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| deep |
Posted
on 06-Sep-02 12:41 PM
It was 11:20 PM and I was far from getting home. Walking northbound through chilim park in lainchowr I was thinking "aaja chahi ma mu** chet". I was not really worried what my people would say/do to me when I get home. I was least concerned with that. Bhoot!! that's what my major concern was. What if I am followed by a ghost! Streets around there were completely deserted. No one was around. No cars, motorbikes, cycles, people...no one!
It was a cold Paush (Push) night. few street lamps saki nasaki bali ra the. Heart was beating faster and faster. She shouldn't have done that to me. It's all her fault. How could see go see a movie with Chheparo when I was the one who was ready to die for her. Chheparo, yeah whoever gave that name to Sirish thought well before doing renwaran. Sneaky Chheparo. He knew I was madly in love with Neetu but still he sneaked in between Neetu and me. Sanjha Biswojyoti ma 6-9 ko cinema herna lagya Sirish ra Neetu lai dekhe dekhi man thik bhayena. So, ek chhin rankiyera bhautariye pachhi I bought some twat and went to Chilim park. Wherelse could I go chyattiyeko man liyera?
Twat mathi twat ...churot mathi churot layera katibela tyahi chilim park ma dhale mu** yaadai chhaina. It's all her fault. Neete, rachhesni! I knew how to take care of that Chheparo if I make it thru this night. I was walking home in that scary hour of the night.
Now I was walking thru Rajdarbar uttar dhoka and was heading east bound. I was contineously looking back to see if I am being followed. I was not worried if a chor follows me. I had nothing valuable on me for a thief to steal except my heart which was already stolen by Neetu. As I was approaching Tukucha, I heard someone walking pretty close to me all of a sudden. Ma ta sannai bhaye. Felt like heart is about to stop. Should I turn around? I was not so sure what am I gonna see. Mahadev ko nam liyera I turned around there was nobody. It was a quiet cold night. I slowly moved on. No sound. Didn't hear anyone behind me. I thought what I heard earlier was just an illusion. It was just my tras-dar. "Darpok mu**" mannmanai I teased to myself even though I was very scared. Then again I heard someone walking behind me. "la ma%$#@ ma aba khattam", I thought.
I sharply looked back-I guess some residual effect of that bijuli jal I had earlier-only to find nothing/no one threatening. Then started to walk cautiously. I heard nothing. It's nothing but tyahi aghi lako twat ko asar ho, I was pretty much sure. Yo mu** raksi pani khane chhez ho? I asked to myself. Maile nai "haina" bhanera tauko hallaidiye. I was relieved. Right after I cross tukuchako pool, I heard that following sound again. It was dark there. I paid close attention to the sound behind me. Yes, someone was following. It was just behind me. "Aaja kasto dasha lagya re chha....ma*&^%$ bhoot ko fela pare ma..." Tras ra nairasya chhayo.I walked faster, faster I was followed. I ran, heard someone running behind me. I stopped. Bhoot also stopped. Now I was right in front of Arjel baje's house in that (ka)sahi tole. What do I do? should I scream ? I couldn't do that. I felt like someone is choking me. I was sweating.
I started to remember all the gods and goddesses near and far. Tangal Ganesh was not that far so I called upon him without wasting much time. Sadhai ghumne nai garya ho, ganesthan..khai ta mu** parya bela? I asked to myself then quickly apologized to ganesh for using m word also for doubting his ability. This certainly was not the time to attack deities. may be I should be walking singing loud. Usaita ta khattam awaz tyo pani niskiya haina tyati bela. Karayera pani ke garnu? kasaile ke bho bhanyo bhane ke bhanne? bhoot dekhine haina....afailai baulaha bhanchhan. I reached ganesthan. Felt a bit good. Bhaktipurvak ganeshtan ghume. I looked around saw no one. Tyo jaado ma pani aafu lai nikkai garmi bhai ra thyo.
For a second I thought of going thru Thulo pokhari but I quickly abandoned that idea. I had heard that Tudaldevi lost some gahanas in that pokhari and I had heard people saying that lamdhunga lying flat there on that crossroad came straight from the sky and was holding a bhoot inside. So, I decided to walk thru Bhatbhateni. Bhatbhateni ko nam japdai I was walking on. Chhati dhakka bhayo. Again "swar swar swar swar" it came right begind me. I was followed again. I could hear the sound so close to me that I had no doubt that if I abrupty stop that bhoot is gonna bump on me. I was blanketed with goosebumps. I really regretted throwing spat stones at a dewal few days back. I apologized for that. "Parmeswori, ma murkha lai maf gardeu", I prayed. I had heard that gayatrai mantra is extremely powerful against bhoots but afno bartaman bha thena. I was mad at my parents for not doing my bratabanda on time.
I passed bhatbhateni beggeing for favor. The area between bhatbhateni and dhalku was not that well lit. every time stray dogs barked and came running towards me, I was not sure whether they were at me or at the bhoot...afu lai kukkur dekhera yasai pani dar lagne. Jhan kukur lai yamaraj ko doot bhanchhan. I tried to walk fast, there it was right behind me walking again. I felt like I can here it breath on my ear. I ran again and it was running behind me. I thought a couple of times it tried to catch my feet. I stopped at dhalku and looked back. It vanished! I remember Narayan -our domestic help- saying how his older brother Chandra died in his village. One evening chandra was watching water for dhan khet in besi. Around midnight he was walking back from the river to the khets. There he saw a pig walking ahead of him. He wondered where this pig came from. Pig was walking slow and was blocking aali for him to walk. So, chandra still wondering tried to move it off of the aaali. "Ghwaaank", pig screamed jumped two aalis and turned into a buffalo. Chandra ran towards his house. Vomitted blood and died right at the door step of his house.
