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on 06-Feb-03 07:34 PM
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nIdLbQ lg/f}nf ef]hf8sf] :yfgLo :s'ndf lzIfs lyP . pd]/n] t e/v/ kRrL; k'/f u/]sf x'g\ t/ hfuL/ vfPsf] bz jif{ k'lu;s]sf] lyof] . lqrfln; ;fndf P;Pn;L u/]kl5 To;} ;fnb]lv cfkm\g} ufp+sf] :s'ndf :yfgLo >f]taf6 tna vfg] u/L lzIfssf] hflu/] hLjgdf k|j]z u/]sf lyP . 3/sf] cfly{s l:ylt /fd|f] lyPg . h]7f 5f]/f ePsf] sf/0f ljleGg s'/fx? klg x]g'{ kYof]{ . kl/jf/df klxn]b]lv /f]uL cfdf afa'sf cltl/St Pp6L lbbL, b'O{6L jlxgL, Pp6f efO lyP . cfkm'n] P;Pn;L u/]kl5 efO jlxgLx?nfO{ klg k9fpg] n]vfpg] lhDd]jf/L ;fg}b]lv pgL dfly g} cfOnfu]sf] lyof] .
nIdLbQ ;fg}b]lv k9\gdf t]h lyP . sIffdf klxnf] 5f]8]/ bf]>f] slxn] x'g' k/]g . 6]:6df lhNnfsf] af]8{df 5}7f}+ :yfg NofPsf lyP . u'?x?n] ;f]Wbf P;Pn;L u/]kl5 b'Mv u/]/ b'O{ ;fn l6rL8=df PrP -x]Ny cl;:6]G6_ k9]/ cfkm\g} 7fp+sf] :yf:Yo s]Gb|df 8fS6/ x'G5' eGy] xfO:s'n b]lv g} .
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sflt{sdf l6rL8=df PrP sf] kmf/d v'Nof] eGg] yfxf eof] . nIdLbQ klg kmf/d eg{ sf7df08f}+ hfg] t/v/ ug{ nfu] . b'O{ jif{;Dd sf7df08f}+df a;]/ 3/af6 vr{ k]n]/ k9\g ;Sg] l:ylt geP klg 3/af6 clncln e/y]u eP gk'unfO{ sf7df08f}+df 6\o'zg k9fP/ klg wfGg ;lsG5 eGg] s'/f ;fyLx?af6 ;'g]sf lyP . cln l;gLo/ bfh'x?n] …z'? z'?df 3/d} uP/ k9fpg' k5{ ;fgf s]6fs]6Lx?nfO{, t}klg t+ cfp+5;\ eg] xfdL vf]lHbp+nfÚ klg eg]sf lyP .
aflx/v]/ o:t} s'/fx?n] ubf{ sf7df08f}+ a;]/ b'O{ jif{ u'hfg{ ;S5' eGg] cf+6 leqleq} knfO/x]sf] lyof] . t/ vr{sf] Joj:yf af/] 3/;Nnfx ePsf] lyPg . Tof] lbg klg efOalxgLx? ;'lt;s]kl5 afa', cfdf / nIdLbQ a;]/ 5nkmn ug{ nfu] .
æa? d]/f oL gfs sfgsf uxgf a]r]/ eP klg h]7f] 5f]/fnfO{ 8fS6/ g} agfpgL xf],Æ ef]nL 5f]/f ufp+df 8fS6/ eP/ cfPkl5sf] uj{ ;Dem+b} cfdfsf] cGhfg dfof zAb ag]/ kf]lvof] .
æt}+n] lx;fa u/]O5];\< b'O{ jif{;Dd sf7df08'df a;]/ 8fS6/L k9\g] vr{ Xof+ xf]< t]/f oL gfs sfgdf slt nfO5];\< 5 dlxgf klg k'Ub}g .Æ afa'n] vfp+nf h:tf] u/L cfdfnfO{ 8SNofP .
