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| SHadY_CIowN |
Posted
on 02-Oct-02 05:49 PM
hehe.. its not good but jus wrote for fun..
I took your love for granted
and all the things you said to me
Now I realize what you meant, how you felt.
I need your arms to welcome me,
I need your heart to forgive me,
But now cold stone all I see.
And now I wait my whole life for you,
I search days and night for you.
To take back what you left behind,
All those love n joyful memories.
Hold me when I fall deeply in your eyes,
Your love which is deeper than the
windows and their cries
Save me, when you see me helpless
Remind me of how your love is a bliss.
That you are an angel sent from heaven
Came to free me from my miseries.
hehe.. aru pani cha.. do write back sayin how it is..
peace shads
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| Hellbound |
Posted
on 02-Oct-02 06:37 PM
Shady bhai,
Wawa...wawa... what a touchy poem. Very nice! I didn't know that you're also a poet. ehehe!! Keep it up.
Hell
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| zen_kundan |
Posted
on 02-Oct-02 07:08 PM
What about this poem ?
Please comment....
Embracing you close to me-
I knew that we were meant to be
Holding your hand, walking by your side-
Gives me a feeling of pleasure-
Burning deep down inside
Placing my head against your chest-
here next to you, it's nothing but the best
Hearing the rhythm of your heartbeat-
feeling the friction of our body heat-
The burning pleasure of pain
Together, we have everything to gain
Laying here totally naked under the sun
The sweat beads from our bodies, forming just one
Feeling the penetration so deeply within
I know there's no way this could be a sin
Holding you close makes me feel whole-
You take everything out of me-
Including my soul
- By a poet
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