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| deep |
Posted
on 12-Aug-02 02:58 PM
Deusire
Dashain aghiko tyam thiyo. One fine foggy morning I reached Tri-chandra campus at 5:55 AM. It was not a regular class day. I rarely used to care to be there at campus on time on a class day but that day I was there on time. In fact, few minutes early. There were bunch of other students already gathered. We were supposed to leave at six for formally an excursion but informally a picnic tour to Nagarkot. Zoology miss and couple of other teachers were also accompanying us. We were repeatedly told not to carry any alcholic/narcotic products with us.
I joined my group (Prakas, Amar, Pradeep, and Rajman)." Chiso chiso chha yaar hai", Amar said. I looked at him but shifted my look to Prakas and asked, "lya chha?". "ke?", he asked as if he didn't know. "Maal", I said. Pradeep and Rajman both looked at him. Prakas said, "No, didn't you hear them saying not to bring that kind of stuff?". "hey m*****, khyal nagar na", I said. "tero masu khani", he said. As we were boarding bus, teachers were searching us with their eyes for jaand/raksi and other stuff.
We reached Bhaktapur. Many of us wanted to visit turkistan real bad to abandon early morning tea and what not but driver refused to stop the bus. When some of us got really mad driver said he was told not to stop before Nagarkot. Our miss and other teachers were worried that we might buy liquor and other stuff if allowed to get off. We complained and a teacher asked the driver to stop for turkistan.
We reached Nagarkot. Mahadev pokhari (?) was our final destination. Teachers warned us again. "No alchohol or other laagu padartha". After chia pauroti group started to disperse for *excursion*.
Deep, let's go see around Prakas said. I looked at Rajman and Pradeep. Jam, jam...yaha ke **** khana basi rani? Pradeep said. We all walked for a while. Prakas stopped by a pine tree on a viralo, looked around and said, "basam yaar ek chhin". We all sat. He took a bottle of siri (from Sri distillery) and couple of glasses. He looked at me and others. Amar also took out couple of more glasses. We all smiled. We started our business. Amar occasionally drank from the bottle directly.
"ye, ma*****haru dher khani haina hai, ahile lagyo bhane ta l*** jasto bawal hunchha", Pradeep warned all of us, I guess. Yehi mu** dui bottle ho, aba m*** dher na thor, Amar responded and took another bottle out from his jacket. Rajman looked at him. "bhaktapure", Amar smiled. Bottles rit.tiye, gaf suru bho. garmi garmi jasto bho.
Ekkasi, Amar got up. Gave us a sharp look then smiled. "bas m****, talai lagyo ki ke ho?' Prakas asked. Amar did not answer. Right then, he kicked my glass. I looked at him.
Before I could say anything, Amar garjiyo, " Ye kera ko khamba deusire". "ye m*** ye, I said and tried to pull his hand to make him seat. He kicked another glass and said, "panch bhai jamma, deusire". Rajman looked at him with concern. "la ma****** yaslai lagyo" he said. As prakas got up to calm Amar down, he (Amar) kicked siri ko bottle with a good force. Bootlle uchhit.tiyera hit a pine tree and shattered. "Bhana bhana bhai ho..."before he could say Deusire, he lost his balance and felled then started to roll down thru that viralo landscape." He was frantically grabbing everything to hold on.
We all got really worried. He rolled down some 30 feet and stopped by a tree. Got up. Looked at us and feri garjiyo, "deusire".
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| Sangey |
Posted
on 12-Aug-02 03:40 PM
Funny. Very funny.
Jaandh khako kura kai silsila ma, mero euta choto katha pani bhani haloom.
My friend, his cousin and I hiked all the way to Nagarkot ko tuppo once (some 15 years ago). By the time we reached our pre-designated camp site, all of us were thakera lakhataraan. None of us had the jaagar to even open up the can-food. We had brought nine large bottles of Iceberg beer, which we happily started guzzling. It was around 7pm, with our empty stomach and tired bodies, all three of us got drunk pretty quick.
From what we could remember the next day, that night, three of us went to take a dump in the woods. And we were competing with each other whose crap would be the largest in amount. Dunno who won. But apparently I slept with a khukuri underneath my head that night because of the fear that a bear or two might show up smelling that beer laden crap.
We still laugh about it whenever we get together and reminisce.
Sangey.
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| NK |
Posted
on 12-Aug-02 03:49 PM
Gee! You guys! I am still laughing!
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| deep |
Posted
on 12-Aug-02 03:55 PM
Sangey,
*Funny. Very funny.*
Thanks.
Sanch.chi, ma teen barsa aghi Nagarkot gako thiye tyahi tuppo tira campsite ma. Kahile kahi ta kasto kasto pari aauchha. chhak.ka lagchha. Ahile tha bho. Sangey, tyo camp site ta doong-doongti thiyo. Chhyaaaaaaaaaa!!
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| deep |
Posted
on 12-Aug-02 04:00 PM
Nk,
Is this "Deusire" better than "thank you" to you?
Ramo ram, tyo camp site nera ko jungle ta dooong-dooongti nai thiyo.
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| NK |
Posted
on 12-Aug-02 04:24 PM
deep, definitely. Then again you ought not to be so sad that I did not like your story, 'Thank You.' Not everything written by James Joyce was a masterpiece, not everything painted by Klee is beautiful .... and so on...
You are indeed good at telling stories. your stories hold attention, you want to know what happens next. They make you laugh, the create empathy to your characters. What more could one ask for, especially if your von beruf is not a writer? Or, are you taking creative writing class to be the next Samrat? :)
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| oys_chill |
Posted
on 12-Aug-02 04:29 PM
hahaha
thanx deep bro..pet nai dukhyo!! thanx for making this gloomy monday a lil better!!