æt}+n] P;Pn;L ul/xfln;\ . t+ d'lg klg tLtLg hgf efOalxgLx? 5g\ . ltgLx?nfO{ klg k9fpg} k/\of] . ca t+nfO{ Xof+ eGbf dfly k9fpg ;lSbg . ;S5;\ eg] e/y]u u/]/ efOalxgLnfO{ klg P;Pn;L;Dd v'6\6f nufOb] . ;Sb}g;\ eg] ca cfkm'n] h;/L u5{;\ u/\ . t+nfO{ P;Pn;L u/fOxfn]+, dnfO{ ca kfk nfuf]Og,Æ afa'sf] k'/f0fsf] d]nf] nIdLbQlt/ ;f]lemof] .
nIdLbQn] a'em] 3/af6 s]xL ;xof]u x'g ;Sg] l:ylt 5}g . g;Sg] t 5+b} lyof], /fd|} d'vn] eg]sf] eP klg t x'GYof] . æoL klg t]/} efO alxgL x'g\ /]Æ . pgLx?nfO{ klg t}+n] e/y]u u/\ /] . e'qfsf] . d;+u ;f]w]/ hGdfPsf x'g\ /<Æ nIdLbQ PSn} emf]lSsP afa';+u . Tof] lbgsf] afa'sf] s'/fn] ;fx|} kf]Nof] nIdLbQnfO{ .
Tof] 36gfkl5 cfkm\g} afa';+u klg xft k;f/]/ s]xL dfUg dg nfu]g nIdLbQnfO{ . hfuL/ e]6];Dd lbp;f] st} sfd ug]{ eg]/ 5]ps} jL/]Gb| SofDk;df /ftLsf] Snf; lng] u/L Dofy / O+lUn; d]h/ lnP/ cf6{;\df egf{ eP . Tof] ;fn PrPsf] nf:6 ln:6df axQ/ k|ltzt Nofpg]sf] klg gfd lg:s]5 t/ nIdLbQn] rf}xQ/ k|ltzt c+s NofP/ klg PrP k9\g] cfsf+Iff k'/f ePg .
k';b]lv ufp+sf] :s'ndf :yfgLo >f]taf6 tna vfg] u/L Pshgf lzIfs /fVg] lg0f{o eof] . :s'nsf] h]xGbf/ ljBfyL{ klg ePsf] / nIdLbQnfO{ /fVbf tna klg w]/} lbg' gkg]{ a? k|fOd/L b]lv xfO:s'n n]ensf h'g;'s} ljifo klg k9fpg ;Sg] b]v]sf]n] Gof}kfg] x]8;/n] nIdLbQnfO{ af]nfP . cleefjsx? ;a}n] /fd|} dfg] .
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qmdaM
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on 06-Feb-03 07:35 PM
bz jif{ cl3 :yflgo >f]tsf] tna vfP/ k9fpg z'? u/]/ cg]s x08/ vf+b} nIdLbQn] cfOP, laP kf; u/]/ PdP sf] klg bf]>f] jif{sf] k|fOe]6 k/LIff lbO;s]sf lyP . lzIff cfof]usf] hf+r kf; u/]/ xfO:s'nsf] :yfoL lzIfs eP of] cjlwdf . d]h/ O+lUn; / Dofy lnP/ k9]sf] x'gfn] :s'nb]lv SofDk;;Ddsf ljBfyL{x? 6\o'zg k9\g cfpg] ePsf lyP . 5f]6s/Ldf eGg'kbf{ uPsf] rf/ kf+r jif{b]lv nIdLbQsf] l:ylt /fd|f] ePsf] lyof] .
dfG5]sf] l:ylt ;'lw|+b} cfPkl5 3/ Jojxf/sf cfjZostfx? klg a9\g yfn] . efOalxgLx? klg s'g} s'/f kbf{ afa';+u geg]/ nIdLbQ;+u} cfOk'Uy] . nIdLbQnfO{ ca ToxL lhGbuL /dfOnf] nfUg] ePsf] lyof] . a]nf a]nfdf d]l8sn nfOg k9\g gkfPsf]df dg lvGg eg] eO/xGYof] . t/ klg afa'k|ltsf] u'gf;f]x? d]l6O;s]sf lyP . cfdfrflx+ afa';+u v6k6 ePsf] a]nf …5f]/fnfO{ x]nf+ u/]/ p;n] k9\g vf]h]sf] k9fOg;\Ú eg]/ l/; kf]lVyg\ . t/ Toltv]/sf] jfWotf g} lyof] afa'sf] klg . zfob cfkm\g} argn] ubf{ xf]nf afa'n] klg p;sf] cfoJoodf s'g} em'sfj /fVb}gy] . efOalxgLx? ;a}n] /fd|} kl9/x]sf lyP .
