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| Deep |
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on 21-Feb-03 01:57 PM
Euta ghatana yaad aayo. The hero in this story is a regular (hopefully he qualifies for this term) sajha contributor. So, I am using "hero" instead of his real name here.
Bhayo hola yastai pach chha barsa jati. Hero was gone to Biratnagar. The place he was staying in those days was west of Mahendra chowk, sarochiya road dakshin. Hero was staying with Niraj's family. Niraj was his friend as well as a relative from his father's side. Niraj used to attend a college there, Mahendra Morang. There, in Biratnagar, he(Niraj) introduced hero with one his neighbors. They were well known family there and their home used to glow with tin tin wata sukumari tarunis. Those tarunis also had few brothers but they really do not play much role in this story except one who is mentioned below. Also, jethi and maili tarunis are out of the screen. Out of the screen not because they were not beautiful-my god! they were also harip khatara -but because hero was only somehow tangled with the kanchhi. The kanchhi was the owner of the most mercuric and vibrant personality. She was so vibrant that our hero used to shake every time she was around.
Kanchhi's bhanda lagattai mathiko brother befriended our hero before the sweet kanchhi did. Good thing that came out of that friendship was hero got the needed access to kanchhi's home. Huna ta kanchhiko sambandha Trishna, Niraj's sister, sanga pani gatilai nai thyo but Trisna sanga bhanda kanchhi ko dai sanga kanchhiko ghar jana badta sajilo ni ta! Hero was not there to live forever and had few days to mark his presence in her heart and wherever else she wanted to so hero had to move fast. Honestly, hero could have considered himself lucky if kanchhi were to address him as her husband. But hero admitted, " I must say byako kuro was not my priority then."
Kanchhi was around 5 ft. 3 inches, was not skinny like a bhindi (ram toriya) but was not bhyatta like a farsi either. She was more like a ghiraula, I guess. She was maala maal with jawani, let me make the story short. She was awesome. I mean our hero was a lost dude there with her.
Hero was rapidly becoming a good friend of her brother. On the new year, Kanchhi got our hero a card full of poem. Jhannai le behos bhako hero ta….mutu ta bhatyak bhyatak bhera….sorha barse jawani le ukus mukis bhaki taruni le kabita tannai lekhera deko card…..tyo pani lukayera…..pachhi samma ni mutu chit chito dhuk dhuk garthyo heroko tyo ghatana samjhida….Hero read the card many times. He came to the same coclusion every time he read the card, more convincing than before each time.."she wants to be mine". Hero thought, "I want to be hers she wants to be mine. Ke chahiyo aru aba?" Actually tyo new year aaunu aghi she was mentioning indirectly that she wanted to go see a movie in Indra chitra mandir…may be she was not daring to go just with hero but he was receiving the signals she was sending, pretty well.
Then one day, she came to Niraj's house unexpectedly. She directly came to the room our hero was staying and sat right in front of him on a bet ko chair. Hero was not alone in the house Trisna and her mother were in the chhat. Niraj was gone to itahari with his father. Kanchhi must have noticed the females on the chhat and males (except hero) out. She asked our hero where my friend was. He told her he's gone to Itahari. As soon as he said Itahari she became excited and said tya itahari ma (Kisna hall?) kuch kuch hota hai lageko chha herna jam na…Hero ta pulakit bhaihalyo…pulakit ta bhayo bicharo tara milaune kasari?…He was thinking milauna ta parchha parchha….jasari bhe ni….yasto deadly chanas ghari ghari aauchha ra? He knew the answer and shook his head to signal "no" even before completing the question.
