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   DEKHAYERA NADEKHINE LUKAYERA NALUKINAY 02-Aug-02 narendra
     Narendra, Aba dabaune sabaune kam chh 02-Aug-02 deep
       deepji chodna pani mildaina, chodi hale 02-Aug-02 narendra
         Narendra, Are you alone on that dobat 02-Aug-02 deep
           Oh Narendra ji, Ek line aru lekhdya bha 02-Aug-02 takura
             maan bhitra raheko ko bhawana lai keybo 02-Aug-02 narendra
               Nagendra, You are reminding two of so 02-Aug-02 deep
                 pleeeeeeeeeez esto jhar pat kabita lekh 03-Aug-02 pan ko pat
                   what is this? is this a poem or a laugh 06-Aug-02 jyaps
                     AKKHA KO ANSHU KO THOPA MA TIMI MANKO G 07-Aug-02 007
                       Babu Narendra timi dobato tira dheri nab 11-Aug-02 chintit paribar


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narendra Posted on 02-Aug-02 10:53 AM

DEKHAYERA NADEKHINE
LUKAYERA NALUKINAY
MAYA BHANU KI CHAHANA
JAALI RAHEKO CHU AAJA MA

NAAM LINALAI NAMILNE
NALIYERA PANI NAHUNE
JINDAGI KO DOBATOMA
KAHAN AALJIYEKO CHU AAJA MA

BUJHAYERA NABUJINE
SAMJAYERA NASAMJHINE
YO MERO MAAN LAI
DABAYERA RAKHEKO CHU AAJA MA
DABAYERA RAKHEKO CHU AAJA MA.
deep Posted on 02-Aug-02 01:37 PM

Narendra,

Aba dabaune sabaune kam chhod-dinus. Dher dabayo bhane padkin.chha. Aaj samma bhaigo rakhi-halnu bhe chha...bholi bihanai dekhi chhod-dinus...Anandai hunchha.

Byapak Kanfuz bhako jasto lagyo, mlai ta, tapai ni.

Lukauna pani garho, Nam i lina pani namilni, dobato ma pani usaile lyayera chhad.dini aba kina ho tyo pani bujhna nasikini.... tyasti lai ke samjhera ta bhanya ni.

Please don't think I did not like your poem. hai?
narendra Posted on 02-Aug-02 03:11 PM

deepji chodna pani mildaina, chodi hale pani aananda mildaina, tesailay hola dobatoma alji baseko chu. confusion go gahirahima dubera utrinay prayas gardai chu, herdai jau bholi kaslay nai dekheko cha ra! anyway thanx for the suggestion.
deep Posted on 02-Aug-02 03:44 PM

Narendra,

Are you alone on that dobato or she (I am assuming, correct me otherwise) is there with you? Does she even know you're waiting on dobato? Is she also on a dobato or walking ahead hand in hand without no need to look back? Is she in the position to come to dobato to meet you, even if she wishes to?

I think she is not on the same dobato you are on with you. But still sometimes two confused people walk together and stand on dobato together as if they are together.

Na.chhode samma matra ho chhodna namilne. Kohi aaudaina bhane jindagi dherai chhoto chha parkhi rahana, Narendra.
takura Posted on 02-Aug-02 04:27 PM

Oh Narendra ji,
Ek line aru lekhdya bhaye hunthyo ni-
'Lekhera pani namlilney'
Kehi garda nahuney rahechha...ke tauko dukhai ra ho.....arkako budhi lai takya ho ki kyaho?
Sankai lagchha....Take it easy...
narendra Posted on 02-Aug-02 05:20 PM

maan bhitra raheko ko bhawana lai keyboard maarfat lerayeko chu, tesailay lekhera pani nalekhine bhanna lai ali mildaina. rahyo ko ko dobato ma cha bhanne kura, tyo chai ali bhanna garo cha. yo kura chai abasay ho, mero bhawana chai dobatoma cha. euta directon ko khoji ma, tara thaha chaina kun chai bato linu parne bhanera. aakhir papi maan ko kura cha, teti sajilo hundo rahenacha.
deep Posted on 02-Aug-02 08:21 PM

Nagendra,

You are reminding two of songs. Both songs are sung by veteran singer Udit dai.

Timilai dekhera aanka tyahi chhodi hide ma..tyahi chhodi hide ma..
.tyahi chhodi hide ma....

AND

Paani muni ghumaune sancho...
Baigunilai bolaune ke khacho..
maya baiguni...NABHAI nahuni...


Je hos, don't keep wandering for too long around that Dobaato.
Jamana kharab chha.

hai ta. nagendra bro.
pan ko pat Posted on 03-Aug-02 09:04 AM

pleeeeeeeeeez esto jhar pat kabita lekhna chodidinus,SISUKABI ji!!!
jyaps Posted on 06-Aug-02 03:53 PM

what is this? is this a poem or a laugh at our nepali literature?
007 Posted on 07-Aug-02 08:41 AM

AKKHA KO ANSHU KO THOPA MA TIMI
MANKO GAHIRAI MA TIMI
HAREK KABITA MA TIMI
SAMJHANA BHARIMA TIMI
MERO BOLI MA AAIDEU TIMI.
chintit paribar Posted on 11-Aug-02 10:48 AM

Babu Narendra timi dobato tira dheri nabasa ghar ma sabai jana chintit hunu huncha.Timi jata bhea pani turunta ghar aau hami timi lai kehi bhandainu.

Ps.barsha 25 ko kalo barna bhaeko bhundi ali kati niskeko keto katai dobato ma bheteo bhane turunta najik ko plice thana ma khabar gardinu hola.Uchit puraskar ko bebasta cha.