| Username |
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| MmmBop |
Posted
on 14-Aug-02 08:29 AM
DWI wrote a free style ghazal. I don't know what this is but this is something that
just started flowing downstream from my heart, call it whatever you want.
Euta Nepali ko parivarik Katha-byatha:
Hamraa Khandan:
Hamra baa
Hamra baa neta bhayechhan,
Gharma dhido na dekhera,bhok hadtal ma gayechhan.
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Hamri Amaa
Hamri amaa kisan bhain re,
Akha ko godmel, ra siranhi ko sinchai garchhin re.
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Hamra Baaje
Hamra baje dharmik rahechhan,
Din-raat arya ghat ko chheu ma dhalkan chhan.
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Hamri bajyai
Hamri bajyai byapari bhain re,
Aushadhi ma pani misai khana thalin re.
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Hamra chhora
Hamra chhora shikari bhayechha,
Upallo chhimeki ko kukhura shikar ma gayechha.
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Hamri chhori
Hamri chhori baathi bhain re,
Daijo nadine upaya khojin re.
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| DWI |
Posted
on 14-Aug-02 10:27 AM
Hmmm.
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| Nyapli |
Posted
on 14-Aug-02 02:58 PM
I hate long posting.... I don't even wanna read 'em.
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| no to long ones |
Posted
on 14-Aug-02 03:05 PM
same here nyapli. wonder how people have so much time and energy!
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| sweetcheeks |
Posted
on 14-Aug-02 03:11 PM
namaste
i know some ghazals too:
1.
Ghar ma Jaro
Heater kholdha garo?
2.
hamro jivan:
Gham ayooo pasina
Pani parda Asina
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| MmmBop |
Posted
on 14-Aug-02 03:20 PM
Sorry for the long ones, but they aren't really long. They are just taking up spaces.
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| DWI |
Posted
on 14-Aug-02 06:36 PM
I think it is just a geet or ghazal..whatever..
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