New year taka …ek din , kanchhi ko dai ra hero…actually let me be little liberal and write kanchhiko dai ko nam…his name was and probably still is Diwas. So, Diwas and hero went to Jaljala to see a movie, did not like what was being played there and Himalaya was like a museum so went to Indra chitra mandir in tin tolia. The movie was "janam samjha karo"..Salman khan was a lead character. The movie was a terrible one. All the time, hero was missing kanchhi there. By his side where kanchhi was supposed to sit, her halka junge dai was sitting badam chapaudai. Sad! after the movie they went back to the traffic chowk, did hang around a while then lusukka euta dokan ma chhirera sukawa ra beer with pyaj, lasun and sadeko bhatmas khayera. jhamakka rat parechhi, lage ghar tira…Diwas le sidhai usko gharma liyera gayo hero laini….Hero and Diwas went straight to the room saying they don't want to eat "bhat". "Dhokera aayo hola ni" jethi taruni expressed her anger towards her brother. Hero ko man ma pani chhyassa chiso paryo…malai ni kehi bhanne hun ki bhanera…Diwas took hero to his room…Diwas started to play besure gitar and sing popular nepali and hindi tukre ustad songs and hero was pretending as if he was listening to the songs. He, in fact, was not.
....baki taltira chha...hai...
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| Deep |
Posted
on 21-Feb-03 01:58 PM
.......kramasa...
Hero was afraid that he might say something about kanchhi tyo beer ra sekuwa lagya belama…tara he wanted to see kanchhi…damn where is the taruni, he was asking himself. Just then Kanchhi came to the door and asked, "dai khana nakhane?" Hero hurdhuridai pugyo dhokama….Diwas ochhyan batai aankhai nauthai karayo…khanna khanna..aghinai bhanya haina….Hero was standing right in front of his kanchhi feeling her breathe right on his face..she was looking up and hero was looking down. "jhyappai aangalo ma lim ki kyaho? " hero thought. Then as he was quickly controlling himself she pushed him with a halka force as if that push meant to say "come on..". Hero ranabhulla ma paryo…..ke garne ke garne…..Kanchhi left with a highly appealing jaldo baldo jyan throwing millions of open invitations through her two madak nayans….That's how hero felt. "ke bho?" Diwas asked from inside stopping his third class concert. "Kei na kei", hero replied and went inside with a disappointed heart. Then hero left after a while…kanchhi dekhiyina bahira niskida…sutna gaichhe ki ta? Hero thought. But just that sutna gako thought badly provoked his slumbering desires so hero ranthaniyera farkyo Nirajkaha. Lusukka gayera…sutyo hero tauko dukhya chha bhat khanna bhanera…Niraj knew what our hero was up to so he stood by him.
Hero was trying to arrange that kuch kuch hota hai movie trip to itahari. It was evening time and sky was filled with dark rainy clouds and hero was looking at the clouds speaking about kanchhi with Niraj. Just then kanchhi came running there. Kanchhi said, TV bigriyo jasto chha Nirajdai… video aaudaina…ek choti herdinus na…ghar ma kohi ni chhaina…Hero was all set to go. Niraj noticed how excited our hero was to fix the TV, so he smiled and said…hero le banaidinchha ek kai chhin ma….hero walked back to kanchhi's house with kanchhi rubbing each other's shoulders a couple of times and each time running a bijuli thoughout his rankido jyan…He was indirectly asking who else are at kanchhi's home.."Diwas khai ta?" Kanchhi took care of the questions at once…"Dai bhai koini chhainan…buwa ni hunuhunna….didiharu mamaghar gachhan…aama mattai hunuhunchha" then she smiled after scanning our hero briefly…hero was a bit confused….what does this girl really want? Then he thought…whatever she wants…I am here to deliver…..he quickly remember ganeshthan and tried to do an advance pryaschit…and request for favor at the same time…
