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| SITARA |
Posted
on 03-Nov-02 12:11 PM
Lost And Found
My carefree spirit, I lost,
to the winter of maturity;
My childhood dreams,
vanished with reality.
The confidence of youth,
the bliss of ignorance,
all disappeared,
with the dawn of knowledge.
Freedom of thought,
word and action,
entangled in the web of despair.
Despair: A time wrought with agony,
a disillusionment of life.
A change so permanent,
everything that was, is not.
Values disolved by
the tides of life.
Even a smile, buried deep
Everything that was built,
destroyed stone by stone;
Unravelled thread by thread,
Every bit of love,
squeezed by hands of fate.
But
From the debris, I have salvaged my soul;
from death, a new life;
From tears, a flicker of a smile;
From destruction, a rebirth;
From the past, a future;
From Was, to Am
Each a lesson on its own..
Well taught by the teacher himself;
Life, the Greatest Guru of them all.
Always a Zennist! :)
For all those who have loved and lost, lived and survived!!!
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| isolated freak |
Posted
on 03-Nov-02 12:24 PM
kasto garo kabita.. baklla balla dictionary herera bujya jasto lagyo tara ramro cha..
harayo/paiyo..mrityu bata jiwan
thiyo bata"hun"
k bata k..
aansu bata hanso
bhhot bata bhavisya..
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| SimpleGal |
Posted
on 03-Nov-02 12:56 PM
Sitara,
Thank you for the poem. Really needed those emotions voiced.....from my side of life!
Indeed, life is the greatest guru of them all . . . .
Can't help putting forth these lines from an old song. :)
Jo thokar na khaae
Nahin jeet uski
Jo girkar samhal jaae
Hai jeet uski
Nishaan manzilon ke
Yeh pairon ke chhaley
Kaha jaa raha hai
Tu aye jaane waley
Andhera hai manka
Diya to jalaley!
In peace.
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| slipknot |
Posted
on 03-Nov-02 02:02 PM
Survivor.. "Independent Woman" - Destiny's Child...
You are smooth in your flow, in every word, i see a life rejuvenating-- the harsh winter gives way to a rising bloom of little flowers... memories of the past packed away, it is once again a time to celebrate a new beginning, and live heartily in the present. Keep more coming...
Peace!
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 03-Nov-02 05:57 PM
Isolated Freak ji;
Kun chanhi dictionary paryo tyo? Thank you for your comments and translations hajur!
Simple Gal;
Appreciate your comments.
Slipknot ji;
You have understood the very nuance of my emotive expressions. Dhanyabad hajur!
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| kalankisthan |
Posted
on 03-Nov-02 06:10 PM
SitaraJYU,
Man bhaachne kabita, man saanchne kabita!!
Wohi banega sikandar, jo har baazi jitaa!!
Maile ni JPT dinchu ni heheh...
Simple girl jyu;
Jo haande wokhar na khaaye,
Nahi bhai tika ushki
Jo girkar silitimbur khaaye
Ho gaya kaam jishki
Nishaana jishka tha
Woh manzil pe na mila
Manzil pe jo mila
ushpe nishana nahi laaga
Ab yahan se kahan jaaye hum
teri baahon main mar jaaye hum.
tujhe dekha to ye jaana sanam
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| diwas k |
Posted
on 04-Nov-02 12:54 AM
Sitara Jyu,
LOST and FOUND bhaneko dekhera maile ta jhandai napadheko.. kasko ke harayechha.. kalle paayechha bhanithhaneko...
Yesto meetho "deep' kavita padhna dinu bho.. muri muri dhanyabaad..
Yes.. Each a lesson on its own..
Well taught by the teacher himself;
Life, the Greatest Guru of them all.
....
Dhanyabaad.. puna: ek patak
_diwas
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| SimpleGal |
Posted
on 04-Nov-02 07:27 AM
K-ji,
Hahahaha!! Gajjab ko parallelism dinu bho ni ta yahan le!!! :) :) :) Hansda Hansda petai dukhyo mero ta!
Keep up the humor!!!
In peace, and still laughing!
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| Rusty |
Posted
on 04-Nov-02 07:48 AM
Sitara Ji
Kasto ramro kabita:)
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 04-Nov-02 12:48 PM
Diwas k and Rusty ji,
Thank you!
Happy Tihar to all! :)
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| Tranquiller |
Posted
on 04-Nov-02 01:07 PM
Sitara,
Spiritualism and partial pragmatism revealed in your elegant poem!! It is just wonderful!
So, you are a zenist?
Another Lost and found by me, which is no close to yours' one!!
Missing in the darkness,
vanished without a trace,
with only the memories and photographs,
to fill an empty place.
Frequent prayer and fervent cries,
is there anyone there?
But the only sound
was the silent eternal fanfare.
For a long time
its deafening sound
subdued by a path
through lost and found.
Laughter and sorrow,
anguish and grief,
all the moments of a life
but with no relief.
Everything and nothing
one within and between all,
gentle, loving, pervading,
the eternal silence falls.
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| DHUMBASSE (DUMBASS) |
Posted
on 04-Nov-02 02:56 PM
Sitara !! awesome job, kasto aaune lekhna pani. Sabailai aauncha lekhna ta tara hajurko chahi kina yesto , solid kya solid.
