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| SimpleGal |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 10:34 AM
With much encouragement and appreciation of "Simple Feelings" from the sajha community, I am posting here the first poem I wrote at the age of 9 while in Thailand.
It has been published at a few places. :)
"Smile"
Smile a while, poor little flower,
Although in life, one has to suffer,
Smile is sweet and not sour,
Though short, joy and love it does offer.
Life is not a bed of roses, I know,
But smile we must to make it sweet,
For all the wise men have taught us so,
Smile we must share until our hearts forget to beat.
Smile is love, smile is hope, my friend,
Smile to all quarrels puts an end,
Sure, our world is poor and weak,
So smile but smile is what we must seek.
In peace.
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| Arnico |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 10:41 AM
Suei maak khap! Khun keng maak at age 9!
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| paramendra |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 10:43 AM
Now I know how you got your username! :-)
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| Deep |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 10:48 AM
"Suei maak khap! Khun keng maak at age 9! "
"Suikaideko yasto Khatara! khunkhar kabita mattai 9 barsa ma!"
Yahi bhanya ho thai ma Arnico? Ho bhane maile ni samarthan ma hath uthaideko chhu.
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| anepalikt |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 10:49 AM
Ramro Ramro...especially at nice!!
Tara sacchai, all this smiling has started to make make my face ache:)
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| anepalikt |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 10:51 AM
with correction......... (sorry)
Ramro Ramro...especially at nine!!
Tara sacchai, all this smiling has started to make my face ache:) :) :) :)
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| hippie |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 11:33 AM
Wah wah Simple Gal jyu ...... didn't know this side of but only the Dr. Psychologist side. (Forgive me if my potrayal of you in sajhapur diary was a little wayward.)
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 11:46 AM
Simple Gal...
As always beautiful!
The mind of a child explores beyond adult limitations! Your poem brings to mind one of my student's (7yrs old) poem which was published in our school news letter...
SILENCE
Silence
Is like a waterfall
Rolling into your ear
A beautiful music.
Silence
Is understanding
What joy is
The world around you.
Silence
Is peaceful
And replenishes your mind
Takes out the rotten things.
Silence
Answers all questions
But gives
Even more.
Silence
Stops all time
To give you
A peaceful moment.
Full of wonder
And questions
Too big
To be known.
And this poem.... touches my heart, hope it does yours (Sajhaites) too!
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| Rusty |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 11:48 AM
Sitara Jyu,
ma pani kabita competition ma Bhaag liu ki;)
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| Rusty |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 11:48 AM
Tara, hajur ko kabita ekdam ramro cha:)
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| Rusty |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 11:55 AM
Sitara, here is something for you in this busy morning... can't even check my email:s
Stop! Run! Halt! Do you
obey, or do you dare rest
peacefully, today?
Today´s miracle:
the milky way unified
and galactic peace.
No stress, no hurry.
Harmony, balance, and joy.
Successfully purged.;)
Rusty Rac^_^
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 11:55 AM
Rusty...
Bon jour! :) Kyaaaaaaa..... this is the kabita of My Student bhanya!!!! hehe!
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| Rusty |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 12:01 PM
OOh Sitara,
Bon Jour...I am here with cure;)
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| kalankisthan |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 01:51 PM
Sitara Jyu,
Ma thokera bhandinchu, your student didn't write this poem.
Table thokera bhandinchu.
Hoina hola, kassam!!
hazur lai thagya jasto cha!!!
;)
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| Zero_creativity |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 02:02 PM
Sitira ji,
I doubt if a seven years kid write such a nice peom. Hard to believe!!!
Ma pani hujur ko class ma pardna aaunu parla jasto cha.
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| Deep |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 02:08 PM
yo sajha ma kabita naramro bhanera hepeko tyahi bichara Narendra "dobato" ko mattai ho. Jasle je lekheni ramro huni bichara narendra dobato ko chahi je lekheni bikena. Dobato le bichara nikkai koshis garya ho? Trikal lai dekhaunu paryo Narendra le. ke tal fuskyo bhanera!
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| krishna |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 02:09 PM
kya ho yo??? hodbaji???.....simplegal says 9, sitara 7, what next?? 5, 4, 2, 0 ani k pet bhitra bata.......
hehehe..just kidding hai......
both are glorious poems.....simplegal very nice piece indeed....that too at 9 wow! fantastic......
sitara jyu, with a teacher like you, no wonder a student writes such exquisite composition.....
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| krishna |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 02:13 PM
deepjyu....dobato re??? kata nabin ko 'timilai maaaaaaahhaaaaaaaa dobato ma aba chahi kurne chaina'' ho ki kya ho....nabin ko dobato ta bikyo..aba narendra ko dobato chahi kina bikena..trikal lai sodhha thik hola.....
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| protean |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 02:14 PM
Great Poem Simplegal.
This brightened a gloomy day.
It seems that your mind operates on simple matters very beautifully and elegantly.
