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| jira |
Posted
on 02-Dec-02 06:00 PM
Dhannebaad khaies ta?
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Nylon ko bora katera
Singai Turkey ko bhundee phatera
Pawuroti ko tukra ni kochiyo
Taapkram ko khatir, bela belama swui ni ghochiyo
Phutta kholera oven ma haliyo
Muntira bata ya maan ko muslo ni baliyo
Kathhai!! kishnastami ra Ramnawami ko thook nilera
Wari pari ka Michael ra John haru sanaga milera
Nepali nabujhney chhoro ko chitta bujhaiyo
Yo pala ko thanksgiving hahoo yuassai gari manaiyo
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| Bal Matlab |
Posted
on 02-Dec-02 06:11 PM
Nice poem....Jira
JAI Thannks Giving......pheri arko pali aos, pheri dherai turkey khana paos
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| HahooGuru |
Posted
on 02-Dec-02 07:00 PM
Pakaunu agadi bhannu parcha ni. Sakiye pachi bhanne hota. Hami lai tyo
Kathhai!! kishnastami ra Ramnawami ko thook nilayera.
singai turkey afaile sakyera.
hera na hamilai tyo jira dai le dhag lagayera
lekhyo tyo jira dai le turkey chwam chwam chapayera.
Kathhai!! kishnastami ra Ramnawami ko thook nilayera.
Kathhai!! kishnastami ra Ramnawami ko thook nilayera.
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| suva chintak |
Posted
on 02-Dec-02 07:42 PM
Dear Jira,
I liked your poem, it has humor, but also a lot of understated irony. I especially liked the part where you bring in 'Nepali nabujne chora'...great move!
Hope to read more of your pithy lines,
In Peace!
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