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| sangam |
Posted
on 06-Nov-02 09:09 AM
Rangeen mandap
Bhogatay, Chamal
Thalima roti
Battiko ujyalo
Chakati Khali.
Sayapatri mala
Didi, Bahini
Maya, aashirbad
Aakhama aasu
Fotoma tika.
Manma samjhana
Fonma kura
Tihar aayo
Tihar gayo
Ritto nidhar.
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| najar |
Posted
on 06-Nov-02 10:19 AM
Sangamji,
Moving kabita! Your didi bahinis are lucky to have a brother like you. Happy Tihar!
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| Poonte |
Posted
on 06-Nov-02 10:47 AM
Tukucha ma ali ali banki bhayeko pani ko kassam, Sajha ma kavita pad-da malai ahile samma khailai yesto runu man lageko thiyena...sob sob :(
Superb work, Sangam! Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!
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| DHUMBASSE (DUMBASS) |
Posted
on 06-Nov-02 10:57 AM
Tyo mathiko sangamko lekhai malai nai takera lekheko hunu parcha..
sarahi udas banayo..
Jhan tyes mathi hijo rati dekhi nepal ma kura garna katti koshis garda pani raan**i le " Your call can not be made, The circuit is busy, 12345678.." bhanna chodya hoina...
Yesai ta udash man , sangam ko kabita padhera jhan ruuuunai man lagyo aaja ta office ma nai!! Hare Daiba..re kya ajha lastma ta ...
Bohooooooo!!kwaa! kwaaa!!
' Hey!! what the fu** happened man? You alright.."
Ma : " Mach**ni Kale Bhustighre le ke bujhos mero byatha . Ajha are you alright bhancha!! handiyu jasto lagcha yo morolai, ke garne maraula bhanne dar pheri, Herdai Bhimsen jasto cha...re kya ajha....sukka!! .. lastma
SOB !! SOB!! kwaaa! kwaaa!! Sukka !! SUkka !! ( Bathroom tira prasthan ..re kya ajha lastma..)
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| SimpleGal |
Posted
on 06-Nov-02 11:35 AM
Sangamji,
Beautiful and moving poem! I share Najar's sentiments and send you my warm wishes on this occasion of Tihar.
In peace.
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| DHUMBASSE (DUMBASS) |
Posted
on 06-Nov-02 11:45 AM
SImplegal,
I do not know if you know this song, but if you do then please post the whole of it , My request.
Aaja did bhainiko biyogle yyad aayo, tyesaile,
DUKHI ye Man Mera yeha nahi rahana
jaha nahi Chaina , woha nahi rahina
Thank you!!
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| SimpleGal |
Posted
on 06-Nov-02 12:14 PM
Dhumbasseji,
I don't know the full song of your request. Sorry!
But to correct the two lines of yours:
Dukhi man mere, sun mera kehna
Jahan nahin chaina waha nahin rehna!
I would change "chaina" to "behna"! re kya ajha last ma!
I send you my warmest wishes on Bhai tika!
In peace.
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| DHUMBASSE (DUMBASS) |
Posted
on 06-Nov-02 12:30 PM
Thank you dear !! that was very nice of you!! and the correction was awesome,
everyone, read as Simpaly says re kya ajha lastma
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| at |
Posted
on 06-Nov-02 12:31 PM
Here's the song
dukhii man mere sun meraa kahanaa
jahaa.N nahii.n chainaa vahaa.N nahii.n rahanaa
dukhii man...
dard hamaaraa koii na jaane
apanii garaj ke sab hai.n diivaane
kisake aage ronaa roe.n
des paraayaa log begaane
dukhii man...
laakh yahaa.N jholii phailaa le
kuchh nahii.n de.nge is jag vaale
patthar ke dil mom na ho.nge
chaahe jitanaa niir bahaale
dukhii man...
apane liye kab hai.n ye mele
ham hai.n har ik mele me.n akele
kyaa paaegaa usame.n rahakar
jo duniyaa jiivan se khele
dukhii man...
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| DHUMBASSE (DUMBASS) |
Posted
on 06-Nov-02 12:35 PM
Wah At!! thank you very much , maile ta purai geet pani padhan sakina, nabujhera hoina . Bhakkano chutera ..re kya ajha lastma..
Thank you very much and happy TIHAR sajhastyle le ..re kya ajha lastma..
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| Ryan |
Posted
on 06-Nov-02 01:19 PM
Khatar cha la
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| sangam |
Posted
on 06-Nov-02 04:06 PM
Thanks all.
Tihar ko jhilimili subhakamana!!
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| Deepak Bista |
Posted
on 07-Nov-02 06:02 AM
Hi everyone,
while I really appreaciated Sangamji's poem and indeed, it is really touchinng. However, it also reminds me of the Panchatantra saying "wise person makes home wherever they are", therefore, one should not feel sad but form sisterly/brotherly relations with people, we are living with ( in the society we are living in).
Just a thought!
Deepak
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