nIdLbQnfO{ lj:tf/} ljx]sf k|:tfjx? cfpg yfn] . klxnf] b'O{ tLg jif{ jlxgLx?sf] ljx] gu/L cfkm\gf] ljx] s;/L ug'{ eg]/ jf:tf /fv]gg\ . v} s:tf] rng xf], 3/df jlxgLx? 5+bf5+b} bfh'n] ljx] ug{ gldNg] . gGb efph'sf] ;DaGw cln 3d08L kf/fsf] xf]nf / b'j}sf] 3/ lju|]nf eg]/ hf]ufpgnfO{ To:tf] rng a;fn]sf x'g\ sL< cyjf k/fO 5f]/L 3/df cfPkl5 cfkm\gf] r'/Lkm'/L vtd x'g] / ljx] df cfkm'v';L bfOhf] nfg kfO+b}g eg]/ Tof] gxf];\ eg]/ gGbx?n] lgsfn]sf pkfo x'g\< h] h;/L rng rn]sf] ePklg nIdLbQn] alxgLx? b'O{6Lsf] ljx] gu/L cfkm' ljx] ulb{g eg]/} a;] . afa' cfdfn] klg p;nfO{ ljx] ug{ Ps jrg klg cg'/f]w u/]gg\ .
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crDd .
crDd t nIdLbQnfO{ Toltv]/ nfUof] ha p;sL sfG5L alxgLsf] klg ljx] ;lsof] . alxgLsf] b'ng kmsf{P/ lx+8]s} lbgb]lv cfdfnfO{ a'xf/L rflxP5 . oltGh]n pgn] sdfP, 3/ agfP, efOalxgLnfO{ k9fP, cx+ pgnfO{ s] rflxG5, s;f] x'+b}5 s;}n] ;f]wvf]h u/]g . pgnfO{ dgsf] ax kf]Vg] >LdtL slxn]b]lv rflxPsf] lyof] s;}nfO{ jf:tf ePg, clxn] bz}lbgdf 3/df a'xf/L rflxof] /] . 3/df lbglbg} pgs} ljx]sf s'/f rNg yfn] . lbgsf] Pp6L s]6Lsf s'/f cfpg yfn] . nIdLbQnfO{ crDd nflu/x\of] . oL k|:tfjx? sxf+ c8\s]sf lyP xf]nfg\ klxn]< h] xf];\ ca nIdLbQ klg ljx] ug]{ lg0f{odf k'u] . ljleGg 7fp+df s]6L x]g{ hfg] l;nl;nf z'? eof] .
Psrf]6L d's'Gbk'/sf clwsf/L afh]sf 5f]/L x]g{ k'u]5g\ . a]n'sL efG;fdf 3'+8fdf 6fpsf] n'sfp+b} afh]sL 5f]/Ln] vfgf k:s]/ lbO5g\ . x]g{ ;d]t To:tf] ;fx|f] x'g] 7fp+df af]nrfn ug]{ t s'/} ePg . cfkm\gf] dg ldNg] Pp6f ;fyLnfO{ lnP/ uPsf lyP . kl5 s'/f a'em\b} hf+bf k9fO 5f]8]/ a;]sL clg pd]/ klg dgUu] k'u]sf] cg'dfg u/]/ s'/f gldNg] 6+'uf]df k'u]5g\ . klxnf] rf]6L s]6L x]g{ uPsf …dg k/]g eg] klg 7f8} eGg x'+b}gÚ eGg] ;Dd yfxf lyof] t/ s] eGg' k5{ eGg] rflx+ yfxf ePg . 6f9fsf] af6f] kms{g cK7\of/} ePsf]n] /ftL klg ToxL+ a:g] eP . ptf clwsf/L afh]n] rflx+ To;sf] cs}{ cy{ nfP5g\ . kfqf] lgsfnLj/L ljx]sf] nug slxn] slxn] 5 eg]/ x]b{} /x]5g\ /ftLd} . ;fyLn] aflx/ xfjf vfg lg:sg] lgx+' u/]/ s'/f a'em]5 . ca ljTof; kg]{ eof], ljxfg t /ftf]6Lsf u/fpg] eP eg]/ /ftL g} p7]/ efu]5g\ .
