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   Another one! 02-Aug-02 ??!
     ??! 02-Aug-02 ??!
       J.T.A. = Junior Technical Asssitant 02-Aug-02 ??!
         Jhole office = Your office is where you 02-Aug-02 ??!
           No response??!... To much technical? 03-Aug-02 Gandhi
             I just finished reading your poem Gandhi 04-Aug-02 NK
               Gandhirajjyu ko kavita aadyopanta padhiy 04-Aug-02 Gokul
                 Thanks NKji and Gokulji.... It inspires 05-Aug-02 Gandhi
                   Gatilo re chha. lekham...lekham....aru l 05-Aug-02 deep
                     ek chin lai top ma lyauna matra... 14-Sep-02 creator


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??! Posted on 02-Aug-02 05:18 PM

Another one!
??! Posted on 02-Aug-02 05:18 PM

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??! Posted on 02-Aug-02 07:51 PM

J.T.A. = Junior Technical Asssitant (Grassroot level agricultural development worker)
Bikase = A nick name for development wokers (or technically produced things)
RR-21 = A variety of wheat that was first introduced to the area
Chinimal = Chemical fertilizer (amonium shulphate?)
Gedemal = Chemical fertilizer (Di-Amonium Phosphate or DAP)
Dulaipani = A place in Tahanhun district, on the bank of Madi river, 3 hrs from Damauli
Dandeso = Small danda (hillock)
??! Posted on 02-Aug-02 07:57 PM

Jhole office = Your office is where you go.. put a little stamp, pad, letterpads, a pen and a tooth paste and a brush etc. in your airbag. You can say mobile office.
Gandhi Posted on 03-Aug-02 09:00 AM

No response??!... To much technical?
NK Posted on 04-Aug-02 10:18 AM

I just finished reading your poem Gandhiji. I am not a critique but I enjoy reading good poems just like I like to listen to good music. I liked this poem of yours. from what I have seen so far, I think your are a far superior writer when you write in Nepali than when you do in English.
Gokul Posted on 04-Aug-02 09:27 PM

Gandhirajjyu ko kavita aadyopanta padhiyo. Kavita saral bhayikana pani shukchhama chha. Shukchhama yas arthama ki kavi le hamro deshko mool vikriti lai kati yathaartik ewam vyangyatmak vishleshanaa gareka chhan: Kaam garne hanuman, pagari guthne dhendu. Rajnaitik put dehkiye pani kavita kunai vaad ko pani daas bhayeko dekhidain. Yo kavi ko vishista kavya chetana ho.

Saras ra subodhya kavita ko rasaswaadan garne awasar pradan garnu bhayeko maa abhaar prakat nagarnu ni:shankanai kritaghnata hunechha. Antya maa Janakavi Gokul Joshi ka yi pankti haru:

Doke ka pasina bane bama bhane rokera po hunchha ke?
Bhatkyo manjila tyo jagai sanga bhane bokera po hunchha ke?
Sancho nimti sabai uthe, ma radio bolera po hunchha ke?
Sara jurmuriye ma bhaat kavi le lekhera po hunchha ke?
Gandhi Posted on 05-Aug-02 11:09 AM

Thanks NKji and Gokulji.... It inspires me to write more....
deep Posted on 05-Aug-02 11:15 AM

Gatilo re chha. lekham...lekham....aru lekham. Hami chhadai chham ni padhan dini.

Comment garenan bhanera chhodna hunna ke lekhna...dinu parchha danaaaaaaaadan...kabita le ni feri, aru le danaadan dinda ta tyastai fela paryo bhane dhandeso fuskauchha ni.
creator Posted on 14-Sep-02 08:54 PM

ek chin lai top ma lyauna matra...