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on 17-Jan-03 04:05 PM
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| Biswo |
Posted
on 17-Jan-03 04:53 PM
Gandhiji,
E raattai, saachchai ho bhanyaa? Madheshko maato. Btw, pachhi chitwan pharkane man chhainaki kaso ho? :-)
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| ??! |
Posted
on 17-Jan-03 05:06 PM
Biswoj, tyo tapain hami najanmadai ko kura... 2021/22 sal tirako... achel ko ta ke kura garnu?
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| The Grocer's Wife |
Posted
on 17-Jan-03 09:59 PM
This is the third story I have read on Sajha by Gandhi-ji -- it's as nuanced and gripping as the earlier ones. I really hope you will publish a collection of these short stories one day. It will definitely be a novel merger of genres and a real contribution to Nepali literature -- sort of a Guru Prasad Mainali meets Poshan Pandey.
I look forward to more of your great stories.
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| chipledhunga |
Posted
on 18-Jan-03 12:14 AM
Hallae ganthay Gandhiji le Sajha lai pheri. Keep up the great work.
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| NK |
Posted
on 18-Jan-03 10:11 AM
Gandhiji,
Your Nepali is beautiful! (bani chutko hunale garho huncha pardna tara... worth it!0
Strark, direct, and yes, gripping. Your stories are jewel in the Sajha Crown.
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| jira |
Posted
on 18-Jan-03 11:31 AM
Auni Dinakhar ra Batuli ko maya pirati pheri badhyo ray ta?
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| chipledhunga |
Posted
on 18-Jan-03 11:34 AM
Chora chori janamai ta Batuli le?
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| ??! |
Posted
on 18-Jan-03 12:19 PM
Thank you (TGW, NK, Jira and Chiple) ji.
Sikdai chhu nepali story lekhnalai. My little effort is to help people not to forget their own language, they have lost practice of reading and writing in Nepali in their stay abroad for several years. No offense... one day, I will find the same problem with my kids too.
The Grocer's Wife ji, I have no plan to publish a collection yet. I lost many short stories I wrote during my college life. However, I won't let these new creations be lost this time. I am following Murphy's Law now.
Jira and Chipleji... kunai bela second part lekhiyo bhane dinakhar ra batuli ko maya priti badhyo ki badhena, chhora chhori paye ki payenan, dinakhar le kanchhi lyaye ki batuli poila gain, teti khera khulasta paraunla... hai..
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| noname |
Posted
on 18-Jan-03 06:04 PM
Gandhiji,
Asti maile MADHESH tira janda Dinakhar lai bheteko thiye. Nikai budho dekhiyeka thiye. Kapal pani jammai fuleko, anuharko rang pani funga udeko. Euta sano keta lai doryaera hidiraheka thiye. Mero snao kurakani bha thyo. Sunaidim hai:
Kata palnu bho ta baje? Gam'tira Sablai sanchai chha?
Khai ke bhanam babu gamtira ko kura. Kanta-Bijog chha. Yo nati lai sanai dekhi Madhesh mai rakham bhanera thau khojdai chhu. Hamra gam ka Gunaraj ke Gunaraj Ahile AMRIKA ma chhan ni..ho unle ma padhaunalai sahayog garchhu bhaneka the Gamtira aa bakhata...
E ramro bhaechha ta.
Khai ke bhanam..tyaspachhi ka chhan uni patto chhaina. E babu launa unlai euta chithi lekhidinu paryo.
..Yo Gunaraj ko arko katha bhaneko hunale yata chhireko..bhetnu bho bhane khabar gardinus hai. :)
BAHUT RAMRO KATHA. JYAN LE TA DOHORYAERA PADHYO.
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| ??! |
Posted
on 19-Jan-03 06:36 PM
Kaso re noname ji? Gunaraj-ji achel guptabas janu bha'chha re... chat bata biraktiyera..
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| jame bonds |
Posted
on 20-Jan-03 06:38 AM
Gandhiji, very nice. Are you a published writer? If not you should consider publishing a collection. The flow is great.
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