He approached the tv room…kanchhi's mother also came and said.."khai ke bho ke bho…aai ra thyo…launa babu…babu lai aauchha banauna…khai ta Niraj?...aaja diwas le video ni lyauchhu bhanthyo…kuch kuch hota hai ko…." Hero said, 'Niraj gharmai chha ma herchhu ni…" then he tried to check this and that who knows what…he was not a mechanic…kanchhi hero sangai nariye jhai garera herthi hero ke gardai chha bhanera…jyan ghari ghari thokkinthe…romanchit gardai…after couple of minutes kanchhi's mother left for the kitchen again saying.". la babu hai..khai ke bhako ho..".leaving kanchhi and hero alone. Kanchhi ta jhan jhan narina thali….hero ta darauna po lagyo kata kata halka kina ho…tyai bela ma batti gayo……bahira darkera paani paryo….bhitra chuk ghoptyako jasto adhyaro…kanchhi satera ubhiyeki chha….hero le kampit swar ma bhanyo…jau batti lyau…"kanchhi le tharkeko swor ma bhani batti chhaina, gayo"…"main batti hola ni? Hero le bhadiko mutulai thichdai aru kampit swar ma bolyo…kanchhi bolina baru hat samai hero ko bistarai…gomanko jasto funkar hero ko kan ma paryo…hero le batti lyauna feri bhanna khojyo…awaz nai niskena…aba ta hero ko hat kanchhi ko fandama parisakya thyo…..tyai pani hero le bolna khojya…"batti.." ….."chup" kanchhi le bistari tara prasta swar ma boli….hero ta aaudhi daraudai sochna lagyo…yaha kuch kuch hota he lyaune bhanthe aaja ta sab kuch hota he hola jasto chha…"
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| Gurl_Interrupted |
Posted
on 21-Feb-03 08:46 PM
:-)
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| oys_chill |
Posted
on 21-Feb-03 09:41 PM
deep dai,
deuso dekhin padchu bhani rathen...brain freeze bhathyo bihan ko jaach le........ekdam man paryo.......ali madira khadai padna ramailo hunthyo..tara thikai cha...it is ghacchi like all the stories!! nepali ka ti sabda haroo le mutu mero ni hanyo.....
wow deep dai.....kasto san sani lagdo kahani hau!!......ani yo katai hero chai afai ta hoina? sankai lagyo malai ta..yesto detail ma :P
lau aroo ni lekhdai garnu hoi? ma chai aja tyo sardarji ko kuri rachu...kaile ta lekhnu huncha bhanera
Oys
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| aloo |
Posted
on 22-Feb-03 08:08 AM
Haha, very nice.
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| MunnaMobile |
Posted
on 22-Feb-03 10:40 AM
Deep bro le feri 6cer hikayoooooooooo..No doubt. Ani Hero chai ko ho ni?? hamrai San dai ta hoina..heheheh..after all yesto perfect favourable situation ta administrator baayek aru kuslai poar thiyo ra..
Anyway it was a wonderful narration...
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| deep |
Posted
on 22-Feb-03 03:21 PM
sathiharu,
sabda dan ko lagi hardik dhanyabad.
Oys_
tyo sardarji ko kuro lekhna tyo ghatanama samlagna ek mukya patrale malai banchit gari rahe chha....aba tyo bandhan bata malai mukta nagare samma tyo ghatana ma bata chahi prakas ma aauna nasakne sthitima kewal man ma matri simit huna pugeko chha...heram bandhan kahile samma baidh hune ho....
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| Prem Charo |
Posted
on 22-Feb-03 08:08 PM
Deep,
Good one !! Go for another one :) Enjoyed it .
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| deep |
Posted
on 23-Feb-03 11:35 AM
Prem charo,
kya khatti rupantar re chha la yo love bird ko....
will go for another one soon....
Soon bhanda yaad aayo...
jay nepal ma hunthyo poaster ma taseko kahile kahi chadai aaudai chha bhanera kahile ta 6 mahina samma ni tyai poster hunthyo comming soon bhanne....kahile ta comming soon aaudai aaudaina thyo bhanya....
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| sparsha |
Posted
on 23-Feb-03 03:46 PM
Yo hero katai Dhumbassji ta haina?
Dhumbassji ko mamaghar ho ki ke ho Biratnagar tira bhanne suneko thiye...ki halla matrai ho ki?
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