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| DHUMBASSE |
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on 14-Mar-03 09:20 AM
I apologize to those who find it hard and tedious to read Romanized Nepali. I tried to tanslate in English but the charm was gone. So enjoy please:
Prakash ka aankha bata balindra dhara aashu bagiraheka chan Saptakoshi banera aaja. Jatti thamna khojda pani rokinnan. Aaja uslai marna man lageko cha. Yeso tyo sano , andhyaro jailko kotha ma charaitira herda kehi pani bhetdaina, aafu shibaya. Sunya man liyera pheri yeuta kunama kupriyera basna jancha, lamo sas pherdai. Ani pheri jaryak juruk uthera ti phalame chad haru bata bahira halltira hercha “ Aama!! Aaama!!” bhancha nathakunjel. Thake pachi pheri sustari tehi kunama gayera bascha. Aba ta yo usko dincharya banisakeko thiyo. Aaja yek hapta bhayo u yo mamako gharma ayeko.
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Sat din aghi kathamndu ko yeuta gharma thulo Lagu padartha ko bhandar bhayeko shankama policele chapa marda tyo gharbata aru dash jana sahit prakash pani jail pareko thiyo. U nashama chur bhayeko hunale uslai tyetti sarhai yad chaina, tara “la hid ma***ni Junkie! Sale! Desh Bigara!! naylayk” bhandai police le hathkadi lagayera dhakaleko ali ali samjhincha. Purna ruple hosh samhalda usle aafulai tyo chiso jailko kothama payo. jailma pareko pahilo din ta sabaijana u sangai yeutai kothama thiye, tara bistarai sabiajana yek yek gardai niskera gaisakeka thiye ahile samma. Kasaika swashni aaye linalai kasiaka dai , kasaika bhai aaye ta kasaika bau. Ahile samma pani uslai chutauna kohi aayenan. Uski yeuti aafno bhanne budhi aama thiyin. Aaama pani aainan uslai chutauana. Tara kina ho kunni kata kata bhitra usko manma “ aama ta pakkai aaunchin “ bhanne lageko thiyo ra tehi aashama u ghari gahri tyo hall bahira tira herne garthyo , sano bhanda sano paiala chaelko aawaj sangai.
Yo usko pahilo patak thiyena jail yatra. Pahila pani katti patak jail parda uslai chutauna uski aama aayeki thiyin, gahabhari aashu pardai. Ani ghar pugne bittikai usle aamako naramo thappad ra gali khanthyo.Pachi samaya bitdai janda rausko jail- bhraman badhdai janda aamale kehi pani bhanna chodeki thiyin. Khali chutauan aaunthin, tetti ho. Yo bhanda pahilo patak chai usle aafni aama sanga kasam khayeko thiyo, “ malai maaf gara aama. Aaba dekhi ma yesto garne chaina. Ma timilai dukha dine chaina. Ma timro aashu puchne ramro choro hunechu. Ma timilai ramrari palera rakhne chu”, aadi ityadi.
Prakash ka babu thula nam chaleka bidwan, rastra bhakta, samaj-sewi thiye. Samaj sewi bhayekai karanle nam pani khubai kamayeka thiye, dam tetti kamauna nasake pani. Tara pani gharma napugdo kehi thiyena, Grihalaxzmi jasti patniko karanle. Saha garera puryaune, ra purayera kam chalunama uni shipalu thiyin. Tesaaile yeklo choro prakashko hurkai- badhai sathai padahi ma unle kunai kami aauna diyeki thiyinan. Praksah pani jehendar bidyarthi thiyo. Sabaile man paraune. SLCma first division ma pass garea u college ma padhdai thiyo, jaha bata usko kulat shuru bhayo.Sathiharuko sanga lagera churot, churot pachi Ganja, ganja pachi Jad, Jad pachi ahile aayera SMACK ko addict baneko thiyo prakash. Uska babu 6 barsha aghi samaj sewako kramma yeuta anakantar gauma safa khane- pani ko yojana liyera gayeka thiye. Pharkera aaunda uni chadeko sano plane crash bhayo ra uni pani plane sangai crash bhayeka thiye. Tara jyudo chunajel, Samaj-Sewa, Nam , Ijjat, Pratishtha nai unka lagi sarbaswho thiye. Ghar herne kam Prakashki aamale garthin. Prakashka babu khali kamaune , ani samaj sewa garne. Mahinako shuruma jatti kamayeo sabai leryaera” la budhi! Lau !” bhanera prakash ki aamako poltama halidinthe. Chorako padhai ra bhabisya bhanda aafno nam pyaro thiyo unlai.
