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| jira |
Posted
on 21-Aug-02 12:50 PM
Ewuta naya suruwaat
aunee lamo beesurjun punee
22 ko duffa lai mero buddhai cha
cheeso sanglo ma berinu bhunda
dhan ko gu ma gudilkina ramailo hunthyo
naya paribesh, nawulo anubhab
aphunta haru ley geejyawulaan
chimeyki ko irshya samapta bho aba
chora chori ko ewutai gunaso cha
ba ghara phurkeynun
petrol beena mero maruti
dashain ko mookh ma teerkhayeko cha
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| DHYANGRE |
Posted
on 21-Aug-02 12:55 PM
Jira, you do write well and you have an inherent instinct to write. But , as a reader, I want to suggest that when you start saying or writing , finish it also.
Nepalima bhanda kheri " BIT MAREKO BHAYENA". Tyetti matra ho.
Mero posting padhera ris uthyo bhane , rislai thukdinu, Aago banayera hoina, Thuk banayera.
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| sparsha |
Posted
on 21-Aug-02 01:34 PM
Jira ji,
I really liked your expression. Yeah, maruti and "pyatul" is more important than whether dad comes home or not. Dad, after all, did his share - accumulated black wealth. What else is he good for? I am worried for that guy who was all hyped about getting married to that *dhanapati* dad's daughter. It's sad to see *sarkar(malik)* in a "kaaragar*. But I am guessing sarkar in kaaragar is also thinking "kaati din ho ra?"
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