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| deep |
Posted
on 21-Aug-02 02:41 PM
Maya ra Samjhana
Jhareka paat ra seet ka thopa
Koolo mathi ko dhaan khet
Katan hundo danda ma ubhhindo ghar
Paani chuhido bhanda ko bhat
Nepali ko ananya maya Nepal lai
Chautara ko chhaya, kuwako paani
Garmi ko purvi hawa, jaado ko gham
Sharad ko dashain tihar, bashanta ka fool
Atharbarsa ko prem, mayaluko sparsha
Nepali ko gahiro samjha Nepal ma
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| oys_chill |
Posted
on 21-Aug-02 07:23 PM
yo chati bhari, muri ka muri, nepali maya cha..bhanne line po yaad aayo deep dai..
yo chai ali bujiyo suntali bhanda chai ;)
a good one :) aaba katha parityag garera kabita ma hum faleko???? jus a thought!
oys
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| deep |
Posted
on 22-Aug-02 08:03 AM
*....aaba katha parityag garera kabita ma hum faleko?..*
Haina, Oys.
I just wrote How I love and remember Nepal. the last line should be read as Nepali ko gahiro samjhana nepalma.
What is seet for fallen leaves? How good is dhan khet beyond canal? How secure is a pairo ko house? How good is kacho bhat? However, seet, dhan khet, house, and bhat are lovable.
Nepal ko samjhana is so sweet that it can only be expressed in abstract.
yastai chha. ke garne? Kabi sabi haina aafu ta. dashain/tihar aauna layo...maya ra samjhana chha Nepal ko tyahi ho.
Boudhha gayera pani dherai langur burja kheliyo. I always preferred "chha goti" over "tin goti". Dashain ma tika lako paisa Langur burja ma taat hunda ko dukh ajhai samjhanchhu. Langur ma rakhyo, burja tirbal parne. Intta ma rakhyo paan chouber parne, surot ma rakhyo chidi double parne. kya barbad! taat huna ta time nai nalagne!
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| deep |
Posted
on 22-Aug-02 03:32 PM
Ahem,
Khai Nepe and other samalochak/pathak jyu haru?
Hyatteri!! Kehi nabhaye "yo kabita jhoor re chha" samma ta bhan.na mil.chha ki? sudhar ko gunjayas chhaina bhane pani?
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| oys_chill |
Posted
on 22-Aug-02 03:44 PM
dai, ma ta kwati khane deen bhanne thaha payera, ghar missing
bacha ma kwati beena khana nakhane :( kasto ho life.......bhok lagyo
nways, yor poem rocks k..nepe ji nai kina chaine?? ;)
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| Nepe |
Posted
on 22-Aug-02 04:31 PM
Tyehi ta Oys, kina Nepe chahiyo ? Deep rocks, chahe laghu-katha hos chahe kabita.
Yo kabita bare chahi mero tippani yesto chha..
This poem is a complete recipe for a great poem. The poet has left the cooking part to the readers themselves.
I hope I did not disappoint you, Deep. You are a gifted person. Keep up the good work.
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| deep |
Posted
on 23-Aug-02 10:03 AM
Nepe, Oys, dherai pramsamsa gardiyera malai *bhai ma na bhada ma* pani pardina hunna hai ;)
Nepe ji nai khojeko ta haina tara Sajha ma kabita ko fant ma murdhanya haru khojnu parda Nepe, NK, Gokul ra aru kehi gahakila byaktitwaharu ko nam agrapankti ma sthapit bhayeko anubhavle yo prayasrat sikaru lai prabhavit pareko tat.thya karan ko rup ma prastut garna chahanchhu.
Ani, Oys_Chill, how can I discount you? chanasai chhaina ni!!!!
Udeko chha man ghyaite pakheta liyera
gantabya tadha katai chha kyare khai dekhi daina
Dherai choti thaki sakeko man ma udharo utsah bharera
fat fatudo udan ma chhu tyahi nepathya ko gantabya tira.
Jai nepal !! tara ma kangresi hoina.
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| NK |
Posted
on 23-Aug-02 10:46 AM
Deep,
Forgive me if I don't say anything on your poems. Nepali ma lekhney ra padney bani chuteko hunda, nepali kabita garho lagcha. I may not be the right person to throw my two cents worth. Still, I find this poem beautiful. My uneducated comment.
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| deep |
Posted
on 23-Aug-02 11:15 AM
Harreeeyyyyyy! ke ko forgive ni?
Akhir, NK ta afnai ho ni!!!
Whether you accept or not you are a poet to me. ke garne?
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