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| jira |
Posted
on 08-Mar-03 05:13 PM
Amidst the beauty of sajha
I grew up with my own bull's eyes
big, brown and vicious
but calm and quite and yet to fetch
galloping the cloud of dust
I ve seen enough
with one eye, two eyes, three and four
All the more, I was beautified and nortured
sometimes even tortured
Though my other side contradicts
I am as hallow as jira
Please do not put me in frying pan
Instead, catch me if you can
PS:
Mari jaam..sarrai garho bho yati lekhna......sabbai poet harulai noble puraskaar dinu parcha jasto lagyo last ko line siddhyawunda samma ta........nasakni kuro garna nahuni raicha.
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| vivid |
Posted
on 08-Mar-03 05:23 PM
Ke ho ke,
Ajhkal kina hola sajha lai 'catch me if you can' rog lagya???
PP ji dekhi Jira ji sabai lai,
PC ji dekhi TD ji samet lai,
Lau ta uso bhaye mai pani thapi diun kyare,
Catch me if you can!
:DDDD
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| sajan |
Posted
on 08-Mar-03 09:44 PM
Exuberant stanzas Jira Jee ! Seems you have expressed your past and present experience of sajha .....as a tiny but fantastic poem..
Keep it up !
Sajan
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