| Username |
Post |
| ebony_firefly |
Posted
on 22-Sep-02 09:27 AM
hello dwi! seems like ur thread is clogged..couldnot post in there...so here is the new one..lols
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| ebony_firefly |
Posted
on 22-Sep-02 09:29 AM
bright moon in open sky
my friend is playing a guitar
offtuned.
raging flames to ashes
we are slaves of this breadth
who are we kidding?
blac_
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| DWI |
Posted
on 22-Sep-02 01:29 PM
I know blac_. Same thing happened to Dohori.
Nice ones lately. I bet all the inspirations are coming from your own apartment .
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| Rusty |
Posted
on 22-Sep-02 04:40 PM
Blac_ ...Mr Haikus Guru:)
Very nice one. Keep this thread alive.
ALso Hi to my knickerbocker friend, DWI:)
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| ebony_firefly |
Posted
on 24-Sep-02 11:02 AM
rusty:)
yeah dwi ,first one was in apartment..
second one was jotted when i was attending my fren's mom's funeral..:(
blac_
comeon guys write some haikus;)
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| Dilasha |
Posted
on 26-Sep-02 06:07 PM
Offtuned guitar?
play it anyway
i'm all ears....
****
words not just words
true inspiration
vehement passion! infinite desire!
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| Dilasha |
Posted
on 26-Sep-02 06:19 PM
okay pls ignore the latter out of the two.let me re-write it again
words not just words
true inspiration
infinite desire yet vehement denial.....
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| ebony_firefly |
Posted
on 27-Sep-02 11:48 AM
second one rocks ,dilasha!nice!
here is one from my side!.
in the dark night_
sky reveals its wound to the world,
its the moon
blac_
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| DWI |
Posted
on 29-Sep-02 02:34 PM
Dug my heart
No haikus found
Did you delete it?
King of the world
I got time on my hand
Oh, the battery is dead.
Got a knock on the door
A good friend of mine?
or just another pop-up ads?
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| ebony_firefly |
Posted
on 04-Oct-02 05:35 AM
sun sets in west_
blood is seeping from its heart,
cloud is gaining colour
blac_
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| Hellbound |
Posted
on 04-Oct-02 09:18 AM
The women gaze at the photograph
time stands still
the beer is getting warm
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| Hellbound |
Posted
on 04-Oct-02 09:19 AM
Broken heart strings
dripping tears-
violins wailing under moonbeams
Hell
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| ebony_firefly |
Posted
on 05-Oct-02 09:17 AM
nice.hmmmm!
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| SOULFREE |
Posted
on 05-Oct-02 09:23 AM
King dismisses Deuba.
Deuba misses paycheck.
Deuba Shocked!
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 05-Oct-02 09:24 AM
ebony ebony where art thou
thy image not tarnished
just polished to a bright shine
To match your light not varnished!!!
:)
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| Naresh_karki |
Posted
on 05-Oct-02 09:31 AM
System is changing in kathmandu
some 500 families worried
life remains usual in village
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| KingBhakta |
Posted
on 05-Oct-02 09:43 AM
Deoba: I cannot be removed constitutionally
(http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/world/south_asia/2301571.stm)
Deoba thought that he is a super man, who can not be thrown out of chair by any means. Constitution was so great for him that he can not be removed. His advisors must be kidding. In Nepal's politics, biggest flop and joker, who can not sell his CV even in a rupee is Sher Bahadur Deoba. He is now Syal Bhuwadur Deoba. The arms deal and the comission, he thought of getting are all in sand. His father in law to his wife Arju are now heading to Jail.
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| KingBhakta |
Posted
on 05-Oct-02 10:04 AM
SOULFREE Posted on 10-05-02 8:31 AM Reply
Damn!! I just heard the news today.
And I feel good. Although whoever comes in the power doesn't really matters to me. "Kano Goru lai Aushi na purne".
These politicians -- Before they come to power, all of them seem like great people, Something like Idol. After few years in the power, all they become is as bas as bad boy Billy Idol.
