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| deep |
Posted
on 18-Jan-03 11:26 PM
Friends often ask me why you write with biyoganta? Well, the life has biyoganta. I can't change that. I am fool to think that my life is the most important thing for me to hang on with even though this very life I wish with all my devotion to cling on is on a deadly mission. Every second my life is taking me to its goal-the DEATH. I know it but still pretend that I don't know. If this is not what biyoganta is then what is?
Kuro tyati parako haina ...ek din ko ho, a newly married friend of mine asked me to accompany him to his sasurali...ma bhate bais le mateko bhale...with boiling excitement I agreed to go with him but feebly attempted to establish that my acceptance to his proposal rested on his insistance-whatever that was. Whole night I was visualizing the tarunis in his sasurali walking around in different shape and hau bhau katakhse. Kalpana nai ta ho...many of those tarunis including his two salis were competing with whatever vigor they got to throw themselves up all over me. Yeah, baby.
Pugiyo sasurali. Taruni ko darshan ta payiyena tara adh baise bibahit stri haru ko churi furi bhane nikai thyo. bela bela ma pachhi lagne afna bhura bhuri hapkaudai those middle aged women were walking around jhaki jhakau bhe ra. I was still looking for tarunis. If not any one else then what about those two unmarried salis of his? Tushara paat nai bho to know that the girls were out of town but some how the clouds seem thining to hear that the salis are scheduled to be back at tomorrow night. Since our stay there was for three nights two days, I felt little consoled with the hope of seeing taruni saalis tomorrow. Bhate sathi le bata bhari saali ko aas dekhara...akhir ma saali haru chahi rahenchhan ghar ma...dhikkar hos....
Just then, the sun peeked thru the sky. A young and vibrant girl with mercuric personality stole my attention. With tight jean pants and equally tight red top, she was awesome. Afulai ta taruni chahiya saali nai khojya haina...so really let my eyes chase her everywhere. She got the killer smile. I felt like she is like that dream where you just tucked in millions of dollars under your pillow but even in dream you're asking to yourself is this a dream or what?
Anyway, she was my girl and I was her man whole evening. The night was descending fast. The night, ah! the night - the most provocative time for romance. Both locked in each others arms. I was flying but my flight crashed when her husband walked in. I didn't know she was married. No need to know. Didn't want to know. But reality does not give a damn who cares to know or not, I guess. There is biyoganta again.
Je hos tyo taruni ko logne chahi daaami bhagge mani ho la....ramo ram.....
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| surya |
Posted
on 19-Jan-03 09:15 AM
Deep: You are such a great storyteller! Sacchai! That was a great! I really love the natural language. It really speaks to my own experience of Nepal and being young and awakening to the world. Thanks.
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| vivid |
Posted
on 19-Jan-03 10:52 AM
Sakiyena baa,
Deep ji,
Joon dekhyo joon,
Gham dekhyo gham.
Ani kina nahos,
Biyoganta tamam!
Je hos, biyoganta le nai raicha ke hajur ko katha sailee khariyeko, mane baa mane.
Dhanustankar namaskar!
Aru pani jawos hai....
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| deep |
Posted
on 19-Jan-03 11:11 PM
surya, vivid ani aru sathiharu,
k yo jindagi biyoganta kai euta grantha haina ra?
hijo gatta khelne naani aaja tin jana naani ki aama huda
sukhanta pani hola kasaila tara malai ta biyoganta paryo ni
gatta chhadya dui barsa jati pachhi ta yo jyan pani ta aashe thyo
unlai thaha hola na hola ma ta kina birsinthe ra?
Khyal khyak garya jasto garera sachchikai maya garna khojne ma
uhi aabha lai...aabha ra meri kajan ta bes fren ni feri
pachhi samma ni mero man ani kina nacharkiyos ta aabha
Sundare ko motorcyclema tyo bhate lai chyappa parera basda
huna ta swasni le logne lai chyapda maile gunaso ganra nahune ho
tara malai pareko biyoganta pani ta khyal khyal ko ta hain ni ho..
hijo samma babu ra bhai bhanne chhyas chhyasti bhetinthe
achel uncle bhanee ko ghuicho badhdeko bela dai bhanne afnai lagchha
hijo nepal bata aako kajan jasko ba ko janti jada maile nikkai side hanya the
gunaso gardai bhanchha dai hya ta budhai budha re chhan kohi 29 kohi 30ka
Ye rattai 29 pani katai budho hunchha? chhippeko hola tara budho? Ammai
Gayeko umer farkauna namilne! man ta hudaliyera aauchha..afu taruno bhanera ke
ates mates taruni le yo jyanlai taruno nabhane si hat lagyo uhi hainta?
biyoganta. Kaso?
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| Hamjayega |
Posted
on 20-Jan-03 04:36 AM
Deep bro.....tesai lie bhacha..mun mun mai LOVE..ani mun mun mai separation and the best part was...you did not waste much of your time just a few hours. Tyo taruni was married only rite?? Not dead. With the high rate of divorces these dayz who knows timro sapana sacho hola. Dont get me wrong.
Tyo taruni ko logne definatey bhagyamani...Hamro Deep bro justo Jaar paunu..hehehe. Euta ramro katha sunai deuna maybe he will forget everything including her.
Good Luck!!!!
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| deep |
Posted
on 20-Jan-03 10:55 AM
Ke bhane ni hamjayega tyo aago taruni ko aago tapne dhun chadeko ho malai..kasaiko srimati mathi gidhdhe najar gadne paap ta kina garthe ra? .... nabhaye ta katha sunayera matrai napugya khanda ma sunghidine tira pani lagna sakthe chlorophorm ho ki ke jati tyastai naam bhako...jasusi upanyas ma padhya...!
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