To; kl5 w]/} 7fp+df uP . clxn]sf] h:tf] s]6fs]6LnfO{ …ltdLx? s'/f u/Ú eg]/ v'nf ukm ug{ 5f]l8lbg] rng lyPg Toltv]/ . ljx] cl3 s]6fs]6L 7DofP/ x]g}{ d'l:sn . w]/} 7fp+df s]6L x]g{ hf+bf hf+bf dg k/]g eg] s] ug'{k5{ eGg]df ca t l;kfn' eO;s]sf lyP .
nIdLbQsf] s]6L x]g{ hf+bf ;+w}h;f] ab|L ;fydf hfGYof] . ab|L ;fg}b]lvsf] ldNg] ;fyL lyof] . SofDk; cufl8 :6]zg/L k;n lyof] ab|Lsf] . k9\g w]/} ;s]g ab|Ln] . P;Pn;Ldf ;]s]08 l8lehg NofP/ ToxL+ jL/]Gb| SofDk;df lx:6|L d]h/ lnP/ laPsf] hf+r lb+b} lyof] clxn];Dd . ab|Lsf] klg ljx] ePsf] lyPg . st} /fd|} 7fp+df s'/f rNof] eg] ljx] ug]{ klg s'/f ePsf] lyof] . oltv]/ nIdLbQsf] ;fyL eg]klg, ndL eg]klg pxL ePsf] lyof] . nIdLbQsf] sfddf lx+8\bf p;nfO{ klg /fd|} ePsf] lyof], otf ptf x]g{ kfPsf] lyof] .
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qmdzM
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on 06-Feb-03 07:36 PM
k6LxfgLsf l;4Lk|;fb e08f/LsL 5f]/L /fwfsf] s'/f cfof] nIdLbQsf] nflu . nIdLbQ / ab|L hfg] eP . s'/f ldNof] eg] 6Lsf6fnf] ug]{;Ddsf] cf+6 af]s]/ uP pgLx? . cr]n nIdLbQsf] afa'n] ;a} Jojxf/ klg pg}nfO{ ;'lDklbPsf lyP . To;}n] h] h;/L ug'{kg]{ xf] nIdlbQs} OR5fdf x'GYof] .
emDs] ;f+emdf k6LxfgL k'u] . ab|L s'/f ug{df rnfv lyof] . s]6Lsf] afa';+u a;]/ cg]s ukm ug{ nfUof] . s]6fs]6Lsf] b]vfb]v efG;fdf dfq x'g] s'/f a'lemof] . nIdLbQ cfkm}+ s]6f ePsf]n] w]/} ukm ug{ klg ;s]gg\ . clxn]sf] l:ylt / s]6fsf] Nofst x]g]{xf] eg] nIdLbQ pDsfO g;Sg' s]6f lyP .
a]n'sL efG;fdf s]6Ln] lgx'l/+b} vfgf kl:slbOg\ . s]6Lsf afa', nIdLbQ / ab|L ;+u} vfg a;] . ca s;/L s]6Lsf] cg'xf/ x]g'{< kfgL vfgsf] nflu Unf; g/fv]/ s?jf /fvLlbPsf /x]5g\ . nIdLbQn] s?jfaf6 7f8f] 3f+6L nfp+b} kfgL lkP . kfgL lkpg] t jxfgf dfq, To;f] ubf{ s]6Lsf] cg'xf/sf] emns kfOg] . kfgL lkpg nfu]sf] dfG5]nfO{ s]xL eGg klg ldn]g .
nIdLbQn] x]g{ t x]/] /fwfnfO{ t/ cem} lgofn]/ x]g]{ wf]sf] k'u]g . n'sL rf]/L x]g'{ k/]sf]n] efG;fsf] dw'/f] pHofnf]df eP/ sfnL b]lvPsf] xf] ls ?k g} sN:ofp+bf] xf] lgwf] ug{ ;s]gg\ . lgwf] ug{ ab|LnfO{ ;f]w] .