Kramasha:
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| DHUMBASSE |
Posted
on 14-Mar-03 10:30 AM
“Yeklo chorolai kehi kam huna dinna. Mero budeshkalko lathi ho yo. Yesle malai palcha ma budhi bhaye pachi, sahara dincha. Yo bina mero kohi pani chaina.” bhanera Prakashki aamale char- chimekko dhanda garera padhayeki thiyin, Prakasahlai, uska babu mare pachi. Prakash ko kulat ko barema unali kamai tha thiyo. “Choro padhna gayeko cha” bhanthin, beluka pani bhancha kurera basthin. choro aauthyo, smackko nashama , “ malai aaja bhok chaina, ma sutna janchu” bhanera janthyo u chahi aafno kotha tira. Uni pani “ la thikai cha, choro thakecha aaja” bhanera bhokai sutna janthin. Rati yekkasi chorako kotha bata aawaj aauthyo “ waaaaaaaaaka !! waaaaaa! Waaakkka!!”. Ke bhayo yeslai , khanai nakhai ke ko banta garcha bhanea herna janthin. “ Babu talai sanchai ta cha” bhandai, satarkata satha bhuima chariyeko bantalai kulchinabata bachdai. U chai bhanthyo “malai sancho chaina aaja”. Bholi palta u bahira gaye pachi aama gayera sohorthin tyo phohor. Hare!! aamako man.
Yebam kramle din bitdai gaye, choro smack ko jalma rumallina thaleko unle thaha nai painan. Sojhi , dharmatma man, naramro ta sochani sakdina thin.Bichari aama ko man na ho. Uta choroko halat din pratidin bigridai gayo, collegeko padhai sab chaupat. aamali jhuth bolera “ ma ta aba B.A. padhdaichu” bhanthyo. Panch (5) class samma matra padheki Amako man kalapanako ghyu sanga molera laddu khanthyo, “ Aha ! mero choro!!” Bhanera.
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Aja yek hapta ko din, aama ainan din bhari, uslai linalai. Ke garau ra kaso garau bhanera chatpatai rahyo. Man manai bhakal garyo “ He Mankamana mai!! yespala chutna paye dekhi ta ma smack chunna, he Dackchinkali mata, mero aamali chittai pathai deu, ma yeuta singai boka chadhauchu timilai”. Ani dui hat jorera kothako chanatira herthyo ra prarhtana garythyo, “ hey Bhole nath,! He bhagwan pashu pati nath, Timrai prasad bhanera khayeko, kina mero aaja yo durdasha. Kasta kasta junkie haru chahi ghumera hidne swaccha hawa khayera, ma chahi kina yeha. Prabho!! malai nikala yo dal- dalbata. Meri aamalai chitai pathai deu.”. tara pani uski aama aainan.
Bihan diuso ma badliyo, diuso sajhama, uska sampurna prarthana ra bhakal haruko prabhab kehi parena. Aba ta uslai rish po uthna thalyo sabai sanga. Debi deuta sanga pani. “ Ma****ni Gajadi deuta ko ke bharosha, aafai tanna tanera utaano parera swashni chyapdai thik cha. Kasto deuta hamro pani, gajadi re, smackist re, smack bhanda kada sarpako bish khana sakne , testo junkie lai ke prarthana garai bho. Hos” ani tyai kunama pheri kupro parera basna gayo. Uska nak bata singan bagiraheko thiyo rugha lage jhai, dhad dhukheko thiyo naramro sanga. “ Cold turkey bhaneko yehi hola, maile kahile bhaogeko thiyina, kasto pet batariyo” bhanthyo, ani lampasar parera sutna khojthyo, tara sakdainathyo. Yestai prakarle sajha pani paryo ani bistarai dina rat ma badlina thalyo. Kaso kaso nidayecha prakash ta.