Deusire ko kura garda, hamro deusire po yaad aaing..tyo kun chai kt ko ghar ma gayera,
"HEY BHANA BHANA BHAI HO....... "DEU CHORI" re kya ;)
chill oys
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| Biswo |
Posted
on 12-Aug-02 07:40 PM
Deepji,
Funny.Life ma tannai experience batulnu bhaaraichha. Tapaaiko experience
ko irshyaa lagne ke. Trichandra tira ta kahilekaahi ma pani hallana pugthen.
May be our eyes pani judhe holan (tapaiko word maa, may be maile tapaailaai
ghuraan diye hulaa) tara I regret we didn't talk. Tara kunai kunai funny ketaa
harule bahira tanna yuwatiharu jammaa paarera guff diyeko ta ajhai samjhanchhu.
O, Sageyji, that khukri to scare off bear piece was also awesome. Really ho
tapai testo aatilo manchhe ho ra?
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| Mangal |
Posted
on 12-Aug-02 10:51 PM
A good piece indeed. I thouroughly enjoyed it!
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| chintit |
Posted
on 12-Aug-02 11:04 PM
Yo keta haru jhan gaye pani Jhaard nakhai basna sakdainanan!!
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| deep |
Posted
on 13-Aug-02 08:07 AM
NK,
I am glad that you enjoyed *Deusire*.
Oys_chill,
"thanx deep bro..pet nai dukhyo!! thanx for making this gloomy monday a lil better!! "
My pleasure Oys. Tyasto Deu chhori hami pani misau.thiyoun bela bela deusire ma.
Biswoji,
"..may be maile tapaailaai ghuraan diye hulaa..."
Tapai pani ghuran dina aaunu hunthyo ra bhanya TC tira? Ghuran nai dina aaune garya bhe pani prime target ta nawa-yubatiharu nai hunthe holan ni....
Mangal,
Thanks.
Chintit,
Chinta le chita jalauchha bhanchhan. Dher chintit nahunus. Jana ta sabai le janai parchha re tara hataar kina? kaso? tyam lera jaanu parchha ke, feri aauna paine ho haina? ke thaha?
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| Gokul |
Posted
on 13-Aug-02 12:47 PM
Deep,
I know you wrote it as a light-hearted, short reading and in that objective you have been definitely successful. But what I also notice is that you can take anything ordinary and make it interesting and extraordinary and that is your real talent.
You remember Shankar Lamichhane's "Aupanyasik Patra: Jiwan ko prishtabhoomima"?
There are characters and plots for stories everywhere. We just need the eyes to see them.
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| pasa |
Posted
on 13-Aug-02 08:38 PM
je hos deep is like gopal bahadur ghale. do you guys/gals still remember ghale? pasa
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| deep |
Posted
on 14-Aug-02 07:51 AM
Gokul,
Thanks.
Ani pasa, who is this Ghale dai? Was/is he a good fellow or simajhyakne khattam?
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| pasa |
Posted
on 14-Aug-02 06:32 PM
kati chando birseko ta slc ko kitab pani. slc diyeko kati bho 15 barsa ta pakkai nageko chhaina hola. pasa
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| deep |
Posted
on 14-Aug-02 07:07 PM
pasa,
slc ko ghale lai po ghich.chyayeko yaha? Hareyyyyyyyy!!!!!
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| oys_chill |
Posted
on 14-Aug-02 07:08 PM
mmm i remember that name..
darn..brain cells ta khattam!!
kun story ma re ?
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| deusire |
Posted
on 14-Aug-02 07:16 PM
class ten - ENGLISH(part 2)-
First lesson is about driver RAMSINGH.
Second lesson-A STORYTELLER(Gopal Bahadur Ghale)-lesson 19(?)
hehe--- he fought with tiger;so brave!!!!
forgot???? harey !!!!!!!!!
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| Pasa |
Posted
on 14-Aug-02 10:28 PM
He was really a nice story teller. aba ta chapter chapte ayo haina. how about gambhir man ko london ko yatra tyo pani ta yad ayo hola. pasa
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| Nepe |
Posted
on 14-Aug-02 11:44 PM
Deepji, I hope my applause for your story is still welcome. I mean party sakkine belama lussukka aayera ngichcha daant dekhauna aaunchha nabhannu hai ? I enjoyed it very much. It provoked some long forgotten ramaila memories of similar theme of my youth too. Ani Gokulji.le je tapai.ko lekhan kala barey je bhannu bhayo, tyo kura mero pani jibro.ko tuppa.mai thiyo. He said it better than I could. That’s all.
These days your story.haru laagna thaleko chha malai. Rokna khojda khojdai pani tapai.kai shailee nakkal garna pugchhu. Aru ta aru, politics ma rajniti ghusya kura garda pani, lekhai.ma tapai.kai shaili ko chhanak aaunchha. Padnu bhayo ‘Does Nepal need monachy’ thread ? Najaanido tarika.le tyo thread.ko bigyapan garna aayeko bhani nathaannu hai ? Thaane pani tyo ardha-satya matrai ho rey kya ! (Oops, kasko nakkal gariyo pheri ?)
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| deep |
Posted
on 15-Aug-02 10:09 AM
Nepeji,
"Deepji, I hope my applause for your story is still welcome."
Certainly. Kurai chhaina ni...nahune ta."
"These days your story.haru laagna thaleko chha malai. Rokna khojda khojdai pani tapai.kai shailee nakkal garna pugchhu."
Yeah, I noticed that in *Does Nepal need monarchy* thread. I am as always kayal chhu tapaiko logic ko. Aba, whether I share your stand on monarchy or not is a different subject but with keen interest I went thru the thread.
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