari vayera khali yahi matra vanna chahanchu ki, dhanna timi swayam aainacheo timro tasvir ko sattma, natra kaslai k tha aja kati jyan shahid banthey holan.
jhapali kancha, SD
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| jhapali mitra |
Posted
on 07-Jun-02 02:07 PM
priya jhapali kanchaa,,,
timroo muktak lee mero muthu chuyoo,,,,asaaadhyaaaaiiiiiiiii mithoo muktaak. I wish i could write some like yours,, well theres used to be days when i wrote like these,, and they somehow worked also. But my muktak was inspirred with some motive.. and m sure urs is also governed by some motives. hope ur dreams come true. n u keep on posting regularly so that i can take some refreshment after these boring studies and research stuffs.
Uhi JHAPALI MITRA (SL)
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| chirag |
Posted
on 07-Jun-02 02:49 PM
Mero tasvir ma ta, ke nai thiyo ra,
Thiyo je tyo ta aru kai najar ma thiye cha,
Kewal auta tasvir ko adma,
Jhagada ko kheti garna lai,
Pryapta biu haru thiye chan,
Ukus mukus gumsiyeka chahana haru,
Bandh ko paridhi nagera,
Bhel bagna thale cha,
Malai ke thaha,
Nirdoshi mero tasvir,
Udangiyeko Pandora box huncha bhanera!
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| Parakhi |
Posted
on 07-Jun-02 04:35 PM
Thiye chha = Rahe chha......
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| Ghaitey Jawani |
Posted
on 07-Jun-02 06:43 PM
Hello jhapali kanchaji, I read your muktak to my girl friend over the phone and I told her that i had written for her. She was really impressed and when I told her that it wasn't actually me who had written it, she got mad. Uslai fakauna aba malai arko muktak chaiyeko cha.
And chiragji, your response to jhapali kanchaji's muktak was splendid. Very beautiful.
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| Voltaire |
Posted
on 07-Jun-02 09:01 PM
Mathika muktak haru utaam chhan; Malai pani uktak lekhne prerana diye.
Saajhko adheri aaudaa harsa maanu ki bismaat
Oushi yaa purnima j ko pani sanket huna sakchha
Binaa sabda ko jawaaf kasari bujhu maile
Laaj ko sanket bhaye ta thikai chha; rish ko pani ta huna sakchha....
Yo bhandaa ali serious muktak chhai ali pachhi aauchha...
Take Care,
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| chirag |
Posted
on 09-Jun-02 04:38 PM
Ek dharni ko tauko hallaye,
Laaj ko sanket mannus kyara,
Ek pawa ko jibro fatkare rish!!!
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| Voltaire |
Posted
on 09-Jun-02 06:41 PM
Chitiz laai chumu bhanthen
Hawaako bhumarimai bilin bhayechhu
Sindurko janti jaanchhu bhanthen
Bidawako malaama pugechhu.....
"Jibro fatkare" tyo "sabda binaako jawaaf" ali hunna ki Chirag ji?
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