Kramasha:
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| DHUMBASSE |
Posted
on 14-Mar-03 10:45 AM
Bartamanma usko balla balla jhapkeko nindra bhanga garyo karkash aawajle “ye uth! Ye M*** gadha jankie! Uth”. Anyamanaska bhable usle aankha kholera heryo. Hawaldar usko kotha ko dhoka nirai ubhiyera uslai bolai raheko raicha. U bistarai sukera jarjar bhayeko sharirlai uthaudai phalame gatetira lamkiyo. Hawaldarlai ghurera heryo, manau tyo hawaldar usko smackko dose hos. Hwaldarle halltira isahra garyo. Uski aama ubhiyeki raichan hallma . Praksahko mukha paralko aago jhai dhappakka balyo ra nibhyo pani. Tauko antai ghumyo, lazle. Ani pheri pharkera heryo aamatira bali dina tayar pareko boka jhai dayaniya aankhale. Uska aankha rasayera aaye. Gala rata bhaye. Boli banda bho. Sharirma kada umre. Bijulika taranaga haru pahilina thale sharir bhari. Usle hasne jhino prayatna garyo. Prakash ki aama jailko tyo sano kotha tira laskina thalin. Usko anuhar ujyaliyo. Harshaka aashu bagna thale uska aankha bata. Usle dubai hat ti phalame chadbata chiryaera phailyao. Uski aama Praksha tira badhi nai raihin.
Karib dash feet jatti durima Prakashki aama takka adin. Prakashlai siyo bhanda tichna najarle herin tal dekhi mathi samma . Prakashaka aankhaharu judhe uski aamaka aankha sanga. U thararara kapyo. Aamako mukh-mandalma kunai chinta ,bishad, harsha, bismat dekhinna thiyo. Khapna nasakera usle antai heryo , aamale sariko sapkole mukh chopin.
Ani yeso pharekra pheri heryo aamatira, aama ta bistarai pharakka pharkera jata bata aayeko tetai hidna thalin. Prakashlai aachamma lagyo. Dash thari shanka ra upashanka yekaichoti kude uska dimagma, mriga ka bacha haru banma kude jhai. Usle aamalai bolauna khojyo, bakya phutenan. Pheri pani koshish garyo , tai pani kyai aawaj niskena. Uski aama hidinai rahin, bistarai, singhiniko challe; bistarai , bistarai. Usle bal garera chichyauna khojyo, sano swarma “ Aama!!” bhanna sakyo. Aamale pharekera pani herinan. Aama bistarai ojhelma pardai gayin. U hereko heryai bhayo.
Sampurna sharirko tagat kendrit garera usle nwaran dekhiko bal jhikera bolayo aama lai,
“ Amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!”
Aama gai sakeki thin. Uskai aafanai pratidhwani ti nirjib jailka bhitta haruma thokkiyera pheri uskai thokkina aai puge……
“ Aamaaa! Aamaaa! Aamaaa! Aaamaaa! Aaamaa!”
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| DHUMBASSE |
Posted
on 14-Mar-03 12:37 PM
This story I wrote above is an old one written in1988. It was not cosidered as an agreeeable piece to publish and thus was never published anywhere then. Later I found out the so called " some reason ' was nothing but the description of "Prakash's family".
So here it is for everyone.It might feel a little Outdated, but thinking "aamako man ta kahile pani outdated hundaina ni", I had to post it here.Besides I had to post something today.
bhanne lai phoolko mala
sunnelai sunko mala
yo katha jata bata aayeko ho tetai jala
chahiyeko belama pheri pharkera yetai aaula
thank you those who read for theie time.
Peace :)
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| Trikal |
Posted
on 14-Mar-03 01:10 PM
Dhambouji,
Very touchy !! Wonderful and pragmatic writing!!
Aba sachhai nai Prakash le smack khana chodlaa ta ?
Aru pani jaawos. I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you.
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| jira |
Posted
on 14-Mar-03 03:04 PM
Dhumba lay pheri kya diyecha...aja ayera . Auni prakashey ko aama linnai naaie gai ta?
Ki tyo chai "Mummy returns" part II ma ho?
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| DHUMBASSE |
Posted
on 14-Mar-03 03:45 PM
Tyo katha ta siddhi halyo ni...pachi samma prakashe le smack khai nai rahyo re ani uski aama chai kathmandu chodera unko maita purba nepal tira gain re...kya jhan lastma ..
thanks hai Jira and trikal!! hehe..aru pani aauncha ..tara aba chahi ma bistarai post garchu..Jamaika ko hawa khayera ali freash bhai halau pahila..hoina..kamma ryag bhai ra cha bhnya aajkal..ke bhanne...
I will write later..:)
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| rajunpl |
Posted
on 15-Mar-03 04:18 AM
khatraaaaaaaaaaaa chha bro
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