I should unearth others works of yours, and so that it may bring out more smiles. -:)
Keep up the work of making us smile at the pleasures and appreciate the greatness of life!
Actually, to think of it, you should try to become a inspirational Guru. Baru tyesmai PHD garera ,institute kholya hundaina? :). "SimpeGal's Simple Joys of Life " Institute.
Sitaraji,
Nice work from a child. Actually, aren't the ones who come up with brillant ideas the ones with the childlike curiosities?
The silence of the poem does touch the heart upon which, then, there is no more silence.:).
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| ruck |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 02:19 PM
Great poem Simple gal...
Sitara ji, you've got some great students.. :-(( I envy, reminds me of young poets in my class.
God Bless!!
Ruck
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| kalankisthan |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 02:28 PM
9 barsha ko le kabita lekhne
7 barsha ko le kabita lekhne
ma matrai ke kam??
umer: bihe garne umer bha ko
my poem, never been published anywhere. (kunchai ko budhdhi bata sudhdhi ga cha ra mero kabita chaapna?)
kabita ko shirshak cha
While letters!!
"
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kasto cha ta mero kabita?
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| voyeur |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 02:33 PM
Simplegal !!!!! Kasto khatara poem ni.....ma ta fan matrai haina A/C pani bhaisake. :-)
I love you! Kwappa kiss khana manlagyo timilai...
Your fan and A/C and whateva you wanna me to be for you baby! :-)
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| DHUMBASSE (DUMBASS) |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 02:57 PM
Ramro cha kabita ..kabita re... poem bhanna poem.. aha sanchhi poem..
Nepali ma kabita ..englishma poem..
Nepali kabita bujhna sajilo...english poem bujhnai garho
nepali kabita ma chanda huncha, nabujhe pani gauna milcha. annanda aaucha..poem lai gauna khojeko jhandai diyo..hamro kale bhustighrele gumayera..
"Smile is love, smile is hope, my friend," bhanya ta 'What" bhanera Ghuryo
Ani pheri hoina hoina bhanera
"Silence
Is peaceful
And replenishes your mind
Takes out the rotten things" bhane,
"This MF is calling me Rotten" bhanera jai lagna aayo,
Bhayna ba bhanera
"Stop! Run! Halt! Do you
obey, or do you dare rest
peacefully, today?
Bhanera gauna khoje, ke hunthyo....haatle chyappa mero ghanti aathyayo..morole ta . aru le aayera chuttyaye.. mafi magnu paryo bekarma ...aba dekhi kamma ma geet gaudina bhanera....
Jhandai marya aaja ..janne bhayera Poem lai gaune bhai khako.. re kya ajha lastma
Tara sabaiko Poem ramro cha , simplegal, sitara ani Rusty ko...hehe ( runche hansho hasdai) :(
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 03:12 PM
Kalanki ji ra Zero Creativity....
:(
Some of the children I work with have been identified for TAG (Gifted and Talented) programmes! They have also been tracked by John Hopkins ko CITY TALENT programme!
Kyaaaaaaaa!!! Just, yesto garbha garera poem samarpit gardaichu... To supplement SGAL's young age and talent ta!!!!
Kasto Sceptics bhanya ni! Have some Faith on the talents of children... esp. if you have some of your own!
Krishna ji and Protean ji...
:)
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| SimpleGal |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 07:47 PM
Thanks everyone for your kind words!
Sitara,
The child is indeed gifted to feel the vicissitudes of silence. Please give him/her my commendations and sincerest encouragement to pursue his/her writings!! As my dear daddy says, "Simplicity is Beauty." And the simple things that have emerged in the poem you posted are a rarity.
In peace.
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| bhedo |
Posted
on 12-Nov-02 08:34 PM
Wow, you wrote that when you were nine re? Even the poems I write today don't come close to what you wrote when you were a kid. That's b/c I don't write poems.
Any tips for starters????? What are iambic tetrameter/pentameter?
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| KaLaNkIsThAn |
Posted
on 13-Nov-02 08:52 AM
Sitarajyu,
I was just kiddin', I believe you.
Maile ni kata tira TV ma herya thye ke TAG kids haru. I think it was on deaf children. Some of them were so talented in math and fixing the puzzels and some other stuffs.
Khaali daaro matrai laagya ke, hehe... aafno talent ko naam ma "sunna", thats why i try not to believe that the whole world is not talanted than me.
hehe..
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| KaLaNkIsThAn |
Posted
on 13-Nov-02 08:53 AM
thukkka,
CORRECTION: "The whole world is talented than me"
hehe
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 13-Nov-02 11:35 AM
SGal...
Thank you!
You were indeed a gifted child. From my own experience of working with those who stand out (in anyway....out of "norm"), such children do have to face greater trials and tribulations in their everyday life.
As always, I wish you my positive energy!
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| SimpleGal |
Posted
on 13-Nov-02 12:09 PM
Sitara,
You couldn't have been more accurate, dear madam! And here, I think more than in any other facet of life, we share a commond bond, you and I. :)
Reciprocating your positive energy.
In peace.
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