æs]6L t cln cln sfnL g} nfUof] dnfO{,Æ ab|Ln] nIdLbQsf] dgdf lr;f] kfgL vGofOlbof] .
Tof] /ft otf ptfsf s'/f u/L a;] .
æab|L afa', s'/f s] ef]< lgwf] kfd\ g tÆ ljxfg s]6Lsf afa'n] ab|LnfO{ PSn} af]nfP/ ;f]w] .
æPsrf]6L 3/;Nnfx u/]/ lgwf] ug]{ eg]sf] 5 ;fyLn]Æ ab|Ln] s'/f ldnfof] .
nIdLbQ / ab|L 3/lt/ kms]{ . To;sf] ;ftf bzlbg kl5 PdPsf] k/LIffsf] nflu 8]9 dlxgfsf] 5'l6\6 lnP/ nIdLbQ sf7df08f}+ lx+8] .
k/fh'nL dfOnf dfkm{t\ nIdLn] /fwfnfO{ dg gk/fPsf] va/ k6LxfgL k'Uof] . va/ nlulbg] k/fh'nL dfOnf e08f/Lsf cfkmGt ky]{ . ab|L;+uaf6 va/ lnP/ uPsf pgL kms{+bf ab|Ls} nflu va/ lnP/ kms]{5g\ .
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æTof] nIdLbQ eGg];+u xfd|f] 5f]/LnfO{ x]g{ cfpg] tL ab|Lafa'sf] klg ljx] ef5}g eGof x}g< x}g s:tf 5g\ tLgsf vfgbfg< ls pgn] u/] eg] lbg x'G5 /flwsf<Æ /fwfsL cfdfn] /fwfsf] afa';+u s'/f ul/5g\ .
æs:tf km/fl;nf lyP tL ab|Lafa' . Tof] nIdLbQ t Tolt af]Ng] h:tf] klg nfUof lyPgÆ /fwfsL cfdfn] ylkg\ . pgnfO{ t 5f]/L x]g{ cfp+b}df nIdLbQ eGbf ab|L kf] dg k/]sf] /}5 .
l;l4nfnn] klg 3f]l/P/ ;f]r]5g\ . Psdgn] 7Ls} xf] h:tf] klg nfu]5 . laP ;Dd k9]sf], Pp6f Ond u/]/ a;]sf] s]6f 7Ls} t xf] h:tf] nfu]/ k/fh'nL;+u k|:tfj /fvL k7fP5g\ .
jf:tjdf ab|LnfO{ klg /flwsf dg k/]sf] /x]5 . nIdLbQn] n'sLn'sL x]g'{kg]{ a]nfdf ab|Ln] lgw{Ss;+u /flwsfsf] ?k/+u x]g{ kfPsf] lyof] . s]6Lsf] vfgbfg ;a} yfxf ePs} lyof] . gfO+ eGg] s'/} lyPg . tLglbg kl5 g} ab|L / /flwsfsf] ljx] eof] .
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sf7df08f}+af6 kms]{kl5 ;a} s'/f v'n:t eof] . ufp+3/df ab|Ln] wf]sf lbP/ nIdLnfO{ lbg] eg]sf] s]6L cfkm}+nfO{ kf/\of] /] egg] ufO+u'O+ x'+b}df nIdLbQn] cof{nsL 5f]/L ?kfnfO{ ljx] u/] . ;fwf/0f ljx] ug'{k5{ eGg] nIdLbQn] cfkm}+n] dfu]/ bfOhf]df df]6/;fOsn klg ldnfP /] . kf]xf]/ ;fn e/tk'/ hf+bf yfxf eof] cr]n nIdLbQ / ab|Lsf] cfjt hfjt 5}g /] .
