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   A scene of dramatic action: Script: 03-Sep-02 Maharjan


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Maharjan Posted on 03-Sep-02 10:55 PM

A scene of dramatic action:

Script: Two men (age approximately 28) are standing in a corner of a park. A woman (age approximately 26) is walking toward them. She is walking alone and she is almost 25 feet far form the men. The men are looking each other and the woman is heading toward them with a smiling face. She shows up her excitement and one of the man smiles looking at her and gestures her about her beautiful smile. While she gets at the place, where the men are standing, she holds hand one of the man and kisses the man. The man's friend is standing close to them. They go to a restaurant for a dinner.

The man (Tom): He wants to talk to her increasingly about his perception.
The man's friend (John): He is quiet to some extent, he wants to talk about something else.
The woman (Jenny): She wants to tell her story to her man. She knew that the man's friend (John) would not object on her talking. She shows her willingness of story telling to her man.


The THEME of the movie is to present a good relationship of a man and a woman and a suspense role of the man's friend in their relationship.



Shot: 1: A long shot (LS): Two men are standing in a corner of a park and a woman is coming toward them. The men are waiting for her and she shows her excitement to see them in the evening. A few people are walking around the park. Some people are sitting in the chairs in the park. Camera is focusing on the woman, on her smiling face. Camera is moving slowly to the men with the pace of the woman reaching toward them.
Shot: 2: A close up (CU) of the woman, (while she is close to the men), she is looking at her man. Camera turns to get a full picture of them to show of holding hands each other, the man and the woman. Slowly, the Camera focuses on them and they kiss each other, The man's friend is a few feet behind the scene.
Shot: 3: A medium shot (MS) of walking for a while, showing the people around the park and near the park.
Shot: 4: Medium shot, a receptionist is standing close to the door of a restaurant and they get into the restaurant. CU of the woman, CU to the man, the receptionist gets them in a table close to the window (summer time: a nice evening scenario).
Shot: 5: CU of the woman, she is looking at his man, slowly getting MS, the man looking at he woman. The man's friend is looking outside through the window. He is enjoying the summer scenario.
Shot: 6: A wait staff gives them menu, (MS), she asks for a glass of water, she acts that she is thirsty a little bit.
Shot: 7: (MS) The man asks to his friend that what he wants to have for appetizer. The man is not paying attention on the menu. He turns to his woman and asks same question. CU of her, she smiles and asks him what he has decided for appetizer. She drinks water very gently right after asking him.
Shot: 8: (MS) she looks outside through the window, the man's friend goes to rest room for a while. A scene of the inside of the restaurant, she talks about the decoration of the restaurant, the painting of nice flowers, scenery of waterfall, hills, mountains, and birds. She comments that it's nice decoration. The man's friend comes back and sits in his seat.
Shot: 9: CU of her, she moves a little bit close to her man, and holds his hand.
Shot: 10: Wait staff comes back, takes order to serve food. CU of her, she tells all the order of food for them or for the table. She thanks to the wait staff.
Shot: 11: MS, they start having food, talking at the same time, drinks are served for the table. CU of her, she holds wine class and they cheer the wine.
Shot: 12: (MS), the man pays the bill, leaves tips, thanks to the wait staff.
Shot: 13: (MS), the woman talks to the man's friend, she asks about his schooling and job. The woman thanks him for being with them. The man thanks him for being with them for the evening. The man's friend leaves them and walks in his way.
Shot: 14: CU, They kiss each other and put their hands on shoulder to each other.
Shot: 15: (MS), They take a cab and head to the man's home.
Shot: 16: (MS), The home is nice, front yard, side yards, and back yard.
Shot: 17: CU, of the woman, she turns around in the living room.
Shot: 18: (MS), the man comes in the living room, sits in a sofa, and turns on the TV.
Shot: 19: CU, of the man, changing television channels: cartoons, music, talk show, movie, finally news, local news.
Shot: 20: CU, of the television news, news host, news reader, a news of killing of a man himself, suicide at his home: the man shocked by the news, the man's friend did committed suicide.
Shot: 21: CU, the man cries, and turns off the TV, goes to the rest room.
Shot: 22: (MS), the woman is enjoying the setting of the room, interior setting is impressive for her. She looks for the man, the man comes in the living room, hiding the shocked face or hiding a sorrowful face in front of her.
Shot: 23: CU, of them, they kiss each other and the man goes to leave her in a bus station close to his house. They say bye to each other….
Shot: 24: CU, of the man cry after letting her go to her house…….. Movie ends with a suspension whether the man's friend's role is a successive supportive role or completely failure of supportive role in their relationship.

The end: //