Happy Tihar to you and all the Sajha pures...re kya ajha lastma..:)
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 04-Nov-02 03:11 PM
Tranquiller ji
Speechless!!!
< one within and between all,
gentle, loving, pervading,
the eternal silence falls>>>
Your last stanza says it all! The silence which reflects the peace of mind, is for me the epitome of bliss! A state of mind where one resides in internal and external harmony!
Thank you!
Yes I am a Zennist! :)
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 04-Nov-02 03:12 PM
Dhumbasse ji
Thank you hajur!
:)
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| madhav |
Posted
on 04-Nov-02 09:01 PM
Sitara Ji, I ask you permission to interpret your poem but I don’t know methodology for doing this.
In this poem, I found that the poet has compromised to the forces of time as the poem starts describing lax childish days and ends with realization about life in the last stanza. The use of figurative words such as disillusionment of life, tides of life, hands of fate prove this. And these are the words that have made this poem a real experience of life. The last stanza is a forceful compromise between poet’s aspiration and the unmitigated force that is imminent in every life cycle. In over all, poet sought for optimism but cautious.
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 05-Nov-02 08:52 AM
Madhav ji...
Well, I must say I am impressed by your interpretation. Yes, you have touched the core of my emotive expression...... And yet, Her compromization with life is devoid of listless resignation to Fate. She has experienced the heights of bliss and the depths of sorrow which she has attempted to express in her use of figurative speech.
Thank you for your comments, hajur!
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| Tranquiller |
Posted
on 05-Nov-02 09:16 AM
Madhav,
Very well interpretation!
Sitara
Sometimes, the height of ecstasy is very plain in sight. But, the depth of sorrow can not be gauged by smudge spectacles. However, you tried hard enough to express yourself, with your feeling and sensation.
Tranq
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| Poonte |
Posted
on 05-Nov-02 09:25 AM
So very real, indeed!
I have been through all that preceeds "BUT"--it's what follows after that keeps testing me relentlessly. Hajur, I wish I had more strength!
Nice piece!
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 05-Nov-02 02:44 PM
Poonte "my cute one" (so they say re in Sajhako chat!!! ;)
Thankyou! Sometimes, if we unhook ourselves from the "but" life might smooth itself out without the "bumps" hoina? :P
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| Deep |
Posted
on 05-Nov-02 03:53 PM
There is noone will be none
never was
I know, but how do I say
To you, of course, I lost
lost the one that I once had
was the one I was looking for
still am, will die with a wish
accompanying by a regret
will you ever know?
What found, lost and found again...
not to win but to lose.
****
"khojya bela kehi bhetidaina...
remote khojya bela swasni ko agadi
pahilaki maiyako "koryo" bhanera fukalya aauthi bhetinchha
sofa muni.
Dhikkar hos!" - Dhumba
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| lamachaur |
Posted
on 05-Nov-02 04:23 PM
Meaning what it means
Meaning , what it means
years of rigorous experience of "living"
burning,lacerating,pumping and breathing
yet,
the meaning of -meaning- what it means,
i have not been able to figure out
i still dont know
what it means when it means that it means!
despite
being alive full of life and kicking
i still dont know what it means ,
when you "mean" what you mean
i sometimes feel,
there is no such thing as "meaning"
its just another creation of God
like God itself
but it still bothers me
what i mean when i say i dont know ,
the "meaning" to meaning
i guess it just means nothing
its just a feeling!
this might not be so pertinent to the discussion above, talk about digressions!!
N.B- just a doodle. :-)
regards,
lamachaur.
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 06-Nov-02 11:45 AM
Deep ji
"Not to win but to lose"
hmmmm so you can understand the value of things lost ho ki kya ho? Thank you hajur, you always grace my postings with your reflective poetry.
Lamachaur ji
Are you in quest for the meaning of life? Thank you...for you poetry! I had to read it again to understand the depth. I mean what I say ki I say what I mean?
:)
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| DHUMBASSE (DUMBASS) |
Posted
on 06-Nov-02 11:56 AM
Ke bhancha yo Deep !! kaha ko kura kata lerayer pheri mero namma thokkako..
Ma ta yo thread bata tadahi baseko thiye, malai ta halka-phulka nai thik..sitarako Kura sunera gahirai dekhi dar lagcha, tara pheri unko chahak mahak dekhera shanti huncha ,tysaile om shanti!! bhandai basirakhko thiye ....kaha bata .. re kya lastma
Tara yeuta sathi thiyo ..khub dating garnu parne..aauthi sauthi khole ra hinthyo..yekdin ta yeuti lai patayecha barbata ra motel tira gaira belama taxi bhitrai maiyalai ali ali jaand badhi bhe cha ...chadi cha usko kakhma ...tyettikai ma pantko pachadiko khaltima rekheko Nextel ta "hallo! hallo " bhancha re.." who 's that !!" bhanna thalicha maiya ta ..bha ke rahecha bhane bro ko speed dial button thichiyecha maiyale kakhma uphrida kheri..kya babal..
Yo mathiko ghtnako bro chahi Deep parecha... re kya ajha lastma ta
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