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| noname |
Posted
on 06-Feb-03 07:57 PM
SA-RA-RA padhe....sasai naferi kana......!!
Sathi hunu ta tyasto po...aanfu kali kalchaudi bihe garera pani...Badri le sathi ko lagi keti pani ramri, motorcycle pani dina sakne ghar ko batawaran tayar gari diyechha...!! :)
SAJHAPUR ka eligible bachelor haru ...SAWADHAN BHAYA!!!
Gandhi ji the way you use places and names of characters makes your story touchy. Patihani, Mukundpur ka Adhikari, Parajuli Mahila, Sidhi Pd. Bhandari give the reader the impression that something is happening before them.
ASADHYAI RAMRO....!!
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| ??! |
Posted
on 06-Feb-03 10:59 PM
Thank you nonameji..... achamma ta ke bhayo bhane my wife also read my story this time.
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| jira |
Posted
on 07-Feb-03 09:00 AM
Badri lay tyaso bhaye ramrai sadyantra po garecha ta!
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| vivid |
Posted
on 07-Feb-03 02:54 PM
Gandhi ji,
Aghi nai university ko computer mai tapain ko katha dekhya ho tara font download garna namilne bhaye ko hunda ahile ayera fursad nabhayera khana kotha mai lyaiwori khandai padya ni, :)
Ek dam ghat lagne gari lekhnu huncha ke, sacho gatana haru ko pratibimba hun hajur ka katha haru.
Lau ta aja lai hatar ma.
Arko pratikchya ma.....................
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| Poonte |
Posted
on 07-Feb-03 03:56 PM
Gandhi jee...
Aekdam ramailo...sadaa jhai...
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| Deep |
Posted
on 07-Feb-03 04:06 PM
Gandhiji,
Radhika naramri chahi haina...kaali ta jhan hudai haina....la...
Badri urf deep ;)
ramro lagyo...asti nai bhojpur ko katha ni padhya thyiye kya man ma pairo go ni...
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| najar |
Posted
on 07-Feb-03 04:29 PM
Malai pani ramailo laagyo gandhiji also popularly known as gunaraj-ji. Katai laxmiji gunaraj ji ta parnu bhaena re kya ajha? :) As always your stories stand out in its own genre.
Appreciate your effort in writing in nepali font and sharing it with us--makes it more special.
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| Biruwa |
Posted
on 07-Feb-03 11:23 PM
jhandai miss bhako.
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| ??! |
Posted
on 09-Feb-03 12:42 PM
Thanks for all who read and appreciated the story.
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| tick |
Posted
on 09-Feb-03 12:45 PM
Gandhi ji,
Dherai ramro cha. I look forward to your writings.
Regards.
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| Himalayas |
Posted
on 09-Feb-03 06:04 PM
Gandhi bro le sajha chahi lyang lyang hallako rahechha.
Dammiiiiiiii rahechha. Aru pani jawos bro....
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| %&! |
Posted
on 10-Feb-03 07:56 AM
I am always waiting for ur stories.
Please keep writting.
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| forget-me-not |
Posted
on 10-Feb-03 06:22 PM
Dhanyabad..hajur ko story lai... I really enjoyed the story the same way I enjoyed it last time....sachhi man khayo...tara...reality ma dherai testo hudo raichha....tesai le..aarfo bihe lai keti herna janele ..bihe nagare sathi nalaunu hola..huna na aachkal ko chalan aalik farak chha tai pani...
I stiil remember one of our sajha's regular writer went to see a girl with his friend....but the bad thing is the girl liked the friend not the one supposed to marry..becareful hai...
sayad uhhale bujhunu bhayo hola...jasko barema maile kura garya chhu...
Hajur ko yesti marmik katha haru padhna paiyos..ma aafu lai aakdam khusi thanne chhu..hajur ko key board nirantar chali rahos...
Muri muri dhanyabad...
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