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| Gandhi |
Posted
on 07-Sep-02 11:24 PM
Please enjoy and feedback to me:
Page 1:
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| Gandhi |
Posted
on 07-Sep-02 11:25 PM
Page 2:
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| deep |
Posted
on 07-Sep-02 11:50 PM
Thik chha, la. Ramro kabita. Adharat ma mun halungo bho.
Yo graha dasha ko shanti bhanya pani ek bitte rumal le dui bitte laaj dhakna khojya jasto...yata chhopyo oota dekhine oota chhopyo yata. tyastai parera baliyo hawa chalyo bhane ta kata rumal kata laaj.
Good one, gandhi ji. hope to read more.
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| wow |
Posted
on 07-Sep-02 11:58 PM
wow
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| Biswo |
Posted
on 08-Sep-02 01:12 AM
Gandhiji,
I enjoyed reading your poem. prelim sakiyeko ho ki ke ho?:-)
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| Gandhi |
Posted
on 08-Sep-02 09:21 AM
Yup Biswoji. A Nepali script poem was due on this ocassion, haina ra? I just tried to protray one of the corrupt official.
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| SOULFREE |
Posted
on 08-Sep-02 09:50 AM
Gandhi bro... good one... la la cha cha!!!
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| god da creator |
Posted
on 09-Sep-02 12:41 PM
I like it to bring to top.
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| binay_g |
Posted
on 09-Sep-02 02:58 PM
attyanta ghat lagdo rachana! kaas hamra deska netaharulai kehi chasko parnay vaye.
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| NK |
Posted
on 09-Sep-02 07:30 PM
Gandhiji, I am way past my bed time but I couldn't ignore Nepe's recommendation (from antoher thread). I am glad I stopped by.
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| HahooGuru |
Posted
on 09-Sep-02 07:48 PM
Nepe's recommendation : forced me to click on this thread. I enjoyed it.
Better send a copy to Suskera too. So that it will be there in their archive,
more systematic archive. I think Sajha.com can have good affliation with
suskera.com, so that best postings from here can be moved to Suskera.com
after enough editing. ..... I am not forcing Suskera.com to publish things
published here at Sajha.com, but, let us make recommendation. ......
Long time back, I gave one simulation to TND when Raj. published my
posting from SCN to TND. It was in just two line:
SCN or Sajha.com : Like new road. Open to anyone, with minimum deseceny
(well, in Sea beaches, even 1 piece is OK, but, in new road, Laaaz samma
chopiyeko hunu lai minimum descency bhanou na). In new road Pipal ko
TND (or suskera.com): Gathering of Well dressed peoples who look "Upto date saloon" quality. e.g. marriage ceremony, party in *** star hotels. ... Well, if you are not well dressed, ...... , Chaukidar will not let you go in. ....
Bot too, we can find nice, charming handsom, beautiful ... peoples. It might be
true that were on the way to * star hotel party / gathering. Just came to
confirm .... in new road, how will be reaction from public .... whether near
passerby watches you ... need some modifications ... upgrade .. .enhancements ..
HG
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| HahooGuru |
Posted
on 09-Sep-02 07:49 PM
Correction: "Bot too," shall be read as "But, in New Road too, ..."
HG
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| Gandhi |
Posted
on 09-Sep-02 10:37 PM
Deep, Biswo, Soulfree, NK, Guru,
Thanks for stepping by and encouraging me....
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| creator |
Posted
on 14-Sep-02 08:56 PM
Top ma lyayeko matra..
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