Mero pani aaja tyastai hune hola. Gharaima kam tamam. I was mad at myself for thinking so negatively. From Dhalku on it was even worse. I did not want to run (Chandra was in my mind) but as I was approaching home I was tempted to walk fast or even run and get inside the house as soon as possible. Suddenly, it came walking fast behind me. I ran without thinking much. It ran too. Mutu futla jasto bho. Few times it caught my jacket, I thought. Ek saas ma I reached home. Opened the door and got inside. Locked the door behind. Ma ta pasina pasina bhaye.
I went to my room. "aaja ta bachiyo...jhannai shivakhulit bhako", I said mannmanai. Looked at my watch. It was sharp 12:00 midnight. As I turned around to close the door of my room, AABUI.... jiu bhari kaanda oothe, waves of chill ran though my spine..I saw myself standing behind the door staring at me.
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| psychodreamer |
Posted
on 06-Sep-02 01:05 PM
Nice one..
some time when i have nightmares of bhoots, i cant help but think of some devi mata and pray to her that it was nothing and i would give that smile to myself for moran i was to beleive in bhuts :)
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| oys_chill |
Posted
on 06-Sep-02 01:08 PM
hahaha deep dai, majja aayo!!
tudal devi le tapai lai ni asar parya ki kya ho bro? tyastai ho...
abbui afu le afai lai follow gardya?? raati padna ramailo aauthyo.....tai pani..something to think about..when u r killing those sad and the weak cells on a friday nite ;)
haha..its fun to write bout these things hai? eventhough i know i am the most skeptic person i know in this world...I wish i could tell about my very bizarre tudal devi case..which haunts me often....maybe some other time ;)
for now keep them coming deep dai ;) all the dark secrets :O
oys
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| Mitra 2 |
Posted
on 06-Sep-02 01:21 PM
Deep, good one. You always bring new taste in town. shivakhulit? very funny!
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| jira |
Posted
on 06-Sep-02 01:30 PM
Nice one !
"Sadhai ghumne nai garya ho, ganesthan..khai ta mu** parya bela? "
heheh..malai nee kaileykai tyastai huncha ....
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| vibrant_sou |
Posted
on 06-Sep-02 01:33 PM
Do u happen to see the connection between "indu ko story" and this one????
"i saw myself standing behind the door staring at me"
hmm.....just -a -thought!
chill\ good narration "deep" ji
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| deep |
Posted
on 06-Sep-02 06:55 PM
This "Pratibimba" is not just guf. It's true.
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| Pasa |
Posted
on 06-Sep-02 07:32 PM
Nice none deep jee,
especially, chilimpark istead of children park. what is next ?
pasa
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| Biswo |
Posted
on 06-Sep-02 07:49 PM
Deepji,
A funny tale(oops, truth!) to read for this weekend. It was a good one, Deepesque.
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| deep |
Posted
on 07-Sep-02 10:16 AM
Truth bhanera napatyako ke ho, Biswo ji?
Tyas pachhi ke bho will write later, ani biswas hunchha.
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| Ebony_firefly |
Posted
on 07-Sep-02 10:28 AM
deep and his fiction's give unbelievably "real life like" feeling....lols
;)
blac_
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| deep |
Posted
on 07-Sep-02 09:43 PM
Jay Sambho! .... Ali kam bho!!
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| Biswo |
Posted
on 08-Sep-02 01:10 AM
Deepji,
Kina napatyaaunu bhaneko. I really believe you.
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| deep |
Posted
on 09-Sep-02 09:01 AM
Ok, I guess this is not a bad time to talk about the "bhoot" that was following me.
Well, it's clear under what condition Deep was heading home from chilim park (Yes, pasa, it actually is children's park but all of my friends used to call it chilim park...Jai Shankar!).
I was followed all the way by a swar sware bhoot. If I ran it ran follwing me. if I stopped it also stopped. If I looked back it was nowhere to be seen. And after getting home when I turned around to close the door of my room, I saw myself standing behind the door staring at me...jiringa hune gari....
Pachhi thaha bho what actually was happening. Polyester ko pants lako thyo trouser bahir...raksi le chhodya thiyena purai....dar le chayappa samatya thyo....ani jaha jaha ali badi aadhyaro thyo tyaha tyaha jhan dher dar lagne...tukucha nera aaye pachhi folllow garya sunya ta tyahi polister ko pants swar swar gardo re chha...ma rokiye bhane pants swar swar garne kurai bhe na..so I was not hearing anyone following me when I stopped. Chado chado hinda chado chado nai swar swar hune bho....closely follow garya jasto ta lagne nai bho afnai pants swar swar garda. daudida lakhetne nai bho afnai pants le...rokiyera pachhadi herda kaslai dekhnu ra? raksi ko asar baki chhadai thyo khutta ghari ghari aljhauna..ani tyahi sware sware bhut le khutta samatna lako hoki jasto ta hune nai bho....
...bato bhari tarsidai aako...kotha ko dhoka launa khojda dhoka ma taseko full size ko aaina ma afaile afailai ghuran deko ta dekhine nai bho....saato jane garera!!
tyastai bho! satya katha!
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| oys_chill |
Posted
on 09-Sep-02 10:38 AM
hahah deep dai.
malai sanka ta lagya thiyo..pratibimba bhanera..nways hahah...such a thin line between fact and fiction :O.jhaap bhaye pachi ta tyai ho ;)
nways, hope to read more tudal devi experiences if u have any deep dai ;)
oys
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