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| elmer |
Posted
on 21-Jan-03 09:22 AM
Like a mist that cloaks the mountain
Or the trees draped by leaves
Presence of thy mantles my heart
Perfection in me
And give me thy hand
This surreal experience I have always had
Never too soon but already late
Halt my love,…….
Your verdict is to part from me
And sojourn into another life
I wonder if fate is by my side
And question god if it is all right
To implore you to change your mind
Secretly of course
Keeping the hope alive.
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| elmer |
Posted
on 21-Jan-03 09:26 AM
I would like some inputs.
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| surya |
Posted
on 21-Jan-03 12:05 PM
Elmer... Fudd?
:)
ramro cha. tara kina "thy" and "thee" ni? shakespearean throwback jasto lagcha.
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 21-Jan-03 12:20 PM
Elmer ji,
Very poetic.... well written. Is it about wishful thinking? :)
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| Vision |
Posted
on 21-Jan-03 04:33 PM
Free as a bird in the sky
She was the apple of my eye
Why oh why did she have to die
Oh why oh why oh why
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| SITARA |
Posted
on 21-Jan-03 05:12 PM
Free!
When were we ever free?
My quest for Freedom,
Bound me to the stakes,
enslaved me to its promises,
of a universe without breaks!
:)
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| Vision |
Posted
on 21-Jan-03 07:05 PM
Tell you now, that I will
How about this poem I feel
People who read this poem will be in pain,
reading this poem you have nothing to gain
Yesterday today and tomorrow,
reading this poem will bring you sorrow
So kill the author or send big bucks
and you should know this poem SUCKS!
;)
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| kalanidhi |
Posted
on 21-Jan-03 11:59 PM
Elmer, Sitara, Surya, and all,
Hope you will like it ..
I lose the separation
Between the ocean and the sky,
My horizon is erased,
The day has died ... the night's alive.
Sparkling diamonds are revealed,
One by one, their facets gleam,
It's as if there are so many,
All heaven's bursting at its seams.
Then in a corner of the sky,
A tiny moon comes into view,
And from its star-embedded pillow,
It casts off a golden hue.
Then I see white ocean foam,
I taste the whipped-creamed waves,
Tantalizing, in they come,
Taunting, then they run away.
Soothing, rhythmic, flowing waters,
Ocean sounds within my ear,
I hear sweetly singing sirens,
My awareness very clear.
Old feelings, downthrough my seasons
I am not better, only different from others.
Kalanidhi (UCB)
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| starry night |
Posted
on 22-Jan-03 01:06 AM
very nice...man, im all tapped oout this week. YOu guys are an inspiration though.
-a starry starry night it is
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