I feel good about Gyanendra taking over the Power. I welcome change. Sick and tired of these damn chyau umreko jasto parties, and those friggin' leaders we follow, who friggin' literally "SHAKES" when he is givin' the "BHASAN" in English. All these Big leaders in Nepalese political parties are like "napaune le kera paayo bokrai samet chapayo". Before they came to power, everybody praised them. Bamdev kya khatara re, KP bhattarai is "baalbramhachari" re, Girija Gai prani re... After they came to power, they showed their true color.
I hope Gyanendra will line up all these big NETA's and shoot them... Kill 'em all... So that we can hope for better tomorrow, once again, like we always did. "Ghar phohar bhayo bhane safa garnu parcha ni, hoina ta?"
Please, GIVE us SOME GOOD NETA that WE could Follow. Someone that we could be proud of. Not hawaldar, or whatevers....
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| Ebony_Firefly |
Posted
on 05-Oct-02 10:36 AM
KING BHAKTA JEEEU! THANKS FOR YOUR ARTICLE..
BUT THIS PARTICLUR THREAD IS ABOUT POEMS AND THEIR RELATED FORMS!
:)
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| SOULFREE |
Posted
on 05-Oct-02 10:41 AM
I don't understand why "KINGBHAKTA" ji posted my article to this thread!!
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| Ebony_Firefly |
Posted
on 05-Oct-02 10:47 AM
light not varnished?hmmmmm!
walking with a candle in the darkness
melted wax burnt my skin
yeah! everything comes for a price
blac_
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| KingBhakta |
Posted
on 05-Oct-02 10:49 AM
Ebony,
Kamkuro ekatira kumlo boki thimi tira.
Deshma pareko chha yasto sankat,
garchou timi keko kabita ani sabita ko natak.
Ho aba ramita herne din aheko chha,
hijo nagai nachne nepali party netaharu,
aaj rumal chhopera bhana lageka chhan india tira.
bhagna lageka chhan india tira.
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| Ebony_Firefly |
Posted
on 05-Oct-02 10:50 AM
oops! let me edit that piece of mine...
walking with a candle in the darkness
melted wax burnt my skin
a price for everything....?
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| SOULFREE |
Posted
on 05-Oct-02 10:58 AM
Bihani ko 7 baje
1/2 pau swari ra julebi
1/2 pau malupua ra haluwa
Ek plate kerau ko tarkari
Ek cup paani kum chiya
I miss kalimati ko jeevan ko pashal
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 05-Oct-02 11:39 AM
KingBhakta Ji...
Treading on threads,
of words, poem and fairness,
Is it right to bring in your posts,
of contexual unawareness???
:)
Read the title o zealous one,
O king and His Bhaktas,
and all his country men.
Know, we come here to share,
our sorrows and desires
Not to fuel the jealous one!!!
:)
MOST DEFINITELY NOT a haiku!!!!!!!!!!! :(
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| DWI |
Posted
on 05-Oct-02 01:02 PM
PRESENT NEPAL:
This bus is going over the hills
Does it matter
Who the driver is?
DEMOCRACY( As seen by 13 years old):
A table tennis game,
the country is the ball
difference? Bats have spikes on 'em.
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 05-Oct-02 01:39 PM
DWI ji...
The answer to your first Haiku-ish question:
And GOD said from above..
I Da Driver, AIDA MAN!!!
And don't you doubt that
Lest,
You pay with your JAAN!
;)
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| DWI |
Posted
on 05-Oct-02 02:27 PM
Well said Sitara ji.
U diverted my 'bus' from political alley to religious standpoint.
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| ebony_firefly |
Posted
on 06-Oct-02 10:30 AM
kingbhakta's and bhakti
naked children dying in the streets
who cares?
everyone wants to rule
bloodshed made the flag's colour prominent
how patroitic we are!
blac_
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| siMply_ Me |
Posted
on 02-Nov-02 11:29 AM
Listen to the Sunset;
Can you hear its quiet sigh?
Listen, the Sun's falling;
Watch it toning down the sky.
Soon darkness shall surround me
Tho' twinkling stars will dare smile through.
While you are far away from me,
They'll frown a humble hue.
So, listen to the Sunset
Look up, hear its quiet sigh,
Tho' we're apart these lonely nights,
My love whispers across the sky
siMply Me (^_^)
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